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JaydexTheShadowKnight


I'm an avid writer that enjoys creating human x pony romance stories. If you like what you've read, then perhaps you'd Buy Me A Coffee?

Comments ( 44 )

Good God its late...lol i'll read later :rainbowlaugh:

Another twidash, meh, booooring

I don't even...LOL.

I have no doubt that i MUST read this.
And this is gona be good :pinkiehappy:

Like Iron Man to Iron Monger.

Swift...away!!!

ok, that was WEIRD.
well written, but weird. :derpytongue2:

Wait, why is it tagged for sex? Something tell me the next chapter(s) wil get steamy, and not because they decide to boil Twilight :rainbowlaugh:

What? This got dislikes? Jaydex, what's going on? Usually everything you write gets at least 10 times as many likes as dislikes! I'll read later...

It is some what funny and down right...uh weird.:rainbowhuh:,But is this a one-shot or will there be more.

I'm going to track this one just cuz I'm curious.

I liked "Love is in the Air", but only because it was so surreal that it was hilarious. Did it really need a sequel?

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I removed the sex tag, and have now marked it as complete. I forgot to make that change last night. This was meant as a one-shot. However, I did write the ending so more could be added or I could do a separate TwiDash fic. I like to keep my options open. :twilightsmile:

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Short answer no. But a number of readers of the original posted comments in favor of a less "cliff-hanger" ending. So that's partly why I wrote this. I explained my motives in my blog, and I suggested that this might be a "terrible idea", still I felt strongly enough to write this in a single evening, and then spent a good part of last night editing it.

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Sorry, there may be nothing to track. I forgot to mark it as complete. Though I did leave the door open to continue the story. :moustache:

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It got dislikes for the "pee" scene. I can almost guarantee it. There is an audience for fics with such content, but it's not overly large...at least I don't believe it's an overly large group. :rainbowhuh:

lol, this was totally weird :rainbowderp:

But there was no better way to get Twily outta Dash excluding puking xD

+1 for randomness :rainbowlaugh:

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I'll agree to that. And as you see I had Spike rattle off the various options they had, and that was sadly the best one. cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-dponder.png

The weirdness was why I had Dash say this to Spike:

She waved a hoof at him. “Oh come one Spike. This is Equestria, strange stuff happens here all the time,” Rainbow remarked.

1247254 that 'may be' in your response is what gives me hope.

I liked it =p. Dialogue was a little too formal for the Spike/RBD's personality, but as always your writing is good. Probably not your best fic story-wise, but still a fun read.

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Yeah, I'd have to agree. At least my Nurse Redheart fic should be infinitely better! :rainbowwild: And remember, it's one you should check out!

Well in all honesty i actuually was chuckling through most of it it was very well writen and humorous considering i normaly wont read same sex relation Fics. But all i can say is pour Twilight :rainbowlaugh: well sortof. :twilightsheepish: But yeah all in all 6/10 from me :twilightsmile: I think you did pretty good with what you had to work with.

Hehe, this was really funny. Good job, thumbs up!:moustache:

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Thank you! :raritystarry: I was hoping readers would find it humorous. Plus if you read the "Love is in the Air", you'll see I referenced a number of facts from it. :twilightsmile: Oh and I'd like to recommend you keep an eye out for my Nurse Redheart fic - "Her Gentle Hooves". It will have some "fun" content, like this story and my Applejack story have. :yay:

PFfft.... BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!:rainbowlaugh:

1246432 Seriously? SERIOUSLY?! This isn't just another TwiDash?! 'Love is in the Air'+'Love is in the Rainbow'
has to be the most unique approach to a TwiDash story on this site.

Well. That just happened. I read a story about a dragon watching a pony pee out another pony, who then proceeded to date.

This was bucking hilarious. Ive read "Love is in the bladder" Good take on it Jay,love your stories, keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you! I know most of my readers didn't read or care for this story, but when I get comments like yours, I'm glad I wrote it anyway! :twilightsmile: I'll be sure to do my best! :raritystarry:

Very nice sir I enjoyed this story very much :) keep up with the awesome stories :)

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Glad you enjoyed this. Even though, It's probably the worst story I ever wrote on here. :rainbowlaugh: :scootangel:

Dude everything u have wrote is awesome!! :)

U read Spike's Urine Lust?

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Not only read it, it's in my favorites. :twilightsheepish:

2895134 not my fave but good.:pinkiesmile:

Is this partially based on that one story where Spike had that urine fetish? :rainbowhuh:

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Actually it is. I think that was called "Spike's Urine Lust"...let me think who wrote that. Oh yeah, TwilightPyscho was the author of that one. I just saw a chance to pay a little tribute there. :twilightsheepish:

I prefer this sequel MUCH more than love is in the bladder... That was just fucked up...

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That was one of the main reasons I decided to write this. It was just wrong and didn't offer any form or closure to Blue Shifts original story.

And then the smell won't disapper, becuase now Twi is urine :twilightoops:

Vik

Well that was a fun read. I quite liked the pee scene. Damn I'm weird.

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I quite liked the pee scene. Damn I'm weird.

You aren't alone. And I'm glad you found the story entertaining. Though, it's not one of my better ones. :rainbowlaugh:

I actually like this better than the original sequel, there's actually more of a real story. Even fetish stories have to be somewhat believable. I mean in what believable way would Spike want to drink freaking piss?

It's great but I don't really think two hours is long enough to get all of Twilight in her bladder. Plus as soon as Spike told Rainbowdash about it she already kinda already had to go so a large percentage of what was in her bladder was just regular urine that was already present before Rainbowdash even drank Twilight. A smarter more cautious way would be to have her pee into a large container with a lid and not just once, but pee in it at least 1 or 2 days just to be sure most of Twilight go in there. I doubt all of Twilight would get in there after just 2 hours, especially when Rainbowdash's bladder was almost full to begin with. And I cannot believe I'm putting all this thought into a pee fetish fanfic, what is my life?!

Definitely less insane than the other story on the matter, but it still had the awkward jump into fetish land.

"Love is in the Bladder" is nothing more than an erotic fantasy based on "Love is in the Air." This is actually a proper, satisfying sequel! (Even with the quick fetish scene.) Thank you for writing it.

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