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    The last flight of the Shadowbolts

    I did it! This is my first serious FiM story and I’m very excited to see how people will response to it. English isn’t my first language and I have no pre-reader (yet), so hopefully there aren’t too many grammatical errors or spelling mistakes.  

    The story itself takes place a few years after the show and focuses on the Wonderbolts and their soon-to-be rivals the Shadowbolts, so you should expect a whole lot of OCs.  In fact the only Wonderbolts from the show are Spitfire and Soarin – and maybe Rainbow Dash who canonically isn’t a member of the team. Sure I could’ve used Fleetfoot, “Misty”, “Surprise” and Co. but there isn’t that much Fanon material about them, therefore I said “Screw it!” and made-up my own Wonderbolts.

    I’m looking forward to your comments, positive and negative alike. Every opinion helps me to improve my writing so please don’t hold back.


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This day was going to be perfect: Twillight and her boyfriend Trixie are about to be married, but then the evil alien overlord Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca and her minions attack. It’s up to Twillight and her friends to prevent not only Ponyland and the New Lulamoon Empire but the whole Ponyland planet from annihilation and avenge Twillight’s brother who was killed by Cadenca.

Also… THE BEST OC EVER IS BACK IN ACTION and this time he’s at least 200% cooler. After the betrayls in the last story ADMIRAL Awesome Yonasomun Armageddon became an Anti-Hero. Not only wears he black stuff now, he also acts less heroic. So be prepared for some great character development and Fishing Moves ala Mortal Kombat.


And Fluttershy is still worst pony!

First Published
10th Sep 2012
Last Modified
10th Sep 2012
#3 · 110w, 1d ago · · ·

I c wut u did thar

#4 · 110w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Return of Commander Killemall! I wasn't expecting that one, but it's awesome.

Darkshadowdeath_113 is an awesome villain.

The spelling seems a bit worse than the previous story though, which is a shame. One of the things I liked about the previous one was that it didn't really take any effort to figure out what a word meant, even if it was still sometimes hard to figure out sentences.

#5 · 91w, 4d ago · · ·

I do agree with Tulip that you went a little overboard with the misspellings in this one.

But everything about Darkshadowdeath_113 was gold. Derailing a character who was already derailed to begin with? Glorious.

#6 · 87w, 2d ago · · ·

And Fluttershy is still worst pony!

#7 · 72w, 5d ago · · ·

Oh, man. Things look bleak. And no Harmony Balls, BEST OC, or friendly astronauts to save the day.

And worst of all, Worst Pony is still alive!

Thumbs up for killing that guard. He thought he could make ADMIRAL Awesome waste a good one-liner. He thought...

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Wrong.

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