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What if whenever you went to sleep, you would wake up in Ponyville? What would you do? How would you react?

Well, that happens to me. Every night. Whenever I go to sleep here, a wake up in Ponyville. And whenever I go to sleep there, I wake up here. Now you'd think it'd be pretty awesome, and it is. But having to switch between ponyville and the real world everyday can get real annoying. Especially when you have to wake up in a hospital only to be told that your blood pressure hasn't been checked in the past four hours. And eventually you begin to wonder what actually is real and what is only a dream.

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Hey Guys! So this story IS based on real life events. I really did have cancer, and most of the things in the first chapter really did happen, just not necessarily in that order. Now, Obviously, I didn't really get warped into Equestria, but I thought it would make for a good story. Please feel free to tell me what you think and ideas as to how I can improve on it. :yay:

This story is dedicated to anyone who has ever had to go through the tough battle of cancer, or who knows anyone who has/is going through it. My prayers go out to you. :fluttershysad:

I read the first paragraph, and decided tracking was in order....

You can really write man. I love this. I am not usually the one to care on how some brony on the internet got into the shot because it's always the same thing. But this is amazing. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this!!!

1220380 Thanks Man. I really was just sitting around thinking of an idea of a fan fiction that was original yet worth reading. At first I was just going to where whenever I went to sleep, I'd wake up in Equestria, and vice versa. But I thought it was kinda cliche and lacked a plot that I could really build upon. Then I thought, what If I based it on my real encounters with cancer, and went from there. That really added to the characterization, emotion, and overall plot. So what could've been probably three chapters at most is not probably going to be around ten at the very least. :twilightsmile:
And thanks for the compliment. This is really the first story I've ever really worked on besides school assignments, so I was nervous as to how it would turn out. Apparently It turned out much better than I thought. :pinkiehappy:




1221809 I am currently working on chapter two. I'm really trying to put enough detail where it is needed and not just rush through it as fast as I can. I'd rather it take longer and be better than be done quicker yet have less overall quality.
Plus, I'm having to recall and write about some pretty emotional things from my past, so it's kinda hard to do to much at once.
:pinkiesick::applejackconfused:
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I promise I'll upload as soon as I'm done with it. :yay:

At first I thought "Oh lord, someone made a fanfic about cancer.":facehoof:
But once I read it, I'm actually impressed. This fic has a lot of emotion in it, I'm really excited to hear how it'll come out! Especially coming from somebody who actually had the disease (which, by the way, I hope you never get again).

1222536 Thanks! :rainbowwild: Yea, at first glance at the title, I can totally see how that could be taken as a trollfic. :twilightsheepish: :derpyderp1:

Nice! I have been hoping that someone would write a fic like this! :pinkiehappy:

fwhew, going through a cancer battle, i can't imagine anyone who'd deserve it more to wake up in equestria when they sleep =3

for any corrections i can't name more than i think Pet scan is also in capitals, so PET scan, as the letters are as much an abbreviation as MRI and CT, but that's a pretty trivial thing. Only useful thing i can mention is one line in the last paragraph, "I my head finally stopped hurting long enough for me to see what was the cause of me being airborne" that I shouldn't be there =3

and that's me just reaching at straws for something to suggest. My own story is filled with LOTS more flaws, though hopefully removing my current chapters and replacing them with the [already twice the size] revised prologue i'm working on will improve it's rating and quality some. I'd go as far as saying i recommend you don't read the version i have on FIMFiction anymore ^^;.

i am itching to see what you'll write for the next chapters, and wish you the best of luck ^^ a survivor like you deserves it.

1223334 Thanks for pointing that out. I think i realize what happened in the last paragraph: Originally I had twilight picking me up with her magic, but canceled that idea. Apparently I forgot to delete that sentence.
Not having a proofreader can be kinda tricky. But thanks again for bringing that to my attention. I'll definitely fix that.

1223334 Scratch that. I thought you meant that it wasn't clear as to how i was floating, but it was just the extra "I". Haha Fail on my part. :facehoof:

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hun, there is no fail whatsoever on your part! :pinkiesmile::twilightsmile::raritywink::rainbowkiss::ajsmug::yay:

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I know how it is to write a story at first. It's kinda weird but once you start, it's really hard to stop writing!

122540 I traveled down the same road as you. I am a survivor of brain cancer. I have a keloid on the back of mu head to prove it. I endured chemo for a month before it left me. I still have nightmares about mu personal analogy for it: 10 atom bombs going off per square inch of my body, on every inch of my body. *shudders* I despised chemo. Fortunately, it was about 7 years

Chapter Two is FINALLY up! So sorry for the long wait, but school has been CRAZY!!! Plus, I'm having to remember some pretty rough times.:ajbemused: And I know there are probably many grammatical mistakes. I promise I'll fix them as soon as possible. I'm actually leaving for my make a wish cruise later this morning, so I won't have internet for awhile. But I'll fix any mistakes I have once I get home. Hopefully chapter three won't take NEARLY as long as this one... :twilightblush:


Again, thank you all so much for the support you've given me. It really does mean alot. :yay:
Will post once I get home!





Oh, and if you are just DYING to see vacation pics, you can follow me on instagram. @darrenssonharrison (I know, shameless promotion. But hey, Pinkie approves :pinkiehappy:)

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Wow. That really sucks. :fluttercry: And Chemo really is the worst possible thing. :pinkiesick:
But I'm really glad you're doing better now! :pinkiehappy:

Wait...He goes to sleep in Equestria, wakes up on Earth. Goes to sleep on Earth, wakes up in Equestria.
I sense a very glorious mind-f*ck in the near future.:pinkiehappy:
Now I wonder.... If cancer is cured in Equestria, will it be cured in Earth as well? :derpyderp1:

Keep up the great work, I'm loving this story. (I'm in the minority that like HiE stories :scootangel: )

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Like I said, it was 7 years ago, so no biggie.

I sense a very glorious mind-f*ck in the near future.:pinkiehappy:

Haha, yes. Quite so.

This is really good man! I really can't wait till the next chapter is up.

Raridalilightershappiepie

I see what you did there.

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