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  • 40w, 2d
    I Cavd In

    So, I finally got a phone.


    Also, Gameloft pony game is best game ever. Add me? Name's RavenDagger sans the S

    10 comments · 281 views
  • 43w, 4d
    How to Make YOUR Blurb/Description Better

    So, I've been spending a fair bit of time here. It's a site for writers, similar to Fimfiction, but a tad more... general.

    While there, I found threads where people needed help with various things, from summaries to blurbs to whatever. And I love helping them. While showering today, the thought crossed me, why was I helping them instead of the people here? This is my home on the internet and these are my ponies. This is the place I should be helping.

    So, with a thin, thin layer of egotism wiped off, I decided to drag the thread here.

    Post your summary/description/blurb below and I'll tell you what I think.

    DO NOT post links, DO NOT post an entire chapter and DO NOT ask me to read your entire story. If I like what I see, I'll check it out on my own terms.

    I don't want anything in return. The responses will be quick, but if it gets busy, please give me a few hours to post back to you. I do have stories of our own, and, on occasion, enjoy a leisurely amount of sleep.

    Thank you and post away!

    37 comments · 260 views
  • 44w, 42m

    So, My friend Malus did a thing.

    You're not obliged to, but if you feel like it, take a gander. It's a letter, of sorts.


    0 comments · 136 views
  • 44w, 4d
    How You Go About It - The Editing Process

    I've been writing for a little over two years now, both as a terribly time-consuming hobby, and for work. When I started, I thought that rereading, editing and drafting were sins. They were wastes of my precious time. Now, after many a mistake, my views have changed.

    Editing is a big, if not the biggest, part of the writing process. It's the final step before publication and maybe the most important. It's also thanks to editing that I've found some of the greatest people and that I've learnt the most about writing.

    I was curious, fellow Fimfic-ers. (need a word for that) How do you go about polishing up your stories?

    22 comments · 200 views
  • 44w, 6d
    Hey Folks

    I have a story that I've written.

    Short, about 7K. And I've no idea how to end it.

    I was wondering if any of you felt suisidal enough to give it a read and your opinion on what sort of ending this fic would need? It's for a contest outseide the pony fandom, which means no pony. But plenty of Cyberpunk and the likes!


    It's going around, and someone's going to link you to it eventually. Might as well be me, eh?

    7 comments · 158 views
  • ...

My name is Minuette, but a privileged few know me as Agent Colgate, Dental Practitioner. We hide in the shadows, ever watching out for pony's teeth. When cavities strike, we are there. Saving Equestria, one toothache at a time.

First Published
10th Sep 2012
Last Modified
10th Sep 2012
#2 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

(darn picture not working)

This is brilliant! Made me laugh quite a few times, and I love Colgate's fiery character.

#3 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

What is this I dont even.

I did lol, though. :rainbowlaugh:

#5 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·


That was the point!

#6 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1253371 God dammit. I RUINED THE JOKE!

#7 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

Awesome job Raven, and here is my edit (better late than never).  In the beginning you wrote "simple while chair" when it should be "simple white chair". You might want to attend to that.:rainbowlaugh: Otherwise, fantastic story.

#8 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh:Three of the stories on the front page have the same cover art, how ludicrous!:rainbowlaugh:

#9 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

One of these pics is not like the other, one of these pics just doesn't belong~ One if these pics is not like the other, see if you can spot them all!

#10 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1253511 This is blasphemy... this is madness!  THIS IS SPARTA! :pinkiegasp:

But seriously, what's up with that?  Is this a conspiracy?! :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::pinkiegasp:

#11 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh the goddesses :trollestia:

the LULZ in that story:rainbowlaugh:

#13 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

Wait a sec... are you making references to the SCP? :pinkiehappy:

#14 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·


I do love the SCP...

#15 · 114w, 6d ago · · ·

almost a pity it was a one shot :rainbowlaugh:

#16 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·


I won't expand on it, but I am planing on writing something else in a similar style (First Person, but with shifting characters, because complicating my life is fun!)

#17 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Dear... GOD.

This is probably one of the best one-shot fics I have ever, ever read. Holy crap, man--YOU know how to write! Dude... God bless you!

I loved the tone, I loved the humor, I loved how you kept it in voice and took a totally-serious, yet subtle tongue-in-cheek approach. Secret Agent Colgate? Wow, dude. I've never been interested in her character, but now, I am a fan. :pinkiehappy:

You've definitely won an Inky Award.

#18 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·


Does that mean Snip and Snails are the class Ds?:pinkiegasp:

#19 · 110w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1253371 i dont understand can someone explain?:derpytongue2:

#20 · 110w, 1d ago · · ·


There was an... event of sorts, sponsored by SALT (a group of editors) where everyone wrote a story with a similar prompt and the same image.

#21 · 110w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1434846 no i mean the story


#22 · 110w, 1d ago · · ·



I mean...

Which part?

#23 · 110w, 11h ago · · ·

ou played off the secret agent very well, and great details on the mom part (with arms crossed)

#24 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

So awesome!! You're a great writer! Very entertaining! If you write any more Colgate stories, I'd love to read them!

#25 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·


Ah, I don't think I will. This was just a test of sorts, to try a new style (cocky first person) I might try it again in a later fic.

#26 · 107w, 2d ago · · ·

My father hasn't been to a dentist in over 10 years.  One of his teeth has now broken off.

Please send Agent Colgate!  STAT!!  

#27 · 104w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

Brush brush brush brush brush brush brush, brushie brushie brushie brush brush!

This is why Colgate is one of my favorite background ponies! I'm surprised you didn't have any references to the game 'Colgate's Minty-Fresh Adventure', unless the giant brush was the reference. In any case, excellent job!

#28 · 104w, 11h ago · · ·


No, I'm not familiar with the game actually.

#29 · 100w, 6d ago · · ·

What in the literal buck is this?


Whatever it is...



I like it.

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