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ElMikkino


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When your whole world's fallen around you, sometimes you find beauty in the most unlikely of places.

One-shot. I wrote this on a whim, and don't exactly know how to interpret it. I leave that up to you.

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Ends weakly, leaves the reader crying `Yes, but what of it?' Fine up till there, but needs a final sting before the end.

The story was okay even though the ending was a bit weak.

I thought this was going to be Rainbow being sad and Rarity coming to the rescue lol.

I expected Rarity to die of blood loss.

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