Raider, a young pilot and wanna be Sky-Knight is engaged by a battle-cruiser, unfortunately for him it doesn't end well. Fortunately for him he is still in one piece and in a slightly less desolate location than he remembered...well as he plummets to his death that is.
Groups
-
32w, 5dHuman in Equestria
Comments ( 30 )
Aw man, storm hawks! I loved that show :D
I really wanna see what you do with this.
Wondered if we has a Storm Hawk crossover. Looks like we do. But I will be lost when it comes to the English names...
Well, on seeing the Storm-hawks thing brought be into a bit of a nostalgia trip, I've decided I'm gonna check this one out when I've a little time tomorrow,
I'm liking the sound of it already though, an' I've just looked at the Desc.
Nice idea using the SH's, I can kinda see where this could head....
-Joe-
EDIT:
Just read through.....AWESOME! Seriously, I had my doubts as to how well this would go/work....
You are awesome, I want to see what happens next. I'm just glad my memories of the SH's were good enough for me to remember exactly what the chase would look like. Changelings...I want to know more!
yay a new chapter and FIRST ![]()
good story though, if you know the series that is
This is still an awesome story. ![]()
I wonder whats going to happen to Raider's skimmer and those crystals he stole.
What kind of crystals were they again? ![]()
Also please please please dont give Raider magic, that would just be too cliche. ![]()
Hmmm....Chrysalis faking an assaulted on her own home; I like the way you think (If I'm guessing right that is). Keep up the good work, I'm really liking this fic. ![]()
Waaaagh-some! Love the subtle manipulation Chrysalis is pulling off, great story!
I like where the story is going, but I'm disappointed that it doesn't involve the main cast from the show. Why call it Storm Hawks if there's an absence of the actual Storm Hawks? I think we could've had a lot more fun with them in this situation as opposed to Mr. Plain Human Protagonist.
me after finally finding a storm hawks crossover
You see that shit up there? It's awesome!







63

