okay start

I'll track i guess...

Interesting... go on..

Sorry for the long wait i was in Vegas over the week to watch a boxing match. I'm back and the new chapter should be up now. The 3rd Chapter shouldn't take more than a week at the most

>>1298719912987199 Im form vegas good story the suspence is giving me a heat attack

Well that escalated quickly....

I look forward to more since I get the story your telling and its Flutterash so I'll follow and its been upvoted. Your pacing is a bit wow, slow down there.. at points. They kind of went ultra passionate very quickly... very... but oh well. It'll make whats coming up even more... interesting...

I'm more worried about what AJ will do cause that farm pony seems to be a straight and narrow type to me. But pinkie is a great choice to have staring

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anyway, you have my support.

FTW!

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Yeah the pacing has been a pain in the neck since i started writing this. On the bright side, no school work tonight which will hopefully get me back on track for writing this

new chapter out everypony

its good to see everypony is in character. I'm interested to see what new angle you take on the whole friends disliking them because they are gay side. (Or not, if AJ turns up and is okay with them… but her reaction wasn't exactly nice…)

As long as Fluttershy has her Dashie, everything will be okay.

Fluttershy's nervousness became apparent to her marefriend. She put her arm around Fluttershy's shoulder to calm her. Rainbow spoke again saying "Well.... after that...." Rainbow paused (possibly for dramatic effect) and gave a quick smile to Fluttershy. "We're.... Marefriends now." She finished.

Rarity gave her own pause before speaking. Which was then followed with a joyful smile and "I'm so happy for you two, it's not everyday two of your best friends fall in love!"

... does not equal a new sentence.

You need a comma after 'and'

Rarity gave her own quick laugh "You know dear, I've never heard you refer to Rainbow Dash as 'Dashie'." The statement gave Fluttershy a deep momentary blush. "But anyways yes, Pinkie stopped by this morning to let me know of a party. I had no idea it was about you two."

Lowercase the 'Y,' add a comma after 'laugh.'

FINALLY!

NEW CHAPTER :D

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diu vivere in lupus imperium!

Cant decide whether I prefer this or magnetism.

Watch your pace, however, is something I struggle with too.