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A recent new toy has been made, every one of the Elements of Harmony themselves.
But now there is a problem. the toy company has decided to put each toy in a rank of how rare they are in some places.
Above that, Ponyville has just gotten their own shipment of the toys, of each character, of each their own rarity...
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I am going to read this now
^.^
Okay...
Well I'll at least say this: proper quotation structure for a spoken sentence ending in a period is
"Dialogue," said ____.
And with question marks and exclamation points, it's basically
"Dialogue!" exclaimed ___.
Also, since this seems completed, you might want to change it to 'Completed'.
Otherwise, good story. Especially with the "Spike the Dragon, with the Element of Loyalty." That was good.
Okay, this HAS to be based off of Hoshi no Kirby, in that one episode where everyone goes crazy for these chocolate capsules with a figurine inside, and everyone goes crazy trying to find the rarest one.
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Oh shit! Yer right! I can't believe I didn't see that...
1247085
Dafuq????????????
Spelling, grammar, and other minor mistakes aside, that was an exceptionally perfect ending. It caught me completely off-guard. Bravo.
1247939
Just don't give me a damn roll to give you messages on what I learn about my life.
1247988
Certainly not. Those roles are only for the exceptionally interesting individuals.
You'd think that the Mane 6 and Spike would know about the figurines, after all, wouldn't they get paid royalties because the toy company was using their likenesses and real names?
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Good point. Maybe I'll add a chapter where Twilight realizes this.
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Oh you mean for the mentaly challenged. That makes sense.
1247700 No, really. Here's the episode:
(It's Japanese, but subtitled in English.)
1249158
I don't watch the annoying anime that the japanese and chinese dish out.
1249261 Alrighty then!
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But seriously, great story.
1249266
*Chock-chink...crackow! Chock-chink...tnk tnk tnk*
"Damn...missed ya by two meters...Well I guess that's what happens from a fifty seven mile difference. Gotta love this rifle."
awesomeness level 9.2/10.
1249598
Ey! You actually made a comment/read one of my stories!
Warning. Next story may contain explicit content: Ligth bondage, crossdressing reference, hot sexy time, and it-hurts-so-good dialogue.
1249895 sounds delicious... :molestia:
1249282 How 'bout the American version?
Still no? Alright, I won't bother you anymore. Have a nice day.
1259426
I said no, now STFU or GTFO
I'll take the latter.
*portals out never to be seen again*