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Author's note: So... how was it for you?

It's so mundane and commonplace, and I feel just a little funny for helping write it. :twilightsheepish:

Oh lord allmighty....:facehoof:

:rainbowhuh: Four authors worked on this and it's only just above one thousand words? I find it difficult enough to stay at 550 every month. Oh well.
:ajbemused:Anyway, it does seem kind of short. I suppose there is going to be a part two but it dosn't seem to really go anywhere yet except we know Spike has a secret admirer. This is the first clop-style fic I've ever bothered to read, but I can't help but feel that something is missing and I'm not talking about random "bucking." I think this nearly deserves a random tag too (Pinkie says "Jail Bait" for no reason.)

Oh and one more thing. "...silky, white chest jungle..." :twilightoops: What?

That's all. :twilightsheepish:

Well played, guys... So well-played that it hurts!

Oh god, my lungs. They need air but this fic won't let me stop laughing!

That was brilliantly written, and I would give you all a standing applause if I could.

What's good about this fanfic?
It doesn't follow the typical "Obscure clopfic" innuendo. Y'know, the one that goes by "Something suggestive happens, something proving that suggestiveness was wrong happens, fake resolution, suggestive action is proved correct all along".
This fanfic instead makes it clear by the description alone that nothing is happening; but it is written in a way that makes you perceive things actually happening.

What the buck did I just read:twilightsmile: screw it give me moar! ..please:fluttercry:

Faved, because there needs to be more stories like this one. All four of you get a thuimbs up from me.

Was Spike trying to get raped!
Anyway if you excuse me I really need find some oxygen.:twilightsmile:

But who was secret admirer? I must know.

Also, :rainbowlaugh:

I give it five sandvitch :rainbowkiss:

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Author Interviewer

Ridiculous.

Phenomenal.

I'm so glad there's a second chapter coming. Oh, is it ever coming. That chapter is coming so hard, I'll bet, right...

...now.

This.

This is how molestia views the world.

1269959 Nope. Owlor dying in the bathroom was funny because it was unexpected. Those fanfics should not bear the tag Comedy.

1271812 BAD OVERDONE! NO PINKIE PIE FOR YOU!

1271951 Jokes aside: I imagine that guy's skeleton floating around inside that thing.

1271976 That fact actually makes it worse. :raritydespair:

1272046 I guess... if her life aspirations consist on becoming a sandwich between those oily folds. :pinkiesick:

1272231 That dude can't get out of bed in order to feed himself. So the question is: WHY THE FUCK ARE THEY FEEDING HIM/1

Hey, we just got done reading your fiction. My friend and I have a channel dedicated to reading My Little Pony clop and gore fiction, and we enjoyed your story to the furthest extent one could possibly enjoy it whilst hating clop. Take that for what it's worth.

If you're interested, the video should be up in a day or two. Check it out on Youtube! CacophonyStories.

Trollestia received note, no surprise here:trollestia:

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