The day had scarcely begun, and already, Twilight Sparkle and Applejack knew they were going to be busy. A couple for mere hours, they had already been forced to reveal their little secret when Spike walked in on them, and though he had promised not to speak of it until he had been told otherwise, both mares knew it was a race against time at this point. Regardless of what he had promised, Spike was rather talkative at times, and it was inevitable that he would eventually slip up - neither Twilight nor Applejack wanted that to happen until they had explained things on their terms.
After cleaning themselves up and instructing the baby dragon to simply take stock of things within the library, the unicorn and earth pony both departed. There were places to go and ponies to see, and it seemed as if there wasn't enough time to do either. It would all get done soon enough, however - for the time being, both ponies couldn't help but notice a change that had overcome the other. Each step was livelier than what it normally was, and both mares seemed to have a bounce to their step as they trotted through Ponyville. Now and then, their tails would playfully intertwine with one another, drawing faint smiles from one another.
"So... Twilight."
"So... Applejack."
"Is it jus' me, or is everythin' today jus' goin'... right? I mean, we've got each other. Things went over well with Spike."
The lavender mare giggled as she and Applejack continued to make their way through the town. "And the sun is out."
"That too. How do ya want this ta play out, Twi? I mean, we could gather all th' girls up an' tell 'em all at once, or we tell 'em one by one."
"Well..." Twilight briefly stepped to the side to avoid an oncoming cart and quickly returned to her spot beside Applejack. "At first I was thinking that we could just gather all of the girls together and tell them all at once."
The earth pony chuckled softly and peered at her companion. "I'm sensin' a 'But' there, Twi."
"...but I think we owe it to them to tell them one-on-one. I'm kinda worried, though."
"About?"
"Well... I know the girls are understanding and all, but... what if they aren't? What if they think we're weird for dating another mare, or for dating each other? Or what if-"
Twilight quickly found herself silenced and brought to a halt as Applejack stepped in front of her, standing in her path and staring her in the eye. "Twi, darlin'... I know this is still an awful lot ta think about. Shoot, it's an awful lot fer me too. But ya gotta remember, these are our girls we're talkin' about. Th' same ones we've both known fer well over two years. Th' same ones that've helped us take down Night Mare Moon an' Discord. I'm pretty sure they're gonna be fine with it."
"And... you're sure? I mean, you've known some of them longer than me."
"Positive. Jus' trust me, everything's gonna work out jus' fine." Applejack leaned forwards and gave the lavender mare a quick peck on the cheek before pulling back and smiling at her. "Now c'mon. It's almost lunch time, an' we haven't even started yet. Who do ya wanna tell first?"
The unicorn briefly blushed at the display of affection and smiled back. "Well, um... Rarity's pretty close, so I guess we can stop at the Boutique first."
"Perfect. If we get movin' now, we can probably tell her an' one of the others before noon. Ya need to stop stressin' out over this, Twi. Ya worry too much."
With an actual destination now in mind, the pair continued their walk through Ponyville, and Twilight Sparkle simply nodded as she looked back ahead.
"Yeah... maybe."
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"Sweetie Belle, be a dear and get the door for me. I'd do it myself, but... no no, that won't do at all..."
The filly quickly nodded and set down the cloth she had been holding, and she trotted over to the front door, opening it and peering up upon seeing the two ponies in front of her. "Oh. Hey Twilight and Applejack. Guessing you're here to see my sister."
Twilight Sparkle slowly nodded in return. "Uh... yeah. Is she busy right now?"
Another voice from within the Boutique quickly spoke up, and it was easily recognizable as belonging to Rarity. "Twilight, is that you, dear? Come in, please!"
Sweetie Belle pulled the door open and stepped to the side, watching in silence as the two mares walked past her. As she slowly shut the door, she quickly trotted off towards the kitchen - if anything, the sudden arrival of Twilight and Applejack would keep her sister busy, and that meant she wouldn't be working. Now was the perfect time for a snack.
As Twilight began to glance around the Boutique, Applejack walked up to Rarity's side and tilted her head. "Guessin' ya got an order, Rarity?"
"What? Oh, yes. Sweetie Belle's helping me for the day, though I suppose now would be as good a time as any to take a break." With a little help from her magic, the white unicorn quickly dragged a couch over and hopped upon it, smiling at her guests. "So what brings you two to my humble abode?"
"We uh... wanted ta talk to ya about somethin'. Ya got time?"
"Oh Applejack, please! You know I always have time for my friends. Have a seat, both of you! Plenty of room, after all!" Rarity continued to smile as she watched both Twilight and Applejack join her on the couch, and she cocked an eyebrow at them. "Now what did you need to tell me?"
"Well, it's... kinda important."
Twilight chimed in as well, tilting her head ever so slightly. "And also kinda big."
The white mare slowly waved a hoof. "No need to beat around the bush. Just tell me what's going on."
Both Twilight and Applejack exchanged glances, and the earth pony simply nodded at the lavender mare - it seemed Twilight was 'lucky' enough to get the first go. She quickly cleared her throat and then stared Rarity straight in the eye. "Rarity, Applejack and I have been doing some thinking..."
The earth pony quickly nodded. "An' we've been doin' some talkin'."
Twilight smiled and nodded at Applejack, and quickly returned her attention to Rarity. "And we're uh... kinda dating now."
For a moment, Rarity simply blinked at them, and glanced back and forth between the two of them. She slowly brought a hoof to her mouth, tears beginning to well up in her eyes, and her voice squeaked slightly as she spoke. "...r-really?"
"Is... that a bad thing, Rarity?" Twilight peered across the couch at Rarity, a look of concern upon her face, and the white unicorn suddenly burst into giggles.
"A... a bad thing? No! Goodness, no! It's just... I knew you had gone on that date with Applejack's brother, and I was... happy. I mean, to be perfectly honest, I never really expected you to ever go on a date with anypony." The lavender mare glared at her, and Rarity simply grinned in return. "And, well... I knew it apparently put Applejack in quite the foul mood, but I couldn't begin to understand why. But now I know, and... oh, I'm just so happy for the two of you!"
The white unicorn leaned over and pulled both of them into a hug with a strength that neither had expected out of the fashionista. With a smile upon her face, Applejack slowly raised her foreleg and gave Rarity's back a gentle pat. "Thanks, Rarity. Me an' Twi knew we needed to tell y'all, but we were kinda nervous."
"Ah, not a problem, Applejack!" Rarity released the both of them, and could barely contain her own fits of laughter as she continued. "Oh goodness, this is... I never really expected any of this. Good news is always appreciated, however, especially when my own friends are involved. I mean, I knew you two were spending an awful lot of time together after you got back from your little journey, but I never thought this sort of thing might happen. How long have the two of you been a couple, hm?"
Twilight Sparkle laughed nervously and rubbed a hoof against the back of her neck. "Well, we... both kinda confessed to each other just last night, and we agreed upon it too."
"Last night? But... that was Friday. Applejack, did things with you and Soarin' go sour?"
The earth pony slowly shook her head. "He was fine with it, Rarity. We talked fer a bit about dreams an' all, an' I knew I needed ta do it. So he jus'... let me go."
"Well, that was awfully sweet of him. It's rare to find a true gentleman these days... ah, and last night was the meteor shower too! I'll admit, if you two confessed to one another during that, I'm going to be a bit jealous..."
"We did, actually." Applejack glanced over towards Twilight, a faint smile upon her face, and Rarity broke out into giggles once more.
"Oh, you two are simply adorable! Confessing your deepest feelings to one another, all beneath a meteor shower... that's quite the romantic setting." Rarity began to grin and leaned over towards Twilight Sparkle, carefully eying the lavender mare. "...Twilight, did you plan all of that out for that very reason?"
She simply blushed in return and slowly nodded. "Um... yes."
"Twilight! We've known each other for over two years, and not once have you ever struck me as the romantic sort! I must say, I never thought you had it in you."
"Yes, well... I suppose we're all full of surprises, aren't we?"
"So it would seem. Are you two doing anything later tonight? Any big plans to celebrate?"
Applejack idly shrugged. "Don' think so. Me an' Twi were jus' sorta content to spend time together."
"Well, if you change your mind, just let me know. After I get these dresses out of the way, I was planning on unwinding with a bottle of wine. You two ought to come over!"
"We'll think about it, Rarity." Twilight Sparkle smiled and hopped off the couch, turning to face the white unicorn. "Looks like you're kinda busy anyway, so we won't keep you tied up. I... kinda think Sweetie Belle's ready to get back to work anyways."
Sure enough, Rarity's younger sister had walked up while the three of them had been tied up in their conversation, and none of them had even noticed until Twilight had pointed it out. The filly looked expectantly up at her elder sibling, and Rarity sighed and nodded. "Very well then. Back to the daily grind, I suppose. I appreciate you both stopping by and telling me - really. If you girls need anything else, don't hesitate to ask!"
Both Applejack and Twilight nodded in return and proceeded to the door, even as Rarity and Sweetie Belle returned to their work. The two mares let out a collective sigh as they stepped out the door to Rarity's Boutique and shut it behind themselves. So far, things had gone over very smoothly - both Spike and Rarity had accepted the news with little trouble at all. Two down, three to go.
With a faint smile on her face, Applejack turned to face Twilight as they began to trot through town once more. "Well, that went well. Who do you wanna tell next, Twi?"
"Uh... well, we've still gotta tell Pinkie, Fluttershy, and Rainbow. Sugarcube Corner is pretty close, so I guess we can go there next."
"Don' look now, but it looks like our job jus' got easier." Applejack briefly stopped to point a hoof forwards, and ahead of them stood a yellow pegasus. "'ey, Fluttershy!"
The yellow pegasus quickly looked up and glanced around for the source of the sound, and though it took her a bit to discover it, she smiled as she turned around. "Oh, hello girls. I'd stay and talk, but um... I really need to get back home."
"Guessin' yer busy, then?"
"Well, it was feeding time for the animals, but I ran out of food midway through, so I had to run down here to get some more. Like I said, I'd stay and talk, but I need to get back home so I can feed the others. You um... you understand, don't you?"
Twilight Sparkle smiled and nodded. "Of course we do! Are you gonna have free time later, though?"
Fluttershy placed a hoof to her chin and gently tapped it as she thought. "Well, after I put Angel Bunny down for his nap... I think I'll have some time. Maybe you could stop by then?"
"Perfect! We'll be sure to visit later." The yellow pegasus simply nodded in return and quickly continued her journey home, and both Applejack and Twilight waved as she disappeared into the distance. As soon as she had left their sight, the two ponies had promptly turned around and continued their trek once more. "So like I was saying... Sugarcube Corner seems close."
Applejack chuckled softly. "Tellin' Pinkie about all this is gonna be a hoot."
"Yep. And since I told Rarity, it's your turn to tell Pinkie."
"...aw ponyfeathers."
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Given the time of day, Sugarcube Corner was remarkably quiet. From the looks of it, the Cakes were completely gone, and if the lights hadn't been on, it would have been easy to assume that the store was closed. As Applejack nudged open the door, the first thing she caught sight of was Pinkie Pie, sitting behind the counter and idly drumming her hooves on the surface. She looked rather bored, which was a rare event itself, given how the pink earth pony typically acted.
Even as Twilight shut the door behind herself, Pinkie had yet to notice either of them, and Applejack coughed to catch her attention. The pink pony quickly looked up from the counter and began to grin upon catching sight of them. "Well hey, you two!"
Applejack grinned and waved in return, though it was largely pointless now that she had seen them. "Hey yerself. Seems awful quiet 'round here. Guessin' it's been a slow day?"
"Ugh. Yes." Pinkie flopped down onto the counter, her head resting against the side of the cash register. "The Cakes took the babies off to a play-date at the park, and it's been soooo slow. I've had maybe two customers show up the entire day."
"Ouch. Only two?"
"Yyyyep. What are you two doing here, anyways?" Pinkie Pie straightened up in her seat and propped herself up on her forelegs as she leaned on the counter. "I mean, I doubt you two are here to buy anything, probably because I could just make it for you and give it to you for-"
"Slow down there, Pinkie."
"But I didn't even say that much!"
"You were gonna. I know how ya are." The orange mare winked at her and took a seat upon the floor, settling down on her haunches. "Me an' Twi are jus' here ta talk."
"Talk, huh?" Pinkie Pie hopped off her stool and stepped out from behind the corner, and she quickly made her way to the front of the store. Before either Applejack or Twilight could say anything, the pink pony had already flipped the sign in the window from 'Open' to 'Closed', and the door had been locked. With that taken care of, Pinkie promptly took a seat in front of both of them. "If anypony yells at me, I'll just say I'm on lunch break. So, what's up?"
"...uh, well. We wanted ta talk to ya about somethin'."
"Oh! Ohh! Can we make it into a guessing game?"
Applejack gave a quick glance towards Twilight, and the unicorn simply shrugged in return. "I... guess we could do that, Pinkie."
"Woo! Okay, um... you said 'we', so does it involve both of you?"
"Yep."
"Does it... involve me?"
The orange earth pony nodded.
"Is it... about a birthday? One of your birthdays? Ooh, I love birthday parties!"
Twilight Sparkle let out a soft sigh. "No, Pinkie. We already celebrated my birthday, and Applejack's birthday isn't for a few more months."
"Oh." Pinkie Pie frowned slightly and tapped a hoof against the floor as she thought. "Is it... important?"
"Now yer on th' right track."
"Alright, umm... it involves the two of you and it involves me, aaaand it's important. Are you two going on another super-awesome adventure like last time, and I get to come with you?"
"Er... no, Pinkie. We aren' goin' on some 'super-awesome adventure'."
"...huh. Could've sworn that was it. You two are better at this than I thought." The pink earth pony began to hum to herself as she pondered her next move. "Okay, uhhh... I think I might need a hint."
"...a hint? Really?"
"Hey, this game is hard!"
"Alright, uh... lemme see what I could use for a hint." The orange earth pony began to look around the room, both to help her think and to help her find something to use as the potential hint. Her eyes eventually settled on one thing, and she began to grin. "Hey, Twi?"
The unicorn hadn't been paying complete attention to the conversation, and was still off in her own thoughts. She quickly snapped to attention and turned to face the source of the sound. "Yeah, Appleja-"
Before she could scarcely say another word, Applejack had already locked lips with her, and Pinkie Pie let out a quiet gasp as she watched on. It was a brief, albeit passionate kiss, and the orange mare soon broke away to face Pinkie Pie. "Good enough?"
"Not for me."
Applejack froze, and slowly turned to face back towards Twilight. A mischievous grin was plastered upon her face, and before the earth pony could even object, the unicorn had already toppled her over and pounced upon her. One kiss lead to another, which lead to another, and the two mares began to roll about on the floor as their emotions ran their course. Through it all, Pinkie Pie simply sat and watched in stunned silence, her mouth agape. Even as the minutes ticked by, there was only one thing Pinkie was ever able to say about what she was witnessing.
"...uhh. Wow. So, um... are you two dating or something?" Both Twilight and Applejack came to a halt, pulling away from one another to stare at the pink earth pony. Quickly realizing the error of her ways, Pinkie simply grinned back at them. "Well, if you two love birds ever need whipped cream, you know where to go!"
Twilight simply blinked up at her. "Whipped cream? But we're not making..."
"Um. Twi." A beet red Applejack leaned towards the unicorn and began to whisper into her ear. It didn't take long for her to begin blushing as well.
"Oh. OHHHHH."
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As the door swung shut behind them, Twilight Sparkle shook her head. "I can't believe we made out in front of Pinkie..."
"Hey, yer th' one that wanted more."
"Well, you're... uh... really persuasive sometimes."
Applejack sighed and turned to face Twilight as the two of them walked away from Sugarcube Corner. "Twi, I didn' even say anythin'."
"With the way you kissed, you didn't need to."
It was the earth pony's turn to blush, and Applejack briefly turned away from the lavender mare. "Quite the flatterer, ain'tcha?"
"Simply being honest, AJ." Twilight smiled faintly as she eyed her companion, and she soon came to a halt as they reached their next destination - the market. "It's almost noon, so I think now would be a good time to take a break. We can tell Fluttershy and Rainbow after we finish. Anything sound good to you, sugarcube?"
Applejack couldn't help but laugh - it still felt odd to be on the receiving end of a nickname she had created. She slowly shook her head as she glanced about the market. "I ain't that hungry, 'cause of breakfast an' all. Was thinkin' I might jus' get a snack or somethin'."
"Oh. Uh, well... I kinda wanted to get a sandwich or something. Do you just wanna split up, and we'll meet back here in an hour?"
"Sounds good, darlin'. See ya then."
The two mares gave each other a quick nose rub and went their separate ways, each of them eager to fill their bellies. As Twilight disappeared around a corner, Applejack couldn't help but look around the marketplace. She was here almost once a week, but that was typically so she could sell some of their stock - it was rare for her to even be here as a customer.
The earth pony soon found herself wandering past several fruit and vegetable stands, and contrary to what others may have though, she did indeed eat things besides apples. Bananas were a favorite of hers, but were rather difficult to open without magic. Strawberries and grapes, however, were much easier. She was browsing such a stand when her ears twitched, and she soon began to glance around. Somewhere amid the hustle and bustle, she recognized one of the voices, and it was one she had fervently hoped she would never hear again.
She pushed her way through the crowd, weaving in between ponies as she tracked down the source of the sound. She eventually reached a clearing, and sure enough, there he was, right beneath a tree. The stallion sported a light brown coat and light blue eyes, and a single orange was emblazoned upon his flank. He was currently in the midst of chatting with another mare, and already, Applejack began to feel her blood boil.
That son of a bitch! It's happenin' all over again, I jus' know it! Well it ain't gonna happen, not on mah watch!
"'ey, Midsweet!"
The stallion quickly spun around to face her, and he narrowed his eyes at the orange mare. "Who the hell are you, and how do you know my... you."
"Surprised ya still remember me, 'specially after everythin' ya put me through. I gotta say, yer a dumb son of a bitch if ya really think you can pull th' same stunt twice." Applejack felt herself begin to grin as she continued on her tirade - it felt good to finally get much of this off her chest. "So... what? Ya thought you could swindle me an' break mah heart, then skip town for four years, an' then you'd do it all over again?"
Not wanting trouble, the mare Midsweet had been talking with had already galloped off, leaving the two of them to talk by themselves. Midsweet slowly shook his head and smiled faintly at Applejack, and such a sight unnerved her. "Applejack, baby..."
"Don't you 'baby' me. Yer nothin' but scum, an' I want nothin' ta do with ya."
"Oh c'mon. Just think about all the good times we used to have. Hell, I could show you some of those things again..." He grinned and brushed a hoof against her cheek, which she angrily pushed away.
"Get yer damn hooves off me. I said I want nothin' ta do with ya. Besides, you were a lousy lover anyways."
Midsweet seemed taken aback by such a statement, and he glared at her. "But... but I made you-"
"Faked it. Ya always had such a fragile ego. I didn' wanna hurt ya or nothin'."
"You... I'll show you." Fury in his eyes, Midsweet stomped towards Applejack and roughly grabbed her by the tail as he attempted to drag her off. "You never said 'No' back then. Why say it now?"
Her patience long gone, Applejack quickly lashed out at him, kicking him in the side with her hindlegs. The stallion let go of her tail, recoiling and briefly touching a hoof to his side. An expression of pain upon his face made it evident that she had likely broken a rib or two, and she felt relatively pleased with herself - until he began to move once more.
"You... you BITCH!"
He moved with a speed that belied his size, and Applejack barely had time to react. In the few moments that followed, Midsweet unknowingly caused his own downfall.
Because she had heard.
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Finding a vendor that sold sandwiches was hardly a difficult thing to do within the marketplace. It was chock full of both tents and carts, all of which had a pony or two hawking their respective wares, and it was a simple matter of tracking down what one wanted. In this case, it was a daffodil sandwich - her favorite. Luckily for Twilight Sparkle, daffodil sandwiches were a common item, and so it hadn't taken long at all for her to get one.
With her sandwich floating by her side, Twilight found a quiet spot within the market and sat down, letting out a sigh before taking the first bite. Things had gone remarkably smooth thus far - Spike, Rarity, and Pinkie all knew what was going on now, and all of them approved. That was certainly good news. All that remained was to tell Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, and then they'd have to tell their families as well. Applejack seemed especially uneasy about breaking the news to her family, but Twilight remained confident that they would get things sorted out.
The market grew a tad bit noisier, and off in the distance, she could hear yelling. The unicorn quickly ignored it and returned to her meal, however. After all, markets were naturally noisy, and whatever argument she was hearing was likely over something silly, such as prices. It was always about money with most of these vendors, and almost all of them would cheat you out of your bits if they could get away with it.
She took another bite, smiling faintly as she tried to imagine how things would go when Applejack finally met her parents. Her happiness had always been first and foremost for them, and she knew that they would accept their relationship - the meeting itself might be a bit comical, however. Twilight was about to take another bite out of her sandwich when she heard a faint 'thwack' echo across the market. Much of the marketplace soon fell silent, and she soon knew that something was amiss. Markets didn't go quiet unless there was a very good reason.
As her sandwich fell to the ground, Twilight galloped off towards the market, weaving past several ponies as she tried to see what the fuss was all about. It wasn't exactly difficult to find - all she had to do was simply follow their gazes. Up ahead, a large crowd had formed, and there was something - or someone - in the middle of it all. The unicorn forced her way through the group, and soon caught sight of what was in the middle. She immediately regretted doing so.
Applejack was laying upon the ground, her forelegs covering her face. Above her stood a stallion with...
...a light brown coat, and piercing blue eyes. Is... is that Midsweet?
Already, she felt her control over her magic begin to weaken and strain.
No! Not now!
KILL HIM. CLEANSE HIS FILTH FROM THE WORLD.
She quickly shook her head and forced the thought aside, only to push her way past the crowd and into the middle. The lavender mare narrowed her eyes at the stallion and spoke up as best she could. "Get away from her, you bastard!"
He quickly turned his attention towards her, glaring in return. "And who the hell are you? Here to play hero for the damsel in distress?"
"No! I'm..." Twilight hesitated, and looked around herself at the circle that had formed around them. She certainly didn't like revealing their secret to so many ponies at once, but now more than ever, she needed to be strong for Applejack. "I'm Twilight Sparkle, and... I'm her girlfriend."
"Girlfriend? Girlfriend?!" The stallion let out a derisive laugh. "You mean to tell me that bitch ran straight to another mare?"
"Shut up."
"Aw, did I strike a nerve? What about-"
"I said shut up! You're a liar, a scoundrel, and a thief, and we don't want you here. Leave." She took a single step towards him, somewhat surprised at herself. She couldn't recall the last time she had ever made a stand of this sort. "As Princess Celestia's personal student-"
"Oh whoopty doo, like I give a damn about some Princess! Besides, what are you gonna do to stop me? Are you gonna use your magic on me or something?" Midsweet leered at her, and the unicorn took a step back.
"No."
"No? What, don't have enough juice to get the job done?"
"If it weren't for my teachings, you'd be nothing but a scorch mark on the ground."
"Hah! Right." Midsweet gave Applejack's head a kick, causing her to whimper and eliciting a snarl from the lavender mare. "She was such a whore back in the day... she ever tell you about that? About how many times me and her had a little fun?"
Twilight felt herself seethe with rage, and her self-control was rapidly deteriorating.
KILL HIM. END HIM NOW.
"I bet she didn't. Calls herself honest, and then hides all sorts of secrets from you."
BURN HIM. LET HIM SCREAM IN AGONY.
"You should've seen her. So young and so gullible... and dumb enough to believe it all. And to see her beg during some of the nights..."
END THE WRETCH.
NO!
She couldn't take it anymore, and to hear such awful and wicked words any further would have driven her to madness. Before she could scarcely realize what was even happening, she felt her body begin to turn, and her hindlegs kick out. She felt her hooves connect with something, causing a loud and sickening 'crack' to ring out across the market, and then there was a wail. A loud, and painful wail.
Midsweet stumbled backwards, falling to the ground and rolling about in agony as he quickly drew his forelegs to his face. Even as Twilight ran to Applejack's side, she heard murmurs throughout the crowd, and the one she heard time and time again was 'broke his jaw'. Just as she began to tend to the orange mare's injuries, however, she noticed a pair of earth pony stallions push through the crowd and make their way towards her. Their uniforms alone made it obvious enough that they were law enforcement, and one cleared his throat and approached the unicorn. "Miss Sparkle?"
To say she was nervous would be an understatement. Her closest friend and now girlfriend had been injured, she had likely broken another pony's jaw, and now the police had arrived. "U-um... yes?"
"Look, we hate to do this, but... you'll need to come with us. Just need to ask some questions."
"...b-but." She glanced towards Applejack, a frown upon her face, and one of the stallions gave her a comforting pat on the back.
"We'll make sure she's taken care of. Don't worry."
Twilight leaned down and gave Applejack's muzzle a brief kiss, then reluctantly left her side. As she followed the police officers and trotted away from the scene, she saw a pair of pegasus ponies fly down and begin to take care of both Applejack and Midsweet - paramedics most likely.
It pained her to leave, but at the very least, Applejack would be alright.
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The Ponyville Police Station was an extremely small building - Ponyville, like most of Equestria, was almost completely devoid of crime. Twilight Sparkle found herself sitting at a table in a small questioning room, and opposite of her, the two stallions sat upon the floor. There wasn't much room for chairs at all. "Naturally, you can see why this is such a serious event, Miss Sparkle. I mean, you did break the guy's jaw."
"I know! B-but..." The lavender mare sniffled and rubbed at her reddened eyes. During her brief stay at the station, she had cried once or twice, and understandably so - she had gone from having the best day of her life to sitting in a police station and facing the prospect of jail time. "...I was defending her!"
One of the officers idly flipped through a notepad, reviewing notes. "We gathered as much from some of the other witnesses. Looks like the poor girl was pretty roughed up, and possibly could've gotten it worse if you or somepony else hadn't intervened."
"So that's... that's a good thing, right? And she'll be okay?"
"Ponyville Medical says she'll be quite alright. No permanent damage. And yeah, you intervening was indeed a good thing..."
"So... c-can I go?" Twilight looked across the table at the two stallions, a hopeful look upon her face.
One of the officers shook his head, however. "I'm sorry, but... no. I'm afraid you'll have to stay the night, just as a precautionary measure. We can't really let you go until we've gathered more information and gotten the whole picture."
"So... I h-have to sleep... in there?" She pointed a shaky hoof towards the only jail cell in the entire station, and both officers nodded in return.
"Afraid so, Miss Sparkle. Now, look. I know you're in a crumby mood. You're probably angry and scared right now, but... you've got a clean record, and we both know you're not a 'hardened killer' or anything. We'll try and make things as comfortable for you as possible." He gave the unicorn a comforting smile, and it seemed to improve her mood somewhat. "Like I said, we're not doing this because we want to. This is just a precautionary measure."
"R-right..."
It was a rather short walk from the questioning room to the jail cell, and the lavender mare winced as she heard the door lock behind herself. True to their word, the police officers had done everything they could to make her brief stay as comfortable as possible. They brought her a book to read, as well as a blanket and an extra pillow for the cot. She respectfully declined the dinner, however - her appetite had completely disappeared due to the day's events.
She had already laid down on the cot and was prepared to try and get some sleep - any sleep at all - when a knock upon the bars made her stir slightly.
"Miss Sparkle? You still awake?"
"...yeah."
"You got a visitor."
"A visitor?" She certainly hadn't been expecting such a thing, and she quickly sat up in the cot and turned towards the door of her cell, letting out a small gasp as she caught sight of who it was. Standing at the bars, a faint smile upon her face, was Applejack. The earth pony's mane was untied and disheveled, and she even still had her hospital gown on, yet there she was. The lavender mare quickly ran over and leaned on the bars, sliding her hooves through and giving the orange mare a light hug. "Oh, AJ... I'm so glad you're okay. How have you been doing? Everything alright? Feeling okay?"
"Hey, shh... I'm fine, darlin'. Tell me how yer doin', though."
Even now, despite her present condition, Applejack's thoughts were about how Twilight was doing, and such a thing brought a faint smile to her face, though it soon vanished. "Well, I'm... I'm in jail, Applejack. Never thought I'd see the day where I could say that, but... yeah. Just... I wish we hadn't split up. I could've been there!"
"An' then what?"
"I..." She surely hadn't been expecting that kind of question, and it made her stop. "I... don't know. I could have defended you, though. Just... agh!"
"Twi, no reason ta beat yerself up over it. It's done an' over with. All ya can do is move on." Applejack glanced towards one of the officers, and he soon trotted over and unlocked the cell, allowing the orange mare to step in. Something seemed rather odd, however - Applejack's mane covered the entire left side of her face, and she was taking great strides to ensure that Twilight never saw it.
As the cell door clicked shut once more, Twilight walked over and attempted to brush Applejack's mane out of the way, only to have the earth pony move away from her. "Applejack? Is everything alright?"
"It's... it's fine, Twi. Really."
"If it's fine, then stop moving." She tried to brush the earth pony's mane aside once more, only to have her turn away from her.
"Twilight, it's nothin'. Stop worryin' about it."
"If it's nothing, then you'd let me look, because nothing's wrong at all. Everything you're doing now is telling me that something is wrong. Just... hold still. Please."
"Alright, Twi, but... you asked fer it." The orange mare let out a sigh and sat still, a faint frown spreading across her face as Twilight's hoof slowly pushed her mane to the side.
With the last of her mane brushed aside, Twilight frowned and looked at Applejack. "AJ..."
Hidden behind the golden mane was a black eye, bruised and swollen shut after she had been struck by Midsweet. Applejack looked towards the unicorn with her one good eye and forced herself to smile. "I look like shit, don' I?"
Twilight seemed shocked to hear such a question, and pulled back somewhat to stare at her. "Wh... why would you even ask such a thing, Applejack?"
"I dunno... jus' curious, I guess. Jus' be honest with me, Twi."
"I... well." Twilight gently pressed a hoof against the injury, and she flinched upon hearing Applejack let out a hiss through her teeth. "Yeah, it's... kinda bad, AJ. But it'll clear up."
"Well, that's good. Can't have ya bein' th' only good lookin' one in th' relationship." The earth pony grinned, and Twilight couldn't help but giggle in return.
"Oh, stop that! I still think you're awfully cute, even with a black eye."
Applejack chuckled and pressed her muzzle against Twilight's. "Yer jus' sayin' that."
"Nope. I mean it." The lavender mare smiled and began to lean forward to give the earth pony a kiss, only to find herself interrupted by a rather odd event. There was a sudden flash of golden light, as well as a faint 'pop' sound, and a single scroll dropped down onto the floor. For a moment, both mares eyed it, and Twilight soon wandered over to investigate. The unicorn levitated the scroll up and inspected it, blinking in surprise as she discovered just who it was from. "It's... from Princess Celestia."
"But I thought she needed Spike ta send ya letters an' stuff?"
"That's what I thought too, but... apparently not. Hold on, lemme see what it says." Twilight hastily opened the scroll and unfurled it, reading aloud so Applejack could hear as well.
To My Faithful Student,
I've had all potential charges cleared against you. I know you acted with noble intentions, and given the circumstances, I can hardly blame you for what you did.
I'm proud of you for standing for what you believe in, and for defending those you care for, but please try to do so verbally in the future, rather than physically.
Sincerely,
Princess Celestia
P.S.
You two make for a rather cute couple. The next time you're in Canterlot, you two should stop by and visit.
"So, wait." Applejack blinked and scratched her head. "...she knows about us?"
"Apparently."
"Huh. Well, you bein' cleared of charges is definitely good news."
"Mhm."
Applejack walked over and leaned towards the unicorn, a faint smile upon her face as she pulled the unicorn into a brief and passionate kiss. When they finally broke away, the earth pony chuckled softly and grinned. "So, I heard about Midsweet."
"You did now, huh?" Twilight smiled faintly and looked towards the orange mare. "And what did you hear?"
"That ya broke his jaw. How did it feel?"
"...honestly?"
"Honestly."
"Well..." Twilight giggled and slowly shook her head, burying her in Applejack's neck and whispering towards her ear. "It felt good. Real good."
"That's mah girl."
>go over a month without updates
>post longest update ever, at over 6700 words
Been wanting to write a lot of these scenes for a very long time. Also wanted to thank device heretic for reviewing some of the scenes for me and giving me some input.
Enjoy!
YESYESYESYESYESYESYES!
So good. This made my day.
'bout time (I mean that in a good way, I had been looking forward to this one for a while).
I honestly find it a bit hard that AJ lost against someone (I mean, she should be able to kill somepony with those hind legs of her), but, I get it, sometimes you gotta do stuff for a good plot point. (Or she got surprised)
Still, hope the next update doesn't take as long. 'cause I'm looking forward to it as usual. =3
Yay for the update! I have had this story on my backlog for a while, and finally got around to getting up to the last chapter yesterday, so to see the update today was soooo AWESOME! Yay!
Very good chapter...honestly, for a bit I thought Twilight did more...but I am glad she, somewhat restrained herself. I have been in situation in which an ex caused trouble...and honestly..don't remember much, if anything I did when I 'snapped' (no, I never hit anyone before..but I am sure I said some horrible things). It's a very emotional thing to hear, and I believe you got it rather well.
I shall eagerly await the next chapters!
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Basically, she was caught off-guard and didn't have time to react. Tried to show that with this line: "He moved with a speed that belied his size, and Applejack barely had time to react."
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Oh, yeah. I meant more in the long run too. I figured that given her build, she could take a few punches and still roll them out afterwards. But then again, surprise is generally a big factor. Makes for better storytelling, like I said. XD
This was brilliant
The words of Ivan Vanko run through my head: "There will be blood in the water, and the sharks will come." I have no idea why that was my first thought when moving to comment; I think I liked Iron Man 2 too much and I'm too fucking excited for The Avengers.
Of the two left that need to be told, Rainbow Dash would be the most likely to have an explosive reaction to the relationship. Fluttershy doesn't have an intolerant bone in her body, and she certainly wouldn't hate her friends for the choices they make. Even so, I can't really imagine Rainbow flipping her shit over this for several reasons, an unfortunate number of which credit their origin to the picture the fandom tends to paint of her.
Also, I love it when Twilight taps into her hidden badass in any story. It leads to pure awesome.
what a twist!
the best part.
"That's mah girl LOL loved it`!
Don't mess with twilight.
And he was still lucky she only broke his jaw xD
Good chapter was worth the wait :)
This chapter didn't particularly click with me, I must confess. Midsweet might be a cocky sunovagun, enough to consider coming back to a town where he'd already run his scam once before - but he'd run it on a member of one of the most well-known families in Ponyville, which one would think would give him pause at the risk of him being remembered. Even if they didn't, once he hauled off and slugged Applejack I'm surprised half the town didn't step up to drag him off of her instead of standing around rubbernecking.
As for the police incident, there's no real gravity to it when the Princess claps her hooves and disposes of the problem within a few paragraphs.
Midsweet I think worked better as a cautionary tale from Applejack's past - dragging him back to Ponyville to get his comeuppance didn't really seem to serve much purpose except let the readers cheer as he got stomped on (assuming of course that there will not be repercussions in later chapters, which I obviously can't foresee at this point). His concept worked better as a factor in determining Applejack's attitudes and actions rather than as an active part of the story.
Yay, update!
I liked the part where they told their friends about them being together, I hope we still get to see scenes with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, even though those two are probably in the know by now.
The second part of the chapter I didn't like as much. Midsweet is just too one-dimensional to be a believable villain (from the tale Big Mac told, I never thought we'd see him). Why would he return to town and start antagonizing AJ in the middle of crowd? And the cop ponies just felt too real-worldly for my taste, especially since the whole conflict there was defused easily by Celestia.
Still, the Twijack scenes were sweet and made up for a lot. Overall I think the chapter was worth the wait.
Okay, finally got around to reading it. It was a great update, though my one thought in mind right now is wondering if all of their friends really will be alright with them being in a relationship. While it's good to keep them in character, it doesn't leave open for much development. Rarity I could always see in particular being the biggest supporter or the biggest "NAY" in the group.
I was really cheering that Twilight was going to do something horrible to Midsweet. Thank you for breaking his jaw.
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That's still assuming a lot, though - he may have run a scam, sure, but he had no way of knowing it was on one of the most well-known families in Ponyville. In addition, I'd like to think that most of the ponies were simply too hesitant to get involved with anything that involved violence, especially with an unknown like Midsweet.
The police incident wasn't intended to be overly 'srs bsns' - I more or less wanted to use it to set up some cutesy scenes between Applejack and Twilight, as well as set the stage for a likely future chapter (introducing your girlfriend to your mentor? That's gonna be fun).
As for Midsweet himself, yeah, he may have simply worked better as a cautionary tale rather than an active participant. Still, I wanted him to at least come back so Twilight could have a little run-in with him. Could I have written it better? Probably. Do I regret bringing him back? Not at all.
Also keep in mind, this chapter took over a month to write out. It likely reflects in some of the writing, and if so, I apologize.
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Still plan on writing scenes for Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash. I have some rather comical (to me, anyways) scenes planned for dear Dashie.
Villains? Ah, I've never been good with villains. I'm such a goody two-shoes myself, and perhaps it shows. Midsweet wasn't necessarily antagonizing Applejack in the middle of a crowd - I tried to convey it within the writing itself, but they were... somewhat detached. Separated enough from the crowd for them to have a one-on-one confrontation, but not private enough for Midsweet's actions to go without notice. And as stated in my previous comment, the police scenes were more or less just to set up some cutesy Twijack moments. Yes, really.
I REGRET NOTHING.
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Given the show's own motto of "Love and tolerance", it doesn't exactly seem realistic for any of the friends to disapprove of something that might make some of the others happy (in this case, Twilight's and Applejack's newly-formed relationship). Some of them might be surprised by it (Pinkie and Rarity, for example) and some might find it a bit odd (Macintosh), but none of them will really go so far as to say "You shouldn't be doing this".
...well, almost none of them. You oughta be able to guess where that'll likely happen.
360600 On the other hoof he'd had to target her in the first place, so surely he must have asked around to see if she was worth pursuing? As for violence, perhaps so, but I don't see every pony hanging around while Midsweet visited some on a known resident.
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Well, not necessarily. From the tale Macintosh told, he set up right next to them. It's possible that all he did was simply ask who was the most successful, and he simply left it at that. Most successful doesn't always mean most well-known.
Also, considering that this is a town filled with residents who cower in fear when there's lightning, thunder, and other spooky bits (see: Luna's arrival in 'Luna Eclipsed'), I don't think it's really far-fetched for them to stand off to the side while they all waited for law enforcement to show up (which they eventually did).
Besides - cute? I can do cute. Drama? Erm... not so much.
*makes a mental note to avoid forcing drama into stories*
360648 To start with, granted, but he then had to spend considerable time in Applejack's company - and presumably was in her presence enough to see her interacting with other members of Ponyville. It's perhaps a minor point, but I don't see a successful con artist go without some research and planning, not if he's running a long con like Midsweet was.
As for the violence aspect that is very true, though those were acts of nature and other phenomenon that the ponies in question couldn't necessarily affect, rather than one that they potentially could.
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OH WELLLLL. Lesson learned - I am terrible with villains.
I'm just happy I got the update out and that people enjoyed it.
360666 Hey, it's not like EVERYTHING IS RUINED FOREVER or anything like that - I'm still enjoying the story! I just felt this one was a bit of a dip BUT it's out and it leaves you free to canter on with the rest of the story!
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And it's got Twilight and Applejack being cute.
Don't forget that one!
360674 Ah yes, I knew I'd forgotten something.
Alright! Just when I was starting to think all I was getting was "Life, Death, and Ponies" I finally get "On Wings of Change" and "Unintended" within just a couple days! I agree with what the others have said about the situation with the police and Midsweet, but I accept your explanation. I still enjoyed this chapter, and the sweet Twijack scenes. I just hope Dash and 'Shy understand they WERE going to be informed before "The Incident" interupted things. A SLIGHT step down, but still a solid chapter, I enjoyed it, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us next
Personality wise, Rarity is generous and a shameless romantic, so I can certainly see her being happy about this Fluttershy is the most nonjudgemental pony ever Twi and Pinkie are just too good-natured AJ is as dependable as they come and as for Dash? Well, you don't need to be the Element of Loyalty to want what's best for your friends So I agree. I'm still somewhat jarred by a Twi/Dash fic I read where AJ and 'Shy were not okay with it O_o
Anyway, forgive me if this isn't the most detailed of reviews, I try to offer constructive criticism while still focusing on the good points, but I'm hardly the most talented reviewer out there
359570 Twilight faced down a Demon Queen of the Night without flinching, and mouthed off to the Reality Warping God of Chaos, her Badass isn't quite so hidden
Well I guess it deserved to wait again. ;) I'm quite surprised how easily Rarity got the news because I thought she would need a bit more time to accept Applejack and Twilight's relationship.
Honestly I frightend fist when I read that Applejack was covering one of her face's sode because I thought she would lost oner of her eyes even I have no idea why I thought that and where that idea came from.
Anyway I'm looking foward to see how things will going to happening. I guess you won't write mutch abvout how AJ and Twilight migt explain to the CMC their relationship or atleast they must explain to Applebloom.
PS: I love AJ-s last line in this episode.
Yeeeeehawww!
Let's see what will let the grip slip. Back to the roots of the prequel, huh?
And she was still able to K.O. Midsweet without using a bit of magic. Knockout by an egghead... pathetic...
Glad to see a new update! And long chapters are the Best!!!
Damn that was awesome Vargras. Really love this chapter length too, hope you stick with it!
I enjoyed this! The art over on Deviant Art from InuHoshi brought me hers and I'm so glad! This is my favorite pairing and the story was well done. I look forward to more, as well as adding my own offering to the Applesparkle collection. So jazzed I found this archive!
I enjoyed this! The art over on Deviant Art from InuHoshi brought me hers and I'm so glad! This is my favorite pairing and the story was well done. I look forward to more, as well as adding my own offering to the Applesparkle collection. So jazzed I found this archive!
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"so Twilight could have a little run-in with him."
...... I wanted Twilight to blow him up! does that make me a bad pony?
She could've at least smashed him against a boulder or something.
I want more! does that make me a bibliophile?
This is the kind of story telling what I like. When you read it, you can see the whole scene in front of you. Your heart want to jump out in dramatic scene. So, you sir, doing an awesome job. I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.^^
Excellent update! The ending put a huge smile on my face :D
362711 Well, she used some magic- she teleported herself right next to him for starters. I don't know if her kick was magically enhanced or not, but whatever.
Glad I read the comments, or I would've started talking about Midsweet(if that was his real name), but that's been done so... nice chapter and I can't wait for more! Again!
**stamps cane on carpet** good show
I'm still puzzled how you managed to make me care about AJ whom I always found quite boring, but you somehow did. I guess your writing is just that good - gratz on that. Awesome fic!
Nice chapter!
Whip cream hmmm Pinkie Pie.......I like where her thoughts went -laughs-
Also it is quite clear......you do NOT screw around with Twilight's loved ones -even more so her love interest- if you wish to see another sunrise. Err...see another sunrise without feeling a buck load of pain as well I mean =w=''
Good chapter though and I'm proud of Twi standing up to that guy and proudly stating she is AJ's marefriend, also I wanted to yell 'FINISH HIM!!!!' when she broke that jerk's jaw.
Just Whipped Cream? What if they're into kinky stuff? They'll need licorice too! Come ON, Pinks! You're slipping! Wait.... Oh, *I* get it! She's saving that for like their birthday presents or something! XD
/bricked
I have to say that I feel having Midsweet pop up again was a real stumbling block to the quality of the story. Then you have cops that are not only doing their job wrong (you can't detain someone for long unless you formally charge them with a crime), they antagonize a hero of the realm in a self-defense case against what amounts to a traitor of the realm. They would be lucky to have jobs after that. Then to make matters worse, you write it off like they should have to start. Very poor writing, that is.
I have to admit I was hoping for a little more Twi-on-Midsweet violence, but a broken jaw works reasonably well for me.
Found a mistake.
"It was exactly difficult to find." I think you mean wasn't.
I will now finish this chapter.
Oh Pinkiedl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png
If my suspecions are correct: Twilight's inner voice, is her 'magic' when she goes out of control?
"To My Faithful Student,
I've had all potential charges cleared against you."
You have no idea how long I have wanted to read those words in somebody's fanfiction. Twilight basically never takes advantage of her close personal relationship to the highest authorities in the land, and it always bugs me.
Apparently my window size is exactly wrong.
The earth pony soon found herself wandering past several fruit and vegetable stands, and contrary to what others may have though, she did indeed eat things besides apples.
Thats a typo.! Vargos, HEAR MY PLED!
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You had a typo in your comment about that typo.