A bit on the short side for a first chapter, but it isn't bad.

Color me interested! Let's see where it goes

Hmmm... Read later, and hope for quick updates.

Now if only I knew how to add it to that list.

Seems good

Will read later pls update soon

All these people saying they will read later...

WELL I READ IT NOW!

AND IT WAS GOOD!

Hmmm.... Not bad. As a Jewel eating Dragon, I personally hope Spike gets something to snack on later.

too short and too good...

Sweet. It's great to see this thing finally updated.

TOOOOOOOOOOO SHOOOOORRRRRRTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!

Hey everyone thanks again for reading my stories

Nice.  

Grammar was okay, even though some commas were missing. I was sometimes confused on who was speaking though. Make sure to make that clear every time, as otherwise it really disrupts the reading flow. If you don't want to name the characters yet, use some other defining attribute that helps distinguishing your characters. Also, you need to describe the surroundings better so that the reader can better picture the story in his or her mind.

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Thanks Feurisson! I'll keep that in mind as I write.

I like it.

So 'the enemy' are the Changelings, I thought so from the first mention of green goo.

Zetras reminds me of a song by the Doors, 'The Unknown Soldier'

On the whole your grammar is quite good.

One thing to watch out for:

The explorers’ eyes widened with glee at the motherlode of crystals. True, they may not be the more traditional gems...

Tense agreement. If their eyes widened (past tense) then you should use 'might' rather than 'may' (present tense).

well this story is a nice change of pace. good work.

Let the funny begin!!^~_~^

Twilight you bitch.

She always does this, make a huge mess, then have Spike do her dirty work while she goes off on some adventure. The way Spike's treated, it's just not fair. I hope you include Spike far more often in this story.

UPDATE SOON AND I WILL GIVE YOU A MUSTACH UPDATE LATE I WILL GIVE A PINKAMENA

Kamen Rider: D-d-d-decade! Oh my God I'm nerdy and I love it!

Initiate re-write before the story ends is annoying enough but with the removal of all the chapters there's basically no reason to even continue watching this story, especially since it's on the backburner.

Personally I didn't think you were doing a bad job, but you've got to follow your visions.

I'll keep an eye out for the new version