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Boast Busters
Season №: 1
Season episode №: 6
Original airdate: November 19, 2010

I did this because Trixie never gets enough love from anypony, so here's one where she's going to get... ALL the love!

Oh. Mah. Gawd.


This is why I'm watching you. Because you rock.

Sounds... Interesting. Added to 'read later'.

This includes Trixie! Squee! *Punch* I can not wait for more. This is really good and I will be awaiting the next chapter with bated breath.

Trixie is second best pony.

Interesting concept and not a bad beginning. I shall be keeping an eye on this.

1264856 I can only hope. This (unlike my animal crackers story) deserves to be up there.:trixieshiftright:... Then again, I may just be being egotistical!:trixieshiftleft:

Seriously, stop writing so much... we don't all have this free time as you :rainbowlaugh:

Yay trixie!!! I haven't read a trixie story since maids and mistresses ended, so I'm pretty excited how this story'll go.:pinkiehappy:

1264864 NEVER! I have the multitasking ability! I can work ALL I WANT!

1264874 NO! GO INTO THE CORNER!

...why would you hate Trixie just because of her attitude in her episode?:fluttercry:
THIS IS THE VERY REASON SUCH A THING WOULD BE IMPOSSIBLE FOR US TO DECREE!!!
That aside, We.art. AWAITING THIS MAGNIFICENT FICTION TO BE TRULY BORN!
(So much Luna, I know.)

Ahem! ... gentleman... :moustache:
MOOOAAAR! :flutterrage:
Okay I'm done, good story, gottagotobed... but first a cigarette. :moustache:

1264475

Isn't trixie one of the most popular villeins that get redeemed and all that? :rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh:

Im serious. :ajbemused:

Still gonna read it. :pinkiehappy:

1264907 cigarettes :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:
also not bad
i want more .... of this story that is
ohh and BORDERLANDS 2 6 DAYS

i love Trixie~ >w< my fave shipping with her is Twixie to be honest, i just don't see who else she could relate to, except maybe Luna or Fluttershy... anyways faved and liked~ ^_^

It was kept short, and who knows how long any future chapters will be, but it was short and [sweet?] as well.
I like this.

1265162 Each chapter will actually be a story of their own accord. They'll probably be anywhere between 2500 to 5000 words each!

Question. In one paragraph Spike says,

"Come on Twilight. Let’s just go."

In the next, Twilight says,

“No spike! We need to find her.”

Why is that?
BTW, will the chapters be the title then numbered (Title 1, Title2, etc.,) If not, how will you denote a new story, because this story obviously isn't done.

1265281 Each story will be labeled with which pony Trixie is being shipped with. It will say... Idk, Zecora - If I Fell. And so on.

1265289 DAMN, THAT WAS FAST!:applejackconfused:
Okay. Anyway, November Rain doesn't say who Trixie is getting shipped with. Ane the answer to my other question?:twilightsheepish:

1265319 Spike wanted to go home, while Twilight, having some remorse for Trixie wanted to make sure she was okay since it started raining, And the title is because she isn't being shipped with anypony at the time, so I just put in a song title that might sound like it would fit the general style of writing I chose to use for the chapter. Any other questions, friend?

1265331 Sorry. The way I read it may it sound like Spike and Twilight were leaving their tree. At least, it did to me.:twilightblush:

Ugh ... I was hoping this would be the third TrixiexSpike ship in all of existence, but it's merely another Twixie story in which Twilight tries to help Trixie while Spike does his best to convince her to leave Trixie alone and miserable. Why are so many Twixie authors (and a depressingly high number of other authors) so eager to write off such a generous, friendly, and supportive character as a complete bastard? I'm getting sick of it.

1265384 I plan on shipping Trixie and Spike in this as well.

1265391 Ah!

Well, then ...

... I'm profoundly excited.

1265199 Definitely watching this one, then!

1265463 That's what you don't understand. I'm going to ship her with a LOT of ponies, and one dragon.

1265384

I usually write Spike off as not incredibly friendly towards Trixie, but definitly not hostile towards her. He wouldn't leave her if she was in trouble, but he doesn't go out of his way to befriend her. In short I write him as a neutral character towards Trixie, since that's how he seemed in Boast Busters (he didn't like her boasting (mostly because he thought Twilight deserved her title more), but he didn't heckle her like the other three did).

could do was flea town

You sure you mean 'flea' as in the insect and not 'flee' as in to run away?

Have a fave and thumb, i can't give you another watch, though if i could, i would.

1265053
Already preordered my copy, PC version finally not gonna be a damn port for once. More devs need to realize that.

And it seems like it's rant time.
PC =/= port + shinier graphics, it's a whole new control scheme, (sometimes) a new rendering engine, and UI layout, and DEFINITELY add lots of control customization. Nothing infuriates me more than having to use the damn arrow keys and the return-enter key (not numpad-enter) to scroll through menus. Mouse support isn't necessary, add 'wsad' and spacebar/numpad enter and i'll be perfectly fine. Borderlands 2 has each and every thing i've listed here, and LAN support, and a bunch of other things. Linky to the 'loveletter' for PC gamers.

1265862 Stupid easter egg typo!:facehoof: Thanks for pointing that out!:twilightblush:

1265877
No worries, i just call them like i see em, and try to help writers out like that. It sounds the same when read allowed, doesn't hurt the story at all, but the word itself is wrong. Them's the hardest ones to spot. Well, besides transposed letters in a word, when you can reed misspelled words (as long as they have the correct number and types of letters in them, or sound the same phonetically). You probably know that little test i'm thinking about as well. Found it a while back and now i've been dyslexic sense.

seewhatididthere?

Yes, I'm a horrible, horrible person, so here's the fixed version.

No worries, i just call them like i see em, and try to help writers out like that. It sounds the same when read aloud, doesn't hurt the story at all, but the word itself is wrong. Them's the hardest ones to spot. Well, besides transposed letters in a word, when you can read misspelled words (as long as they have the correct number and types of letters in them, or sound the same phonetically). You probably know that little test i'm thinking about as well. Found it a while back and now i've been dyslexic since.

1265933 Hmm... I usually don't forget mistakes, but every once in a while.:applejackunsure: Anyways, I'll probably never confuse flea for flee again as I'll remember this, just like flower and flour, or wonder and wander.:derpytongue2:

Any story with Trixie deserves at least 1 read.
:trixieshiftright:

1266193 I'd expect this from somepony with Trixie as their avatar.

Okay, I'm interested.

And Trixie, you got more than just magic. You got courage. You knew you had no chance against the Ursa... but you fought it anyway. Good on you, Trixie. And bad on your hecklers, who did nothing.

1265862mine is for PS3 why you ask well my com might bot be able to handle it i have a 42 inch TV and all my buds are getting it on PS3 also controller

1265053 Cigarettes are sexy. :eeyup:

1268569
That's a perfectly valid reason. I've always been partial to the PC myself, knowing my hardware and being able to upgrade it at a whim, *relatively* easily is nice. Well, that and i prefer the mouse + keyboard to a controller.

1268858 yes they are
1269041 love my com and if i could i would make it into a real gaming pc but alas i gotz no moneys

1275741 Thank you kindly. Sorry I can't delve into the gaming conversation. I have no idea what you guys are talking about. I stopped playing video games a while ago after realizing I liked MLP more!:derpytongue2:

i like mlp and gaming

Hrm... not usually into mature stories, but this intro caught my attention. *watches*

All she needs is for somepony to show her love ,which I would gladly do:pinkiehappy:

So when is the next chapter coming out?:twilightsheepish:

I am so glad that this was updated. I thought you were going to list who Trixie was shipping with in the story in the chapter title, though. Nevertheless, I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next.

1528621 Sorry it was soooooooooo late being updated, and so short as well.:applejackunsure:

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