Is this based off of Sex and the City? If so, this is

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Good God, this was British.

And now some constructive advice:

You didn't describe what any of them are like.  Rarity we know, but who are the rest?

A nice wrap-up to the chapter, but it doesn't give us something to yearn for in the next.  Okay, she got in.  Now what?

Your grammar and spelling are very good.

The story description was a little long.  Try to avoid making readers click the "more" button.

Overall, a fine first story.  I'll hang around for a while and see how it goes.

Thanks for the comments. We're working on the first chapter and we'll take your advice into account :)