wut

Im going to keep reading. Its ok so far could be beater

No, pinkie!!!

NOOOOOO PINKIE!!!!!!!

Correction: he pulled out his trusty rain blower

Should be she and her ( pyro is female )

>>12244481224448

The scout is of the same team as the pyro, and he calls the pyro him and she. So its genre is unknown.

PINKIE PIE!

hmm... i have a feeling this isn't quite the end of pinke yet so i'm not gonna go all

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we shall see how this goes.

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>>12244481224448

I actually wanted to use both gender pronouns like the Scout did in Meet the Pyro but I thought that would get confusing, me using "he" and "his" is actually a mistake; but I'm gonna go back and use male pronouns where applicable since using "it" makes reading the story so arduous.

the ending wasn't what I was expecting... and that's not a good thing. it seemed very rushed and ill-thought out. though I do see now that it's an "Incomplete" story, so I'll be checking back in to see if anything's changed for the better. (and no, I won't thumbs-down it yet)

I honestly thought I was going to enjoy this, but found it to be too rushed; I was expecting the pyro and pinkie to become great friends, not this.  Sorry but unless you improve this greatly I'm going to have to dislike it.

EDIT: Wow, sorry for making assumptions, I thought pinkie died!  Nvm, I'm liking this!

DAMN YOU, CLIFFHANGERS!

Nice description: I personally believe he is a female. apart from that story went a bit fast, ending was a lil odd, will check back later to see if it improves.

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>>12244481224448 actually in the New official

Wait... why are stories with a lot of grammar errors getting featured?

I like this a lot, but please, PLEASE fix these wall of text issues. And your problems with punctuation and dialouge.

>>12258861225886

Or you know... Valve will just keep throwing hints in both directions in an endless game of guessing. Like the Female symbol in the clouds at the top right at the start of the pyrovision.

Or the purse in the locker room...

Or the fact that Scout calls it a he and a she during his interview.

Don't think they'll ever reveal Pyro's gender as it's just one of those neat little things about the game.

>>12260361226036 That symbol in the video is a male symbol, not female, which is why it's blue. And scout never says she, Scout says he both times. He just says "is he", so it sounds like she.

>>12244481224448

Nope.avi. Just Nope.avi.

You cannot confirm Pyro is female, as Valve didn't revealed if he is. And Valve never will. So, neither "he pulled out his trusty rain blower" and "she pulled out her trusty rain blower" is correct. The correct term is "Pyro pulled out it's trusty rain blower"

You got my attentions... Also...

If Pinkie dies... a certain Writer will end up dead...

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Uh, story is good so far, except for the occasional grammatical error. But still, I'm faving it.

Wow he's mean. But i think she is going to get it now. It should never mess with Pinkie.

Oh, fuck fuck fuck fuck. Why, Pinkie? Why the hell did you go in there? Why?!!?!?!??!?!?!

Part of why we all like the pyro is the mystery his thoughts her name  the meet the pyro vid raised more questions then it answered having her talk makes him lose some of that.

As for the pyro load out here. what's more colorful and magical then equestria the place is perm pyro vision.

Please tell me his rainblower doesn't have a flamethrower switch.... pleeaaaasee...

Can't wait for Chapt. 3!

Pinkie is friends with pryo... Now we have two crazy ponies... people.  

It actually was bubbles and rainbows? (clutches chest) Oh thank God! You almost gave me a heart attack!

>>12268651226865 If it didn't that will ruin the fun (Firebug for hire by the way).

Use more commas, dude, commas are your friends.

>>12266451226645 HERE IS MY POST, I BEAT YOU WITH IT!

this is great

>>12270901227090 pyro wouldn't  do it on purpose, he was just doing a spy check that's all.

[/size]PYRO![size=10]*whisper* i have a idea, luna wont trust you, so pull out your axe. you no what to do.

>>12261061226106 If you look at the subtitles,it says "he" and "she"

aww i wish only pinki and pyro could see the rainbow bubbles the rest of equestrea would just see fire!

5 mustaches to u

You should keep the flare gun the way it is just because.

I just love the pause after Pinkie says "how could he be dangerous, he's giving us candy!"

This is going to be good ... My pinkysence tells me so

I see you went with Valve's "Pyro Vision" for this.

...You know what this Pyro needs? This

I always like to think that since the pyro sees the war torn landscape as a magical land, then he sees equestria (the magical land) as a war torn landscape, basicly the pyro sees Equestria as a war zone not a magical happy pony-filled world as we know it.

who wants to play with pinke or pyro :) hehe

(10 face hoof s for you

and 8 rainbows

>>12272041227204

I can't agree with you more.

Tatony, if you're comma-intolerant (whatchoo got against commas? ) then get an editor.

Great, now I need to find a Genuine sun on a stick to name "Devil's Toilet Plunger".

wow... you almost gave me a heart attack!

Cant wait for chapter 3!

i love this! the pyro's thoughts and such. this story is hilarious!

>>12280631228063 I think I have one...

this is interesting cant wait for chapter 3

>>12258861225886 WRONG....nobody noes what gender pyro is.....mayby a shim

so the pyro speaks like a highly educated gentleman? huh. did'nt see that one coming. I salute you on a job well done.

Physics is why we doesnt has to need unicorns or pegasai. Everything does it's shit by itselfs and doesnts need anyones to does it for thems. Anyways, English aren't that hard.

>>12289141228914

I'm in pain and all I did was read it....

Twilight should say "I have a plan."

You only use 'an' when the next word starts with a vowel, or a word that, when spoken, sounds like it begins with a vowel. You also use 'a' when the word starts with a vowel, but when spoken, sounds like it starts with a consonant.

I have a slice of cake

I have an umbrella

It took an hour

I have a ukulele

>>12289341228934

The original line used "idea" instead of "plan," I forgot to change the indefinite form though, thanks

I think his home is even farther away than that.

Tell me Twilight... how in the world did you figure that out!

>>12289891228989 Magic

TOO MANY FICS I WANT TO READ IN FEAT BOX MAKE IT STOPPP

>>12287401228740 Actually it is just that in translation to the common-tongue speech is elevated a few IQ points. (See: Chapter 18 of my story, when they're speaking Australian.)

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!

DON'T YOU F***ING DARE REMOVE THE PYRO'S MASK, NO MATTER HOW HARD IT IS TO UNDERSTAND HIM/HER!

On another note, apart from the painful grammar, a great story which I would apreciate a lot more if I had played TF2.

>>12289141228914 Ya blitherin idiot! Ya makin us country folk look like a bunch of stupid cali surf hicks! Whats wrong with ya? Get the talk right!

...well alright then.

>>12292821229282 dude. magic. Twilight's prolly gunna use some sort of mind-reading spell. because nobody would remove Pyro's mask.

right?

>>12293381229338 I dunno, but the author never said anything about not removing the mask.

Pyro is a dude nuff said

NAH.... NAH, why does everypony believe A GOT DANG SUBTITLE.... Scout obviously said HE.... AND ONLY HE.... NEVER SHE.

PYRO'S VOICE SOUNDS LIKE A GUY.  IT'S LIKE PEOPLE CALLING RAINBOW DASH A LESBIAN.... oh she's a tomboy... oh she helped Fluttershy up and it looked like she kissed her....NO....NO... WRONG, EVERYPONY ASSUMES THESE THINGS BECAUSE THEY ARE LUSTFUL!

>>12289331228933 I'm glad my comment did what it was intended to do.

To quote why our worlds don't need things to control them is simple and to quote jack rakan here. "sometimes you gotta wipe your own ass"  ps Jack Rakan died. Decide fuck that I'm gonna live, and reappears due to willpower.

I love how pyro is like Gummy, he apears to not be smart but in reality he is a genius.

Oh dear.. twilight has a plan.. *mcguffen senses tingling*

>>12294521229452

This.

>>12291181229118 *snort snort*

>>12291181229118

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Opposing forces welder has the same gas tank in the picture O3O pyro=welder from Half-Life opposing force the world shall never know!

I WANT TO KNOW!

>>12261061226106

To be quite honest, I believe that is a light blue colored female symbol that's blurred out so people can't actually tell what it is.  I'm having trouble trying to determine if it's a cross or an arrow at the end, but I believe that's the point.

Meanwhile in Rainbow Dash's mind

>>12273971227397 The subtitles on you tube videos are not to be trusted, they mess up all the time and even if they were throwing signs both way it would sound dumb and confusing in that sentence, I think people wanna to hear what they want to hear

>>12308251230825

The Sub titles are from Valve

Its another Is pyro a girl/boy thing

They did it in meet the spy on the Alarm-o-Tron With stuff like

RED PYRO

IS A WOMAN

IS A MAN

and IS A ROBOT in there somewhere

i don't normally read crossovers, but from the disctription, i love you already

TO THE TO READ LIST WITH YOU

You said mare six it's mane six!

Read Later, sorry, I'm busy reading others.

>>12312581231258

I totally agree.  Excellent work here.  Though I was very nervous at the end of the first chapter.  But I see now my worry was wrong.  (There is a word i wanted to use instead of wrong but I can't remember it so I am like, eh.)

First?

Aww

Since you have experience sending ponies too far off places

Oh yeah, and it's 'to'.

hunh. woulda thought Twilight woulda rrigged up some sorta spell to read thoughts.

Soldier's obliviousness is funny.

oh shit there is a new hat for the heavy that is shaped like the pyro and can set people on fire?i gotta go play TF2 and buy it right now

Another crate filled with things trying to kill us, let's open it!

*Plays TF2 and is A Brony*

Your' just trying to get on my good side, aren't cha?

:3 Well it worked, I'm gonna read this, RIGHT NOW and I don't care if I like it or not, I give it a thumbs up.

Sir, you are the fastest story updater I've ever seen! I used to update stories fast like you, but then I was struct with laziness. And try to improve your grammar. :l

trololol!

My mind...

Has been blown.

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:3 Yes.

I like this, it made me giggle, and that my friend is not an easy task.

Im'a give you a like.

Great story. I lol-ed

>>12258861225886 lol do you believe in magic

>>12313531231353 "One shudders to imagine what inhuman thoughts lie behind that mask..."

>>12321011232101 yes, but according to th' story so far, Pyro's got some pretty elonquent speech, and his mental capacity is at least at Spy's level, probally higher.

Since I am a TF2 FREAK and the Pyro is my favorite I can't get enough of this story.

MOAR