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The Oriflamme


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Scootaloo has been trapped in the same world over and over again--the three months before the Grand Galloping Gala makes its arrival. In the time before, Scootaloo has somehow managed to die, over, and over, and over again. She has a hundred times, in fact. Neither her, nor her friend in the world between worlds knows what is happening, or why anyone would want to kill Scootaloo. After a pep talk from her friend on the 'other side', as we'll call it, Scootaloo decides to life another go.

Cover image by Bocian3000

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )

Big block 'o text; A liiiitlle rushed here and there; has potential.

Hmm, I'll track but I'm not sure what to make of it yet.

Sounds like kenny from south park. (Only read the description, have a fave, I'll read it later) :rainbowwild:

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Yeah, that block of text should be broken up a bit; if only to be easier on the eyes.

Also, after reading the description, I was hoping that this story would be a dark comedy, where every chapter ends with Scootaloo dying in unique and hilarious ways. Of course, she'd be back to life at the start of the next chapter, and no one would remember a thing.

Or maybe a Groundhog Day type loop where Scootaloo keeps dying - albeit, in different ways each time - and she has to figure out how to stop dying. Or even going over the canonical episodes only to have them all end in Scootaloo's death.

I realize now that's not what this story is, though. Aww, well. Maybe this'll be interesting, too. Though, so far I must say I haven't seen much to get me to stick around... Then again, this is only the first chapter, and it's very short, so maybe things will pick up shortly. :twilightblush: Good luck.

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That's what I was expecting, too, but you worded it better than I could.
Still has potential, though.

Made an account to inquire:
Shadow of Destiny (Shadow of Memories/Shadow of Fate if you are outside North America)
or
Higurashi no Naku Koro ni

1262746 1262340 Block of text? *looks at story* ...Nuts. I'll fix that, thanks for the heads up! Also, it is intended to be like Groundhog Day, and I intend to make a prequel to this detailing a few of the ways Scootaloo has died. At least, if I can think of anything good or something that's not cliche. And yeah, she knows how she dies, but she's not able to stop it from happening.

1263537 Uh-oh, you caught me! Yes, I got the inspiration from Higurashi, of which I am a huge fan.

Thanks for all your comments and faves!

>>NamonosSchwarz It was an amazing anime. Even the joke third season was awesome.

I get the feeling that a few of the times she died/will die she was just mucking about thinking 'I'm just going to die and get resurrected anyway... let's do things I normally wouldn't have the guts to try!'

1265277 And he wanted to com=ntinue it from my higurashi story on here that was kinda a big fail.

That description and that adorably cute Scootaloo picture gives me high hopes. ONWARDS TO READING! :scootangel:

man, I really miss this story. I miss the author of this story too. Did I mention that I love this story?

I love this story.

I'm half-expecting a jet engine to fall through the roof!

I enjoyed that quite a bit, can't wait to see where this goes!

Yep another dead fic that I find that was good :ajsleepy: Just my luck:ajbemused:

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