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Warpony 249

Joined February 2012
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    Warpony's Stories (2)

    • Harmonic Hero: The Twilight Knight
      A young man plays a game based off everyone's favorite show.

      10,363 words · 263 views · 33 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Don't Step on a Rune.
      A human, Rune magic and enemies. This is the story of Mythic (Daniel) Rune, the human and the Mystic
      150,640 words · 2,474 views · 142 likes · 27 dislikes

    In the near future when virtually reality technology is perfected, it is used in a number of ways. The most popular and enjoyable use is for playing games. One game though stands on top of the rest, Harmonic Heroes. This action packed online game swept the world off it's feet with it's design, graphics and story telling. Though, despite it's fame in some circles, a few have never heard about it. One such person is a young man named Axle. This young man joins the game about a year after it is release to the public. Once he begins, he sees this game is more than just that. It is a world in and of itself. But he is still a 'Fresh Hay', as some say. With a special power, he may be able to pull some tricks off.

    (Currently looking for better cover art.)

    First Published
    12th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    27th Apr 2013

    Comments ( 16 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I'll be looking forward for more chapters to come ;)

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Great work so far! I'll be looking forward for more!

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hm this looks rather interesting, keep up the good work.

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    .Hack kind of story?

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I think you do need some better cover art. This one looks like logo of a antivirus software.

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1426359 I can see what you mean, though I do like it for now. I am looking for an artist though.

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Dude, now I'm sad this isn't a real game.

    #8 · Chapter 3 · 30w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ... Well then.

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 30w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well... lots of action then.

    #10 · Chapter 4 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Having a feeling I may want to open this world up for others. But way later in the timeline. Also thought of a new ending to the whole thing...Dear God I'm Good.

    #11 · Chapter 4 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ...i realy want a game like this to exist now......

    #12 · Chapter 4 · 20w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I like the concept, keep it up!

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 4w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Very Nice.

    #14 · Chapter 5 · 4w, 7h ago · · ·
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    Re-read this chapter. There is a mistake in the beginning. You repeated the first few paragraphs.

    #15 · Chapter 5 · 4w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>2492469

    So embarrassing.

    #16 · Chapter 5 · 3w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>2492556

    If you wanted, I could pre-read the chapters before you post them. To make sure there aren't any mistakes.

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