Spike has been abandoned by his friends at the Grand Galloping Gala. While wandering the halls of Canterlot Castle, he finds himself stumbling upon a peculiar pony.
(Season One Finale Alternate Ending)
(Originally Written As A One-Shot)
Spike's Luna was meant to be a short one-shot, but as I began writing it, I realized it was going to be much longer than anticipated. It should be about two-three chapters in total. It is a short story. :) I just wanted to tackle another shipping that I believe isn't explored as much as it should be. Oh, and 'Selena' refers to "selene", which means "moon" in Greek. Everything else that has not been explained will be in coming installments. Thank you for any comments. They push me forward.
You know what thiss call for?
Can you make this as big as RBD stroy, pwetty pwease?
First is RainbowSpike, then DaringSpike now it's LunaSpike...
Can we have a CelestiaSpike soon ??
Pretty please with sugar on top ?
I shall eagerly await the next chapters.
i FUCKING LOVE this pairing
This story is Great, i say you can expand it a little more than just three chapters it can be at least ten.
Was that a Star Wars Reference?
Um, are you a supermodel?
Anyway, I LOVE YOU AND YOUR FICS. Best wishes.
This is so cute ^.^
~Have a good one.
Yeah, you can't really fit this into a one shot, so I'm glad you're expanding it.
Keep up the awesome stories about my favorite character>>12523461252346
Overused image! But still awesome!
I wouldn't do that. This story does have a short story feel, so I agree with his keeping it short. Hopefully though, it is on the upper end of 2-3.
I can agree with one to two chapters, this is the episode where Spike would be eatting dounts but insteadfound Luna who lied to hi about who she really is, hat can't be helpfu for romance, and for some reason I wish to see a Spike/Pinkie Pie next, not sure why though and also Malla, can you either tone down on the fancy words or teach us how you write in such a matter, I read more book then should be possible and yet I never really read someone's story who speaks so....fancy, you know? I'll be awaiting more bro, peace.
Dude I know this is as obvious as the fact that people everyone wants more of your stories but I'll say it Dude Your Awesome!
Dude your stories are awesome, ever since i saw Spike's Rainbow dash, I immediately watched you, and now you Spike's Luna! AWESOME!
Do i sense someones favorite character is spike? Haha :P
At every passing minute only his inner sense of loneliness dragged him further into oblivion.
Man, Spike gets all the mares!
Spike is a SWAGON! It was bound to happen.
>>12523461252346 dude that guy has seven chins
There actually has been a spike and Tia fic and its pretty good.
if its an alternate ending it need the alternate universe tag, just saying.
I really like this, not enough crazy Spike ships out there. Can't wait to see more!
lmao, damn! Just when I thought Spike couldn't get any more swag, you come in with this and blow me away.
The story is looking good so far. I didn't notice any errors when I read through it, so good job there.
Will be looking forward to this. I wonder how Rarity is going to take Spike falling for Luna...?
we need moar at your earliest convenience.....
thats my pic
get off omfg
Oh crap, you were serious about that!
Welp, I'll certainly give it a lookee. Now, of to see if you've updated Spike's Daring-Doo!
Get the next chapter out please! We need to see what'll happen between these two, and how Celestia and the Mane 6 will react.
Thank you for the comment! The story will only have Spike and Luna, however.
luna lies a lot. hey! that's good alliteration!
Another spike ship AA wwwhhhaat? The story looks solid so far. I can't wait to see more
So it is going to focus on Spike and Luna with the other characters as background characters or are they just not going to show up at all?
>>12541831254183 Aww man. I was hoping to see their reactions.
I get the feeling you like Spike, romance and comedy. And because of that, I have the sudden need to know you and give you a giant HUG
Thank you, dude. Your username is actually "Rainbow Dash"! Getting a compliment from the rainbow-named Pegasus herself is pretty amazing. Straight from Equestria! Nice! Haha.
>>12547061254706 That's right your friendly neighborhood Rainbow Dash loves your awesome story!
You know... It kinda makes sense.
Often you see Celestia X Discord love stories.
Why not have Luna with another long lived creature, like a Dragon?
This is the best ship.
There's been a lot of spike ships lately. Not complaining, just observing.
Hmm... This looks... Intriguing, I suppose.
I'll reserve judgement until the second chapter. Have an arbitrary fave.
I don't know how you do it, but you manage to take the pairings that I've always wanted to see happen and make them better than imagined. I've been waiting for someone to write a SpikexLuna and yours is awesome. I've got to wonder what other Spike pairings might you have planned for the future.
Thanks for the comment! That picture has me laughing every time. Haha.
Approval seals are A-OKAY in my book! Yeah! Thanks for the comments!
I'm glad you're enjoying it, my friend. Spike and Luna should be explored much more!
A Luna Point! By Golly! Thanks, Mister!
Well, if I inadvertently included a Star Wars reference, that is fine by me! Who said this, by the way? And I'm happy that you are enjoying my entries! :) Thanks!
Spike is definitely a favorite! All the mares should be jumping on that dragon! Thanks for the comment!
Thanks, man! Your comment brings a smile to my face! I am excited that my readers are pleased with it.
Yes, Spike is my favorite character, and right behind him is Nightmare Moon/Luna! Oh, yeah!
There should be more CRAZY Spike shipping stories. I do agree, sir!
Spike's swag is just through the roof. What can I say? Haha. Thanks for the comment.
YES! An excuse to use a PEANUTS picture! Oh, yeah! BRO-HUG, YO!
Thanks, my friend. I am glad you enjoyed it. :)
AMAZING SHIP, BABY! YEAH!
Thank you for the comment! It is nice to know that you find my uncommon shippings interesting. Who knows what else is ahead? Spike's EVERYPONY? Hmmm....Hahahaha.
It's from Phantom Menace. So take that as you will. Link!
Is this a prequel to "Spike's Rainbow Dash"? Possibly saying why Luna sided with Spike in the bet?
>>12553001255300I don't know if that a yes, no, or I just gave you an idea
>>12523461252346 that's what she said XD
Anyway. Nice story!!!
Spike is one of my favorite characters, sharing the spotlight with Trixie. However if I had to list to anypony a 3rd place favorite pony I'd say Luna. I like the mystery that surrounds her. This is a great story, and I agree that it would be hard to make this a one shot without it being lengthy.
Great job, you earned another merit. The longest comment made by me.
Yeeeesssss!!!!!!!!!!!! A Luna/Spike fic. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!! *track*.
>>12541651254165 Don't steal my catch phase!!!!
Spike, why u gotta be such a playa?! First Rainbow Dash, then Princess FRICKIN Luna?!?!
>>12558481255848 I will if I want to.
Brace yourself Spike X _______ Fics are coming
Twilight, what do you think?
well, of course she could think that. What's your opinion Spike?
okay, both of you a little biased. Hey Rainbow Dash, what do you think?
She look undecided. But the Bat said yes! Hey everypony, the bat said yes!!!!!
*This comment was brought to you by my ADHD. batteries not included see store for details.
This comment made me laugh. How about we ask this guy, though?
Well, there's you answer. :)
Malla Jong vs. Garbo802 making each other laugh in the comments scoreboard:
Malla Jong: 1
Pinkie spreads smiles, I spread lolz. what can i say.
Oh, and remember how that above comment looked originally?
I actually thought of Spike's Everypony before i even saw it in your comment. And then I saw it and I was like "Damn, he beat me to it!"
THE BRITISH SPIKE SHIPPINGS ARE COMING, THE BRITISH SPIKE SHIPPINGS ARE COMING!
Haha, classic US history reference right there.
Can you tag me please ?
>>12553051255305 Good IDEA !!!
Another one Malla?! Seriously if you keep this up he'll end up like this guy:
Now I gotta see how this goes.
WE CONGRATULATE THEE ON A FINE LITERARY ACCOMPLISHMENT. THOU HAST EARNED THREE-QUARTERS OF THE INTERNET.
Glorious! This story has been so much fun to read. We- I mean I love it! Please keep up your inspiring work and stories. This story has made my day!
Princess Luna Approved!
Paul Revere actually shouted "The regulars are out!" on his famous ride.
The colonists still believed they were British subjects.
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I dont know why but this is just one of those pairings that can make for a really good story but is rarely done. Definitely one of my favorites.
needs to be 5-6
Well, this is pretty good. The only problem is with... Damn, it's hard to say.... The words themselves. While the composition and grammar is entirely correct and there's absolutely no problem whatsoever, it's a bit difficult to read for some reason. Some words just seem out of place, or like anouther one would be better. I guess it's like comparing Byron to Dr. Seuss, in a way.
>>12523861252386 So, Celestia approves of her sister banging a baby dragon. While I can see the logic in that because a dragon will live a whole lot longer than a pony, it still seems a little bit odd. Especially given the relationship between Spike, Celestia, and Twilight. Oh well, it is still an interesting approach and I am curious to see where this goes, especially when Luna reveals who she really is.
WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE!
At least it's not another TwiLuna fic. It's a favorite ship of mine but it is so old by now.
>>12573631257363 True, although there is definitely more of a squick factor here given Spike's age.
Agreed. I'm interested to see where it goes.
Can't tell if I like this or Spikes Rainbow Dash more, either way keep it up.
Well, that was definitely a fun read! I was totally stoked when I first saw that you working on this story, and I wasn't disappointed! I'm pleasantly surprised that you're expanding it by a few chapters.
This was definitely a cute chapter, and I find it funny that how Spike doesn't know it's Luna yet. Or does he? I don't know, but it would be a fun twist. Good to see that Spike is getting her to loosen up a bit early and the next chapter or two should be fun to read!
I've always been a fan of Spike pairings, particularly unusual and uncommon ones such as this, so I'm glad to see more fics about them.
And now for a fun song!
As always, I look forward to more. You're doing the Emperor's work my friend!
May the Emperor's light forever shine upon you,
NoponyMan, Ordo Xenos
Thank you for the comment. A song that perfectly represents Spike's Luna? Let me just put that in my vault for safe-keeping. :) Seriously, these songs you introduce to me are awesome to listen to. And I can always imagine the stories take course in my head when they are played. Nice!
Now don't get me wrong, these spike X etc are great but seriously, spike is getting all the bitches. What about big mac of caramal or..(10 minutes later) WHAT ABOUT THEM!?!?!?!?!?!
Well, that was certainly interesting.
Woh. My mind has been blown.
What are you gong to tell me nest, that the vikings discovered america?
Does anyone else think that Luna is cute??
Or is it just me stuck in an eternal void that neither exists or will ever exist?
That's all I have to say dear beyond continueplease
ಠ▃ಠ Luna is best goddess. ಠ▃ಠ
Spike= Pimp Master Dragon of Equestria
>>12559271255927 And that's not counting Daring Do in another story...
cute. Would like to see more. And spike making luna say bad cheesy things, such a bad little boy.
Seriously Spike is becoming one big player. I'm just wondering how a Spike with everypony would work for him now.
ANOTHER FUCKING BRILLIANT IDEA! GIVE THIS MAN ALL THE INTERWEBZ!!!!!!!
Yes indeed. Can we have MOAR?
Um...I mean... If that's okay with you, of course.
Born of a broken dragon
I like the story, but I have to say the writing feels like you're using words that are more advanced than your comfort zone, and it comes off as extremely awkward rather than eloquent. I have to admit, as much as I enjoy the story, that kind of pulls me out of the story and makes it too difficult for me to read through the whole chapter. Not that one shouldn't expand one's vocabulary, but it might be better if you wrote a bit more in your comfort zone, adding only a few new words at a time to get used to how they're used before throwing them out willy-nilly.
Thanks for the comment. And I appreciate your thought. And, reading through the chapter, I can understand what you're getting at. However...
What you have before you is a display of how I compose, so if you're bothered, then that is your own preoccupation. I enjoy the variety in vocabulary, and I feel every word should have its day in being presented to the public. All words are beautiful, and the one time I actually ommitted one from Spike's Rainbow Dash was when I had decided not to use one of my most favorite: pulchritudinous. You see, I adore "pulchritudinous", which is defined as a physically attractive individual. Alas, I understood many were ignorant of its existence, and inevitably I was forced to bury it in its undeserved tomb for another day.
I will not cease my actions nor will I change my style, fellow reader. For I have been given permission, by the words themselves, to hone their vitality.
your writing style appeals to me. this is a very good story. tracking
This pleases me. I demand moar.
WHY YOU GET ALL THE BITCHES?!
I love it...