Well... It's not bad. It's hard for a self insert HiE to not be cliche. This one is better than most.

I think I'll keep reading.

Creepy old man...that just seems wrong and yet it works so well.

This is sweet

Hope you do some more

I just hope this has a happy ending .... *saved*

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Not Bad.

In my capacity as an extremely old individual who barely just skirted the HiE line in a pair of stories, I endorse this storyline wholeheartedly.

I LUV IT!

I know I'm not going to stop being a Brony. I'm just hoping I can get enough shirts to last the next 60 to 70 years.

Holy.....

I'm gonna keep reading now.

So far, so freakin' good!

holy shit... so amazing... can't help but move on...

I hope you know, my friend, that this is probably going to end up becoming the new standard by which I judge all other stories that I'll ever read. This one is that good. Keep it up.

Dude, i'm gonna be a brony until I die, seriously. Lol.

And your story is just, wow. Unique is all I can say, and original! Something that we don't really have much of around here!

>>13135591313559 Thanks...?

>>13135651313565 Hehehehe...

>>13135841313584 I will, but like I said, might be a little while...

>>13135891313589 I think I have something special in mind... you shall see...

>>13139921313992 I feel the same way... can't help but wonder what it'll be like when I'm an old fart wearing a pony T shirt.

>>13142841314284 Wow, thank you!

>>13143041314304 It was just one of them crazy ideas... I was aiming for something different.

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that is all... *sniff*

once again,

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that is all.

well actually no that's not all, if you ever need any help with this fic or any other I'd be more than happy to help out, SPECIFICALLY on this one. This has got to be one of the best self inserts I've read. Probably owing to the fact that you actually made yourself weak and old, instead of a gun toting bad arse.  

Wow...

What if Tyler wanted to go, too?!?!?!?

BRILLIANT

this is good keep it up.

Dude... I can't find any words to describe you... Comparing 'awesome' to what you deserve is like comparing a dust particle to the Universe!

HiE with a well done concept so far... Interesting. Can't wait to see more.

sweet celestia... THIS IS AMAZING. the sheer brilliance of this is BLINDING!!!

MOAR, I WANT MOAR!!

Yes....Yes....YES MOTHERBUCKAH!!!! LETS DO THIS THING!!!!!

MMMMMMM-LEEEEEEEEROYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY JEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNKINNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSS, MOTHERHUMPADINKAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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P.S. Anyone know how to make custom funny pictures with text?

I could die happy now.

But if I do, I'm gonna be pissed.

Yes.

Well, this certainly looks interesting... (in a good way)

Okay... so I wanted to point a couple of things out:

I couldn't tell you how many cutie marks I've seen tattooed on wrinkly old asses.

I kissed that kid like I had never kissed a man before.

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You know what would suck? If this ended like "To the Moon." If you've played or watched a playthrough of the game, you know what I'm talking about.

"I wiggle my eyebrows like the creepy old man that I am." That line made my day!

LOL I would be ten years younger

Dat ending. DAT FUCKING ENDING MADE MY NIGHT!!!!

Ah. I could die happy now.

But if I do, I'm gonna be pissed…

...ha!

Keep coming up with those little bits of gold, along with the epic story you have set yourself up for, and I can call you awesome.

Put the rest of your other stories on the back burner and finish cooking up this story.  

Don't make me get Flutters and "stare" you.

>>13146881314688 Wow, thank you! I'll keep you in mind if I need a prereader or something.

>>13148001314800 OOOOOH... Nice thinking... maybe he did? Who knows...

>>13148281314828 >>13148291314829 >>13148701314870 Thanks!

>>13148641314864 Damn... Thank you, that made my day!

>>13148701314870 I try.

>>13148731314873 Glad you like it!

>>13150661315066 LETS DO THIS!

>>13153031315303 Pretty much.

>>13153491315349 Ahem... um... yea..... about that.

>>13157381315738 >>13158901315890 >>13159881315988

>>13157561315756 Mer?

>>13160121316012 Le Sigh... B-But... the main one I'm working on is gonna be epic... You all should definately watch me!

MY DEAR SWEET CELESTIA I AM SOOOOOO CLOSE TO THE FEATURE BOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey man, this is pretty good! Keep it up

An HiE that actually DESERVES Featured? Incredible! Liked and Faved!

A tear comes to my eye.

This needs featured. This DESERVES Featured. Have a like and fave.

>>13160731316073 Yes! PLOT TWIST! Tyler also wanted to prance with the ponies!

And, you're very welcome!

Now... if you know what's good for you...

You'll write that next chapter.

Really enjoyed what you've written so far. I honestly can't wait for more!!

all brony's we have to make a real teleporter and go ther.

This. Is. Pure. AWESOMENESS!!!

This is simply brilliant. I really am liking what you're doing with this so far.

Imma track this fic. Keep up the good work.

Ah. I could die happy now.

But if I do, I'm gonna be pissed…

That line. THAT LAST LINE.

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YES

I can just feel the puppysmiles vibe oozing from this.

... I'm all cried out.  This story is gonna end with him dieing.  But still... I congratulate you for thinking up this idea.

I will 'thumbs up' ... but my heart can't take another somber story, so i'll sit this ride out.

I envy everypony, whose brave enough to continue reading this potentially epic tale.  

>>13136331313633

YOU DID NOT!

I...

I love it...

This is a wonderful story. I really hope you keep it up.

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>>13161931316193 >>13164331316433

>>13162371316237 I'M SOOOOO CLOSE!!!

>>13162501316250 Nice to know I've stirred up your emotions tbh I was tearing up when I wrote it.

>>13164211316421 We'll see........

>>13164931316493 All we need are some theoretical physicist bronies to get the ball rolling. Where's Gordon Freeman when you need him?

>>13165501316550 >>13165861316586 >>13171341317134 Thanks guys!

>>13168081316808 Geez, I didn't think it was that good, but I'm ok with this!

>>13168981316898 Hopefully you'll pick it up when you're in a happier mood, so I can ruin it for you

>>13169791316979 Dat Jeremy Clarkson face.

>>13172201317220 Way to advertise. Can't say I blame you lol, read-later-ed.

>>13173771317377

BWA HA HA HA...

...HA

Noooo all that beautiful science

Moar

Instafave.

I can't get enough of this fic.

A very nice and realistic take on a Brony to Equestria story. Not only realistic, but also probable, because if string theory is to be proven, pretty much everything that can be, is. But that's only a distant dream.

Anyway, nice story there but since the main character is so old, I don't expect it to be a very long fic. Which is good. If you handle the plotline well, you can do a pretty good story. Don't drag it too long though.

I crave more of this story.

I seriously fucking crave more of this story.

Also, I am totally willing to spend the rest of my life figuring out how the fuck to make this happen.

I've got my eye on you, and my other eye on this fiction!

>>13173771317377

I'm afraid that it's quite impossible for us to go to the "Pony" Dimension since it actually will never exist, this show is painted by humans, in word, we created it. If this "Pony world" would exist it would mean that on every thought we think we create another dimension.

That last line!

When I looked at the title I was like but then I read it, and it was awsome. Keep it up.

Uhh... First chapter was interesting, although I wanted to slap you for that remark about shooting a single hydrogen atom at just over the speed of light. Bad science is bad.

The second chapter was a lot more 'meh'. Everything was rushed, there were enough scene-changes/breaks to really kill the immersion, and Twi didn't seem to carry much of her character from the show, so much as she just felt a little... Bland. I suppose I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, but the initial outlook provided by the second chapter isn't overly promising.

(Oh, but the sarcastic and bitter humor in this is pretty good.)

>>13180211318021  Well yeah.  That's the whole theory.  Its plausibility is debatable, but this is assuming that it's correct.

Nice story, by the way.  HiE gets a bad rap because they're usually written without much creativity, but this one just proves that you can't judge a book by it's cover.  (Bridle Gossip, lol)

He makes a portal, I make eternal youth, follow him, and pony-fy myself.

>>13180851318085

I just thought about some quote that would fit in this kind of situation:

"If real is what you can feel, smell, taste and see, then 'real' is simply electrical signals interpreted by your brain"

The Matrix

>>13173771317377 DON'T YOU "WE'LL SEE" ME, MISTER!!!

Wait... a universe for every fic... this is a fic...

DAMMIT AN ENTIRE UNIVERSE BORDER PREVENTS ME FROM USING THE PORTAL AT THE LAST MOMENT!!!!

Must. Not. Have. Heart attack.

...That made me laugh. Not sure why.

Time for a Rarity unquote:

:You say this "Human" knows about us? WAAA-HA-HAAAAA My designs' fabulosity have transcended the very fabrics of time and space! I am THE premiere fashionista of the multiverse!

>>13181391318139

We're officially a popular site. Spam bots!

broken in IE,

GET A REAL BROWSER YOU MANIAC

"I guess… I came here because of you guys." It's as good a guess as I can make right now

There's a little confusion and an awkward silence in the room.

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I'm lovin' this story so far.

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HiE rule #23. Don't make the reason your human is in Equestria a fucking portal. Can you try and ring some originality out of your skull or do I have to beat it out of you?

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Lol, joking.

The story premise is a lot better than most of the portal-to-Equestria stories.

Good luck!

This is beautiful indeed.

Damn, to be the last known brony left, that would be.... i don't really know, i might be.. sad, to be the last. Proud, to be the one to keep it alive?

Me gusta big time! Here, have a moustache! Anyway, a truly amazing story so far. Not too many clichés either. Keep going!

I like it. The whole idea of inter-dimensional travel has me interested

Yep, this story really does make me think about that one thing i always kept in the back of my mind.

Will i ever quit to be a Brony, i don't think i ever will.

And what will happen when we age, will the fandom die out due to the fact that others lose intrest?

Will it quit to attract people from the younger generations and that we just stay fans throughout the end?

Will we be able to show the younger generations the joy of watching pony's, what will result that this fandom will last longer than my life?

Questions, questions and all i have to do to get the awnser is to live my life and wait for the future to unfold.

But i am drifitng off. I would just like to congratulate you and thank you for this story.

not bad bro not bad

Oh, I see so many commercial uses for that thing he 'asploded last chapter.

I mean, seriously. If he can use it to go to Equestria, what's stopping anyone from getting a vacation house in Hoenn(Pokemon)?

Not sure who'd really want to, but, heck, visiting Silent Hill, or the Capital/Mojave Wastelands(Fallout 3/Fallout: New Vegas) would be an interesting use of vacation time.

I would simply LOVE to go visit Spira(Final Fantasy X) for a while. If only to try snagging a Garment Grid or a Sphere Grid.

Why not Equestria?

I'd go... But there wouldn't exactly be all that much to do. All I could do is be a fanboy to the Mane Six, freak everyone out by hanging out in the Everfree, and try getting Derpy's/Ditsy's autograph.

After that, I'd probably pester Lyra, and listen to DJ-P0N3 on the radio, assuming they have radios.

...Wait, I take it that they never got around to making a "Return" function?

...*facepalm* Of course not, pointless to make a Return function if you can't even get there in the first place, eh?

I have the strangest feeling that plant is going to be important later.

And I thought just the title was interesting enough.

>>13153031315303

Oh I most definitely agree with you.

The best line so far.

I'm actually enjoying this.

Just one thing: No Fountains of Youth, old man.

Congrats on feature box and please keep the chapters stomping this story is great!

This story is full of 'stache-tastic win

>>13180691318069

Maybe bad wording, but what if it involved bending space-time around the atom? Like that paper a physicist from Mexico postulated and others have improved upon? A little packet of energy effectively traveling at ftl speeds.

Anyway, I'm not a physicist, so I can't vouch for the validity of that theory.  Still, cool beans and a good story overall.

It's so nice to see a HiE fic that actually has a story! I like it!

Kinda wish mine woulda made it, but it's hard for us HiE folks, I guess. Congrats, bro!

I almost forgot, I'll give this 5 Mostaches out of 5

IT IS

ADEQUATE!

/me Wake up, go to work, turn on computer, gee, I wonder how many views I go-

MOTHER OF CELESTIA I'M FEATURED!

SO AWESOME!

Thanks guys! You made this possible! I gotta start wrenching on some cars, I'll reply to comments later, maybe at lunch.

You sir, have made my morning. Congrats on getting a featured story and keep at it. This definitely going to be one I want to read for a while!

Congratulations on the feature, this is actually very very interesting. THe age of the character will definitely play into things quite a bit, an I'm intereste to see where you'll be taking this, who he will meet an interact with, and what new things you will be bringing to the table with a character like this.

This story is pretty funky.

Regardless, I just found something worth sharing.

Behold.

"aaaaAAAAAAAAHH"

"Choo"

Quite.

>>13153031315303 If I died...

I would die happy, with beautiful, pastel colored ponies.

Wonderful.

Now u got me thinking if I'm going to ever stop being a fan of MLP:FiM....

>>13164931316493

Dude, we should totally team up with abunch other bronies and built that teleporter! You in?

...please keep up the good work. A good HiE fic is hard to find, and with this being a self insert and still not sucking!

I hope I become that creepy in my old age.

This is awesome. i want moar

Hnnggggg... fav and like. I really like it...  So, basically we can expect happy ending anyway. He ended up in Equestria and maybe can live for some years more (well with such healthy food- I assume that food in pony land is much more healthy then on earth- he can live maybe 20 years more without any magic and shit.). If he is not going to be eaten by manticora or Discord broke free again and do something to creepy grandpa.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Not bad at all

>>13191381319138

IM IN!!!!!!

As one who doesn't like HiE - greatly more so for BronyiE - and isn't keen on the idea that every single little thing merits its own slice of an infinity-verse ( "Every dream made real. Remember some of those dreams?" ), you've...made a fairly entertaining story here. The writing is fair, the humour is good, and the fact that the ponies are taking it in stride appeases me.

You've essentially made a treat  entirely out of ingredients I don't like, and despite that I like it.  That, I think we can agree, is a bit harder than giving somebody something like what they already like and having them be fond of it also.

The realism of your character descriptions was a nice and uncommonly seen touch also. Will follow this with satisfaction and interest to see how it unfurls.

>>13190281319028 By her holey hooves, that's incredible

You did it, Red. You made a featured story.

<cracks whip> Now write more.

Techogre sent me here (another author of a good HiE series), and I have to say: I'm glad he did.

This is shaping up to be a pretty great (if, at all, an already unique) HiE story. I look forward to it!

EDIT: Oh, and let it be said that I like how you mentioned how they look like actual creatures, and not just look cartoony.