• Member Since 23rd Apr, 2012
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Trials


This is my contribution to all the witty and unique descriptions that everyone aside from me seemingly has on this damned site. You're welcome.

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"I wake up. Looking around my current location, I discover my own body. It's as plain as the blank canvas surrounding me. My shape is merely an outline of black and white. With no alternating colour, I am nothing more than a basic template."

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So, if you've read this before, I'm very sorry. My brother decided to be a dick, and promptly deleted it when I left my laptop alone. Serves me right, really — shouldn't have been so trusting. Again, I apologise for having to submit it once more.

At least you didn't leave Facebook open. Well, I thought it was good, will vote it up again. I think, if I'm correct, it's about the creation of the show and the sudden existence of the characters?

Well, I liked it.

Well, this was some pretty deep stuff.

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I always wonder why people think it necessary to post things like this, one of a few reasons I've sometimes considered becoming a psychologist for.

Anyways, going to read this and see if it interests me.

Like the cover art

And that is a really bad photo shop pic brony fag

Okay, I read it.
Its definitely a different pace, but not unwelcome.

Hmm, when I proof read this, why didn't I comment!!!??? Well then, it was one of your better fictions Trials, and there were no spelling mistakes from my point of view. So you're all good!:twilightsmile:

1238369 Well, I don't have Facebook, but that would've been worse. Thank you, and yes, that is right.

1238382 Thanks for saying so. :twilightsmile:

1238485 Cheers for having a look, it means a lot to me. :twilightsheepish:

1238755 Well, I decided to try a different concept than I usually do. Deep was exactly what I wanted to do, so thanks for confirming. :yay:

1238881 1238923 Just ignore the troll. It thrives on your hatred, or even your acknowledgment of it.

1238901 Yeah, it was that pic that inspired me into writing this. A guy named InuHoshi-to-DarkPen made it, and he's very good.

1238958 Not a pace I'm used to. :twilightsmile: Thanks for reading.

1240040 Damn, I forgot to include your name in the title. Just going to put it in, even if it's too late. :facehoof: Thanks for checking it, though!

I know the voice it is Lauren Faust isn't it? :rainbowdetermined2:

1238923 dude ur calling yourself a fag :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

1241935 Indeed, it is. :twilightsmile: This story is pretty much about her creating Dash.

1242041 yay I'm right at something for once:pinkiehappy: (just kidding I have an A level in math English ans Science. I'm a nerd :twistnerd:)

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To be perfectly honest, I almost laughed when I saw that image. maybe if he took the time to think out and argument I may have considered having a real debate. :trollestia:

Wow, I like the concept of it! It was pretty well-written and it could of been worse.

I think a applause is in order! :scootangel:

1242139 Not too shabby.




I kid, that's very good. Doesn't necessarily make you a nerd, though. You're meant to pass A levels, so I don't think it means you're a nerd. :scootangel:

1242672 Knowing that kind of troll, it probably wouldn't have responded. If the only way they can get their kicks in posting hate pictures, they obviously don't have the intelligence nor the ability to reply. Unless, of course, they post another picture, which would only further my understanding of their dimwittedness. Just sayin'. :twilightsheepish:

1242941 Thank you. :twilightsmile: I'm glad it didn't turn out worse...

1243477 Thanks a lot! Truth be told, though, I'm not a good storyteller. My stories are only based off of some other story, and while in this case it's a TV series, it's still the same concept. :twilightsheepish: But, why not give it a go? You get better as you write more, so it's only a matter of starting. While beginning may be hard, the rewards are enough to get you writing the next story. Comments like yours just work like that. If you change your mind, I'll try to help you write. :twilightsmile:

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Its really funny because he did post another picture, except its under my comments on my user page. :rainbowlaugh:

1243592 Ha, just had a look. If he does start a debate, which I highly doubt, be sure to invite me. I'll bring the popcorn, you get the baseball bats. :scootangel:

I just don't understand people like that. The person isn't even being original, he's/she's using irrelevant memes and pictures that aren't even made by it.

1243662 Yeah, sure. :scootangel: Descriptions are easy enough; you can just visit a thesaurus — or me — if you get stuck. Anyway, just PM me when you want to, and I'll do my best.

1241947 whit I did? My b

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And that is a really bad photo shop pic brony fag

You wrote this

About half-way through, I got the idea that what you were trying to portray is Rainbow Dash's point of view through the process of animation before the first episode. Whether that is what you were trying to do or not, it was interesting. I enjoyed it.

1247709 Yes, the whole story was about her development into the story. It started with a simple sketch, and then grew into the programme you know today. Thanks for saying so, and I'm glad you understood it. :twilightsmile:

Oh I meanr the guys name... mix up:derpytongue2: sorry

This is a really cool idea, and excellently executed. Well done. :pinkiehappy:

1456750 Thank you! :twilightsmile: Always nice to hear.

This was a great, original concept, and it's done nicely. I really liked it. :pinkiehappy:

This was a little strange, but it had a concept that was unique.:pinkiesmile:

Gotta say, this is fucking brilliant on so many levels.

Hay, I can remember stuff from my fillyhood, but I just can't remember the beginning of that day for the life of me. It doesn't matter, really, but I just haven't been able to let it go. It's like a gap in my memories, and I just can't quite patch it back up.

Oh, if she only knew that was the instant everything came into existence.

Whatever, or whoever it was, it spoke with a passion I've never known before.

Got a bit of a chill here, heh.

But yeah, I love stories like this.

Now aint this a big ol' kiss blown toward Lauren F.? And man was a feeling chills throughout the whole thing! How she didn't really know who or what she was while she was blank. And as readers we could only tell because of the cover art but if you ignore that you couldn't have guess it was RB at all! A whole suffocating feeling of not know who or even what you are that was terrifying and became worse after she realized who she was and how deeply she wanted to be with her friends yet still trapped... But enough of that. I Loved this!:heart::pinkiehappy:

Very well thought out and wonderfully executed. :twilightsmile:

That... that was really good.

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