If anyone hasn't figured it out yet. I love that picture of Lyra.

>>12561931256193

I must agree with you, though other parts of my brain disagree; oh the controversy!

i like it,fair amount of emotion without dragging it out too much. well done

Almost jizzed my pants.

Image: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lhysi20D2e1qbgvgt.bmp

This is quite possibly your greatest work by far, good sir. I look forward to even better fics from you in the future.

welp I WANNA BANG LYRA MORE DAMN IM A DIRTY PONY FUCKER

that was wonderful I love it when Lyra loves humans, but lately most people have been making her a complete psycho when she sees a human and that drives me nuts.

That was rather enjoyable good sir, well done.

>>12575691257569 we all know that feeling bro

>>12575531257553 I see what you did there EXOLIEF

>>12576451257645

Shh, let the people praise A Brony Life 42 for the great writing that he's done.

The content was written nicely, but given the depth of emotion and attachment the characters were mentioning, the story being a "it's only clop, just clop" ended up hurting it.

What I mean by this is: Lyra is supposed to have gone an entire year dating this guy and only pecked (kissed) him the once, two weeks before, but suddenly she's being seductive and even comes out with a vibrator in her. If we had seen more of a build up or knew more about these characters then that kind of sexiness from the 'supposedly' (I say this as we only have the hearsay of a character to go by) shy mare would have had a lot of impact, but as we didn't, it lost all of it's effect.

So, it didn't earn a mark down but it's not something I'd mention to anyone and couldn't find the desire to consider marking it up. The words all flowed together, and the concept as a story is good, but the story was just meh overall.

>>12576681257668

This comment is perfect and I completely agree with it. *shakes hand*

Image: http://i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/225/378/sweetie%20belle%20that%20is%20beautiful.jpg

I like it.

>>12576521257652 And thus ends the overly modest EXOLIEF

>>12561931256193

You sir are one of the best clop scene writers although now it wont shut up... Down boy, down

Human tag? There ain't one

Image: http://www.google.com/imgres?hl=en&biw=1600&bih=805&tbm=isch&tbnid=YjSRhn5jHkOSkM:&imgrefurl=http://www.ponyfictionarchive.net/forum/viewtopic.php%3Ff%3D7%26t%3D207&docid=BO-AF1keOs3mKM&imgurl=http://ponyfictionarchive.net/images/gallery/galleries/Macros%252520-%252520Applejack/applejack%252520bueno.jpg&w=292&h=321&ei=CkpPUPPlJI2A0AGFg4GYBw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=507&vpy=131&dur=1440&hovh=235&hovw=214&tx=95&ty=91&sig=105246875882791198428&page=1&tbnh=143&tbnw=131&start=0&ndsp=32&ved=1t:429,r:2,s:0,i:79

love it, that is all

>>12582521258252

The guy she's with is human. Probably the biggest giveaway is the mentioning of fingers a few times.

>>12575031257503 My mind as already gotten over those parts.

>>12575261257526 That's what we intended. EXOLIEF is good with stuff like that

>>12575351257535 Almost!? I did good, sir.

>>12575691257569 Hey they say dreams can come true.

>>12576311257631 Please do give EXOLIEF credit for this also. The man knows his stuff.

>>12576251257625 Yeah, I know the feeling. She one of my favorite. That's probably why I had a dream about her.

>>12576451257645 I wasn't going to say no, soooo.   EXOLIEF is my homey.

>>12577221257722 Yes, praise EXOLIEF for his writing.

>>12578731257873 Ah, Well you should be telling that to EXOLIEF.

>>12582521258252 My bad bro. fixed it

>>12583821258382 Crazy dream, right?

*taking an innocent stroll and whistling*

Hhhmmmm. Know what? I have never realy given clop a chance..... Maybe I should just to understand those who enjoy it. I mean, they aren't bad people like some of my friends think. They just enjoy something different! Love and tolerate and all that jazz

*goes to computer and goes to fimfiction*

Oh hey look! There's one in the featured box. If I'm gunna read clop for the first time it might as well be one that got featured.

*clicks*

...............

*sees cover*

............................

*reads summary*

.............................................

*reads all the comments first*

..............................................................

*reads first couple of lines*

Nnnnnope......

*slowly turns off computer and walks away*

Sorry dude just can't bring myself to read it. No offense intended............

>>12585251258525 Totally understand dude.

Quite an amazing clop you've got there!  And agreed - best Lyra pic ever.

Only quibble was this line: "Regardless of any preparation she might have done, Lyra was just too tight for you", which came right after "You slipped in two fingers, then three, then four" - so she's too tight immediately after you've all but fisted her?  Now that's elastic!

MOAR!!!!!FOR THE GOOD LOVE FO GOD!FUCKING M OAR!I WANT MOAR!NOW!MMMMO0O0AR!

>>12586321258632 Don't you worry good, sir. I have an Octavia fic cooking, it'll be done soon.

>>12586391258639

PRAISE YOU!

>>12584781258478

Not even 12 hours have passed since I read this, and you get featured.

Image: http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/041/380/a32a3b9c-0e1b-4f66-ab4f-b66a7d1eb134.jpg

For some reason I am just feeling awesome.

I read this without even getting a boner.But it was still great.

>>12586811258681 Hell yeah. Why shouldn't ya be?

>>12584781258478

You, sir, are a butt.

>>12585551258555

I think I was making a joke, but I can't remember what it was

Sorry 'bout that.

>>12586461258646

Yeah, and it's actually going to be written by him instead of me

>>12586811258681

BAHAHAHA! I was joking about this and it ended up happening anyway!

>>12587811258781 I love you EXO. Why you make my dreams come true?

I'll be in my bunk.

I am just going to pretend he wasn... aw buck this. This is:

Image: http://static.blol.me/photos/1276206520517.jpg

>>12589081258908 We are so perverted, and I LOVE IT.

Classy music for a classy story:

>>12589321258932 Hmmmm I like it good sir.

>>12589151258915

thou have no idea

Image: http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs51/f/2009/289/c/6/Epic_Motivation_by_Zylo_the_Wolfbane.jpg

Certainly a fantastic read.

Good work mate!

Now, back to my own story...121 Chapters down and several to go...

>>12590671259067 I enjoy that picture.

And thanks.

All I have to say is, Me gusta

>>12591031259103  Indeed.

Image: http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/295/1/3/bran_new_love_song_by_swaetshrit-d4dna4t.jpg

>>12591451259145

DUDE THAT PICTURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That's the most epic thing I've ever seen! Love it!

>>12591541259154 Awesome. I had a feeling you would like it.

>>12561931256193

Well, I'm never one to turn down a good story and this does seem intriguing if not a bit well...Sexy

THE GREAT AND POWERFUL MADARA APPROVES

No! I will read this! No more running! So What if it's too... Dare I say it- raunchy? I can always throw up later in the confines of my room. Giving this a  try now.

Looks like that story picture was drawn by the guy who made Coffee Bean and whatnot.... can't say I like the other drawings, but this Lyra.... well I like how she looks.  

I SHALL ENJOY THIS, I SHALL PLEASE LYRA AND HER HAND FETISH!

Whoooooooooooooo

*Falls out of chair, foot twitches*

I really wish I didn't read this. DAMN YOU CURIOSITY!!

My reactions...

Before-

During-

After-

Good story bro. Exolief does it again

>>12581258

POOT POOT THE POOTTRAIN IS COMING TO GET YOU IF YOU LIE

The pic alone made me want to read this.

Damn it!  I shouldn't love clop this much but......this one is awesome

Epic story for that epic picture, i loved it, not too much emotion and not too much description...you should make more of these

You deserve a round or five of applause.

I got a weird feeling while reading this, a good feeling where the sun doesn't shine, if ya know what I mean.

I literaly just caught this by the feature box.

Nice damn work, man. This is really well done.

>>12576311257631

Well you would really hate y works then good sir. She is a bit psychotic in them haha

>>12584531258453 well yup that's me my nose shooting a gallon of blood per second which is impossible but it happens

I dunno why this shit was featured. It's just a clopfic that isn't as chock-full of errors as most of 'em.

...And anyone who enjoys the 'emotional content' of this story obviously has never been off their computer long enough to interact with other human beings, let alone a girl.

tl;dr: This is just another boring, overly sappy clopfic, that honestly doesn't deserve that feature, considering all the good fics out there.

Gratz on the feature! I'll read this soon ^.^

>>12591781259178 Your approval makes us happy, good sir.

>>12591791259179 And what did you think?

>>12592151259215 And did you enjoy this as well?

>>12592171259217 A Sexy Lyra is sexy

>>12592771259277 Well falling out of your chair means you climaxed, so good job.

>>12592931259293 He's a good man.

>>12593601259360 Yeah I know what your talking about.

>>12594401259440 Hell yeah, Do praise EXOLIEF as well. When you can.

>>12594521259452 I plane to make do one with Octavia, soon.

>>12595411259541 Thanks, Do go to EXOLIEF's page and praise him for this talents.

>>12596051259605 Who doesn't?

>>12596391259639 Without EXO it wouldn't have been that good.

>>12599141259914 Octavia fic will come out soon. I will be doing it by myself. Let's see if I can do just as well without EXO.

I dont even know what the feeling is... Someone explain please?

>>12604271260427 :l :no comment:

>>12604821260482 It's a long stiffening feeling from below. You may not understand it now, but one day, good sir. One day. All jokes aside. I'm guessing you enjoyed it?

Nicely done, would like a little more back story but feel that overall the story worked nicely.

And is it wrong that that drawing of Lyra is giving me dirty thoughts?

Please explain the feeling? Please please pleassseee? btw Yes, I loved it

Nice clop. Not too bad.

So that was one of the two clopfics you had told me about.  Very enjoyable!  Have a thumb and a fav!

Lyra Approves!

Image: http://cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-lclap.png

Now my crush on Lyra is getting stronger.  I just may have to move my in-depth Lyra fic higher up on my fic queue.  Thought it still needs more planning.

Edit: Oh and Gratz on getting featured! It's a fun feeling...isn't it?!

>>12605101260510 No, there is nothing wrong with that, my man.

>>12605191260519 It's your anatomy. How should I know? EXOLIEF is glad.

>>12605261260526 Thanks.

>>12605451260545 Yes, though this was all EXOLIEF on this. He just helped a dream I had into writing. It has inspired me to write 2nd person fics. The next one with Octavia will be done by myself. I hope it'll be just as good, if not better.

Image: http://th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/323/1/4/octavia_by_iopichio-d4gnzb8.jpg

>>12605961260596 Yeah! I mean it's no Xenophilia, but hell. It was kinda hot.

Waiting on that Octavia clop~!

>>12605961260596

Oh, so I didn't miss the ones you were working on.  Cuz you said you wanted me to look over them for you.  If you still do, I'll definitely be looking forward to what you come up with!

Image: http://cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-oclap.png

>>12606451260645

I will definitely let you know when I am finished.   

>>12606101260610

Oh yeah, I don't I'll ever get to Xenophillia's level. That's a beautiful fic.

>>12606901260690 Me neither... Oh well.

Hehe, that whole fic is my headcanon.

this is one of the best ive ever read :D

Octavia? YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good story

What would the kid of a pony and human look like?

Hmmm lets see, ponies, awesome picture, and 2nd person sex. yup I'm sold

>>12604271260427

You...

Yeesh, I can't even be modest when you keep sending praise my way

>>12605451260545

I know I gave this to Brony to post so he would get popularity, but I'm jealous now that you like this when I wrote it. Not gonna lie

>>12608531260853

It wouldn't look like anything because that's physically impossible.

And overall, thanks for all the kind words, guys and gals! I hope you guys will like the clopfics that I actually put EFFORT into when I release them instead of giving them to Drew for his own whirlwind success

>>12609841260984 well we didn't even know that it would get popular.

>>12609841260984

No need to be jealous...I salute you for this very impressive fic!  I'll have to take Brony's advice and check out your stories as well!

Image: http://cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-thappy.png

A very nice fic. While it focused mostly on the sex, I guess that's what we all came for. Pun not intended.

It could have been longer, of course, including things like how you met Lyra, and how you wound up living with her (and what that was like). But aside from that it does its job as a Cloppy. Well done!

>>12610101261010

*squees*

I sure hope so. I haven't even written anything impressive yet. I have something I've been working on for a few months and people seem to enjoy and something I crapped out in 45 minutes for a friend of mine but decided to post.

It figures that the one I decided NOT to post and to just give to Brony would get overwhelmingly popular.

>>12587781258778

Don't feed the ego!!!  It might inspire me to try my hoof at fan fiction, and being an engineer, nobody would benefit from that.  Few people enjoy integrals in the middle of a story.  

>>12610761261076

I just added you to my watch list!  When I have a chance, I'll check out some of your stories!   And you should feel honored!  >>12610751261075 has commented on this story you shared with >>12609991260999... Crowley is like only one of the biggest 2nd person clopfic writers on FIMfiction!  In fact, his Spa pony fic "A Lover's Choice" offered some unqiue insight for my spa pony fic "More Than Their Customer".  Now if only my next fic starring Nurse Redheart can do as well.  

How do i say this... I liked the story, but at the same time i think you waisted it.

If you had streatched this out a bit and given the characters some deveopment it could of been a LOT better, but at the same time as it is theres nothing really wrong with it. I can't bring myself to thumbs up this, but i liked it enough to tell you it was good. Hope that gets my point across.

>>12611551261155

What!? But- But I- You- You can't...Haaaah.

>>12610751261075 Thank you, sir. Though please do give the credit to EXOLIEF. He did the writing,

but I will be writing my very own with an actual storyline, soon enough

>>12611761261176

Huh?  I can't what? I feel very confused now.  

Image: http://cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-tderp.png

>>12604271260427 Well, don't take it personally. This isn't my thing so... To put it nicely, my back button became my best friend VERY quickly.

I'm gonna read this sometime, and LOVE the image!

>>12613191261319 I don't ever get offended by people who dislike of clop, bro. lol

>>12613801261380 I bet you will.

>>12614971261497 Hey, at least you write well. I wouldn't mind reading a regular fic  from you.

>>12615701261570 I don't really have any. This was EXOLIEF's writing.

>>12612081261208 Good job.

>>12611591261159 Understandable, my friend. This is the beginning of more refined 2nd person clopfics. This was just EXOLIEF and I messing around. Never thought it would be featured.