I'm fairly sure this will be submitted to train-wreck explorers. Chapters 1-6 are all half-assed and terrible. Heads up.

Hmm. I'm indifferent to this one. It didn't do anything to offend me, like fucking Rainbow Dash by the end of the first chapter, which happens a lot in these kinds of stories, but it runs into the same problem that all these kinds of HiE fics have, namely that the plot just meanders around without really going anywhere. I doubt the train-wreckers will have any interest in this, though, since it's not horrifically bad.

>>12560261256026

Shall I go back to that Pinkie pie story then (which took two months to write what should have taken 1 hour)? As always your review was appreciated.

>>12563831256383

I'm afraid I'm not familiar with the Pinkie Pie one you're talking about. I only see one story on your account for some reason. I'd like to read it If i could find it, though. DWK goes for flat out sadism, Fiddle creates fine literature that is incredibly deep and complex, and I start serious or semi-serious before taking a left turn into batshit insanity. I'm kind of curious to see what your style is like.

>>12566051256605

And I write nothing~!

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png

But I have to admit, the pinkie pie story is pure epicness.

EDIT:Here it is! password might be "shit"

>>12432591243259 I have to agre that it is, well, too HiE.

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png

Just wait you fuckers until I finally write story.

>>12576801257680

I think mark is everything you hate in a character.

Yea I'll get round to that. What they do to scootaloo will make a fun day look pretty tame. No joke.

>>12580811258081

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png

Now excuse me while I go through my plans how to erase marcus' existence.

You know... You need prereader.

>>13127931312793

I know, I only ever posted this crap because it got 57 likes to 3 dislikes last time...

Itty bitty living space.

Man, what could go wrong here?

yay It's back!

dude i love this keep saying this is half assed and i want to see your real work cause this is good.

-wargod

lol i'm so lonely :(

wonderful!

it extened halfway down his whiplick tain

Pretty sure you meant whiplike tail.

Side note, great to see this is getting a soon to be awesome rewrite.

Fluttershy Stared at the packages

Stared shouldn't be capitalized

She had too choices

Two, not too.

"Oh, One moment Angel"

One should be lower case.

>>13223131322313

I'll get right to it when I finish this trollfic I haven't started yet.

When's the next update?

>>13799201379920

Sorry, on top of being horrifically lazy (which is so far the cause behind the lack of updates), I must finish my troll fic because my friend drew cover art, and therefore that takes first priority.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40721/Chocolate-Frosting.

Read at your own risk, the bad stuff happens in "chapter 2: shit gets real"

>>12560261256026 Wow, theres fan fics where they fuck RD by chapter 1 end? Wow, even I waited till chapter 3. (And she raped him damnit!)

>>16528341652834

Dude what? Go home, you're drunk.

>>16536721653672 I don't drink, but my mind is so full of fuck, I have a constant drunk state.

>>16536781653678

hmmm.... I can relate. In any case get out of my story and go be disorderly elsewhere.

>>16536951653695 I'm not disorderly.

I'M PINKIE PIE!