The TARDIS lands in Equestria and The Doctor confuses Twilight to unfathomed proportions. Spacey Wacey things undoubtedly ensue.
Is this sort of like the Matt Smith entrance, except he's a pony? Because that is just awesome
I'd just like to point out one thing, though:
"The smell of smoke could be heard throughout the shop." How do you hear the smell of smoke?
In short: MOAR!
I HAVE NO CLUE.
Let me fix that.
Rarity mentioned that Fluttershy still knew some "people" from when she was a model. Is this a typo, or is Lyra going to have to investigate? I'm going to guess it's a typo. Also, referring to "I" in the first paragraph was a little odd, since your narrator isn't a character as far as I know. You should probably try to avoid that.
Anyway, great chapter aside from that. I do enjoy a good Doctor Whooves story. I'll be watching this.
Number of doctor plez.
And thus mayhem ensues.
Isn't it implied that he's a new regeneration, who happens to be a pony this time? So he wouldn't technically be any of the human-looking Doctors.
Now if you'll excuse me I have more timey-wimey stuff to write about. Hopefully it'll be up tonight. Take it as an early Christmas gift or something.
Because of the fact you said "Green light" that means it's Eleven's Screwdriver. So is this Eleven into Twelve? In other words this doctor is the Twelth. Small nitpick: He would probably hate custard as like with apples when Eleven, he hated something he used to like. Different tastebuds and all that.
I would say Twilight just going along with Doctor just doesn't make sense, but by Doctor Who standards it actually does. How everyone just kinda accepts what he is saying for the most part and follows him around.
Yeah he would be the twelfth doctor, different taste buds do make sense. However, the doctor used to like fish custard. Now he likes daisy custard. The "sadly he could not find any fish" was me breaking the 4th wall. I like doing that.
Thanks for the feedback,
Your timey wimey friend
Tracking. This looks like it's going in a good direction. Praise to the 12th Doctor, last survivor of Gallopfrey. Yes, I am a massive Whovian. Glad to see someone else into it as much as me.
Also, Xmas special tomorrow!
I liked the part about the totally non-canon fridge and kitchen.
You'd think Twilight would have been less surprised about the bigger on the inside part, since she'd already been told about the swimming pool in there and everything, but ah well, can't argue with tradition.
Exciting series, actually! Of course Twilight would get roped into this, Magic and Science whatnot. Strange how Twilight lets a Stallion into her home without question, hasn't she heard about rapists and thieves? She's only met the guy for crying out loud! Then again... The Doctor's other companions followed him without question...
Yup, all the companions are crazy!
Also Equestria is a peaceful land without much crime except for the occasional corrupt god.
To borrow a phrase: "Fantastic!"
Free internets if you can correctly guess who I'm quoting!
I'm sorry I can't. No free internets for me.
And the occasional mythological creature, rival tribe, collapsing buildings, death ramp, sonic rainbooms and Rainbow Dash.
Yup, pretty safe
>>9366293662 Meh, I'll tell you, then give you free internets anyway, because you wrote this.
It was the ninth doctor! (I also find it a shame that he's not as popular as the tenth and eleventh doctoroon...)
I only just started watching two weeks ago. I've been trying to catch up.
>>102637102637 ah, that's okay...
It was what rebooted the series originally for the 2000-2011 audience, but it was before Tenant became the doctor. I recommend that you watch the Christopher Eccleston ones, he really portrays the ninth doctor well!
Y U NO UPLOAD CHAPTER 3
Nein bad Doctor BAD Doctor , Lemme guess that was the clan of Skaro right ? He's F***ED >:D !
Hooboy, the high-velocity organic waste product appears to be nearing the open-grate air circulation and venting system...
Also, which episode is the "level three civilizatation" thing a reference to?
the plot thickens!
It's not a reference to any episode in particular. In doctor who they have planetary development levels. I figured that equestria would be a level 3.
>>108591108591 I think Equestria would be more of a level 2
Earth was level 5.
Y U NO UPDATE?! - Laura
Cuz lol. Hai Laura.
how did you manage to leave us with the same cliffhanger as last time? skills... just, skills.... haha keep it up!
Rage is my middle name. It's right there next to James
Useless daleks are useless
You know, I always thought Daleks were stronger than that Really, an entire high tech army with access to weapons lost miserably, but some ponies with cakes beat them without any deaths Awkward...
I found it a bit awkward too... and I wrote it. Then again chapter 4 is a prime example of why you do not install a self-destruct system in anything.
>>129495129495 Not even getting into Phineas and Ferb. Um, if you watch that f course
I don't watch that. Did I make a reference somewhere without meaning to?
yay this is not the same cliffhanger!! hahaha i wish to see their ridiculous time and space adventures soon. you better update like... in 4 minutes. lol
>>Semester Exams Tomorrow.
If by 4 minutes you mean 4 minutes and one week from now... sure.
...was sort of interesting at first. But the characters are just too agreeable. Wouldn't Twilight would be hounding The Doctor for all the information she can get out of him. (Stuck on him like glue, literally)
Most fics portray ponies as not being inherently violent, would they really cheer all the sudden when the doctor destroyed these unknown creatures? How does Big Mac know to run on sight from the Daleks? (He tends to be rather neighborly) If you were in a total panic, would the first thing that pops into your head be "grab a camera?"
I'd suggest getting to know your cast better.
Duly noted. I'm trying to finish this fic up in a timely manner (excuse the pun), as I have some other ideas I want to work on. However, being a busy high school student doesn't give me much time to write so i can only handle one fic at a time. To be honest im horrible at exposistion and im working on it. In future fan fiction I plan on excurciatingly painful amounts of exposistion and I will show the cast in a more realistic sense.
Please excuse any errors. Im typing this from my phone.
I am guessing that the Princesses (or at least Luna) already know the Doctor.