Author's note: So... how was it for you?

It's so mundane and commonplace, and I feel just a little funny for helping write it.

>>12289161228916 I know the feel xD

Oh lord allmighty....

MFW:

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OH GOD YES

ALL MY YES

Four authors worked on this and it's only just above one thousand words?  I find it difficult enough to stay at 550 every month.  Oh well.  

Anyway, it does seem kind of short.  I suppose there is going to be a part two but it dosn't seem to really go anywhere yet except we know Spike has a secret admirer.  This is the first clop-style fic I've ever bothered to read, but I can't help but feel that something is missing and I'm not talking about random "bucking."  I think this nearly deserves a random tag too (Pinkie says "Jail Bait" for no reason.)

Oh and one more thing.  "...silky, white chest jungle..."             What?

That's all.

>>12307611230761 I don't think I could ever bring myself to write actual clop xD This really was meant to be a satiric piece! And I agree fully! This needs a random tag! :D *added*

Oh, and I thought that would sound better than, "...silky, white chest hair..."~!

Well played, guys... So well-played that it hurts!

Oh god, my lungs. They need air but this fic won't let me stop laughing!

That was brilliantly written, and I would give you all a standing applause if I could.

What's good about this fanfic?

It doesn't follow the typical "Obscure clopfic" innuendo. Y'know, the one that goes by "Something suggestive happens, something proving that suggestiveness was wrong happens, fake resolution, suggestive action is proved correct all along".

This fanfic instead makes it clear by the description alone that nothing is happening; but it is written in a way that makes you perceive things actually happening.

What the buck did I just read screw it give me moar! ..please

Faved, because there needs to be more stories like this one. All four of you get a thuimbs up from me.

Was Spike trying to get raped!

Anyway if you excuse me I really need find some oxygen.

But who was secret admirer? I must know.

Also,

I give it five sandvitch

>>12303631230363 Ha! Glad you liked it :D

>>12308111230811 YUS! *fist pump*

>>12309521230952 ! C:

>>12309841230984 Yes indeed! Kinda like the The Assumption Song!

>>12316261231626 Moar to come :3

>>12318711231871 ^w^ Thanks!

>>12320391232039 xD Glad you enjoyed!

>>12324541232454 I know! You'll know too when part two is finished! I think it's pretty funny xD

>>12326071232607 5 sandvich is best number of sandvich!

Ridiculous.

Phenomenal.

I'm so glad there's a second chapter coming. Oh, is it ever coming. That chapter is coming so hard, I'll bet, right...

...now.

This was absolutely fantastic. I can't wait for the next chapter.

So how about that window?

This.

This is how molestia views the world.

>>12309841230984 What? So like Writer's Group Clop? Owlor dies in the bathroom?

>>12699591269959 Nope. Owlor dying in the bathroom was funny because it was unexpected. Those fanfics should not bear the tag Comedy.

>>12701891270189 Aww...but...but Waffle House...

>>12718121271812 BAD OVERDONE! NO PINKIE PIE FOR YOU!

>>12719301271930

Aww...

Y'KNOW WHAT!? THAT"S IT!

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EYE RAPE! ENJOY!

I'm very offended by your lack of faith. One might even say I find it disturbing.

>>12719511271951 Jokes aside: I imagine that guy's skeleton floating around inside that thing.

>>12719601271960 LOL! Probably...aww...now I feel bad for laughing at him. At least he's married right?

>>12719761271976 That fact actually makes it worse.

>>12720201272020 I thought it was pretty funny to hear that he was married.

>>12720461272046 I guess... if her life aspirations consist on becoming a sandwich between those oily folds.

>>12721611272161 Eww...never say that again...

>>12722311272231 That dude can't get out of bed in order to feed himself. So the question is: WHY THE FUCK ARE THEY FEEDING HIM/1

Hey, we just got done reading your fiction. My friend and I have a channel dedicated to reading My Little Pony clop and gore fiction, and we enjoyed your story to the furthest extent one could possibly enjoy it whilst hating clop. Take that for what it's worth.

If you're interested, the video should be up in a day or two. Check it out on Youtube! CacophonyStories.

Trollestia received note, no surprise here

>>18725141872514 XD