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Those who can't see the Light, are welcomed into the Night!

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There lived in Canterlot a Prodigy Unicorn, who was the personal student of Princess Celestia; her name, Sunset Shimmer.

She was arrogant and thought little of those she saw beneath her, testing Celestia's limits. Now, with the final limit broken when she snuck into the forbidden sector of the Canterlot Library, she was to be expelled. In her attempt to avoid capture, she fled through the magic mirror just as it was about to seal again for another 30 Moons.

Principle Celestia and Vice-Principle Luna were ready to call it quit for the night at the Canterlot High School. (CHS) On their way out, they find a young girl passed out on the front sidewalk of the statue.

Rushing over to help the young girl, scattering around her were items that question her origin; their school is about to be dragged into a world of craziness and some wacky shenanigan.


Further Details

Others: There are other characters who will be focus in the story (Too many to add) so I will mention them here. Chrysalis, Discord, Vice-Principal Luna, Dean Cadance, Twilight Velvet, Night Light, Shining Armor, (Sci)Twilight Sparkle, The Dazzlings, and 'He Who Should Not Be Named' . . . *Cough* Flash Sentry *Cough*

Changes may be added to tags in later time (I will try to keep Rating down to Everyone, just mild use of blood and fighting. I won't go too dark in them.)
I may also throw in some Romance in later chapters.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 36 )

Tracking! Looking forward for more! This is a great story. ^^

I'm keeping an eye on this one keep it going.

Critisim so far nothing but complaint! And that is THE NEXT BUTTON IS MISSING!? Thoughts on it well looks like a pretty great story! Good Job 👍😘

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Thanks and I'll be sure to fix that problem really soon. 🤣

This looks interesting, I think I'll keep an eye on this one

This is looking promising. I can't wait to read more. Just out of curiosity, (and you don't have to answer in case spoilers) but are you going for the whole Sunset learning about friendship before the first Equestria Girls movie. Because there's not enough of those out there as far as I know and I'm kinda in to it

Call in the men in black! We got a girl with books way too advanced for her!
But seriously though, this is getting quite interesting. What was Sunset's age as a pony again?

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I want to say 13-15 as I could not find an actual source. And nice with the reference to the shooting test of Men in Black. Now, if you'll come with me for the Eye exam.

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Yeah the EqG ages are weird. With respect to their Equestrian counterparts, some seem aged up like the CMC and others around their age, others are aged down like the Mane 6, some are really aged down like the Sisters, and some seem more or less the same like Cherrilee.

The plot has gotten nice and thick, just the way I like it!

While SHIT didn't see that come.:rainbowderp::twilightoops:

Thanks for the update🙏😘

This is getting interesting. Can't wait to see more

Well, that simplifies and complicates things. At least there won't be any worries about there being two Sunset running around. On the other hand, one's dead... so there's gonna have to be some cover-up story.
Also, Mrs. Sol means Celestia must be married
or a widow.
I wonder if the topic of magic ever came up in that journal?:rainbowhuh:

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*whistle innocently* Cover-up stories? What cover-up stories?! I'm not hiding any cover-up stories, YOU ARE!

Lol, yeah. I have plans for the whole other Sunset is dead thing. Also the content of the book will be explained.

Also, Mrs. Sol means Celestia must be married
or a widow.

. . . So yeah, the content of the book will be explained! :trixieshiftright:

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Dodging my observations, are you? What are you hiding?!
Just kidding, I await with eagerness for the next update:twilightsmile:

Interesting story. Added to my read list.

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Thanks, and I'll get a new chapter up soon, I'd hoped to get it up sooner but it was 1 problem after another here. (Work & Weather.)

I'm really enjoying this story, keep up the good work!

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Can say the same about you and Siren Night. Thanks.

I'm sorry to hear you had to experience losing a family member, I too had lost someone very close to me earlier this year to complications of COVID along with infections in their blood, lungs, kidneys etc. The person I had lost was my mother and she would have been 70 this past July. :applecry::pinkiesad2:

Anyways great work on this chapter despite having a junky laptop that kept messing with you. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, and sorry to hear that.

Even my brother (he is skilled with technology that he built his own computer tower from scratch) said it was a piece of junk since it is a 4gb of ram running a Windows 10 (Pre-installed) and so it has NO ram to do anything.

Thank you for the great chapter and my condolences 🙏
We can wait for the next chapter so just focus on your life for now 👍☺️

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You're very welcome.

That sucks. :(

Oof, I can feel Celestia already longing for Sunset at the end there.
And unless this turns into an AU where Sunset has a different name, the sisters (and Chrysalis) are gonna find a way for Sunset to keep her name.

My condolences for your loss and hope things get better, (including getting a better laptop).

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Yeah, wonder how it would go if those two meets again . . . Wonder if there will be tears on both side.

And with her name, who can say. Would be interesting if she keeps her name and someone comes across those files somehow. :scootangel:

And yeah, hoping everything gets better myself, only time will tell.

Updated News


I managed to get in touch with a good friend of mine who'd done editing for me in the past and agreed to help me with my stories.

He can be a bit. . . Unpredictable. But, he is a nice guy. When he's not out stealing souls or burning villages to the ground.

I got to say, the ideas he came up with are exciting and he's good at leaving cliffhangers. He'll write up soon and we should see progress in no time at all. See everyone soon.

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I've spoken with my friend and we are working on returning, I would had done so earlier but October became a handful with my birthday, work, my 2nd oldest brother's birthday who flew out here for a couple weeks (every off days I had was spent playing board games or riding around town)

Now, my brother's out of town again and my birthday passed, only thing blocking me is work which I'll managed.

Be writing soon~ :pinkiecrazy:

Sorry for your loss. Added this to my read list.

Rereading. Hope all is well. :twilightsmile:

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I'll be coming back to this soon, already working on writing this as well my others.

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