Snowflake, or as some refer to him 'Roid Rage', is more than a beefy mass of a pegasus. There is more to him than most think. This is his story. A small one shot fic.
Image credit to http://asksteroidpony.tumblr.com/
Nice little one shot. More about his personal history than anything else, but still cool.
>>12183081218308 Thank you haha, originally I was gonna write a shipfic, but I figured this would be better.
>>12183311218331 Or that. You can go with this or you can go with that. You can go with this or you can go with that. You can go with this, but this is where it's at.
>>12183401218340 Nice rhymes, brah. What I meant was I like this story. Hence, 'This.'
*cough* Check my fics out *cough*
>>12183501218350 Ah I shall do this friend.
>>12183621218362 I'm thinkin' I'll give that Twilight & Celestia fic you got a read, it seems to pique my overall interests more-so than the other two.
It's not much, really. It's quite half-aed, to be honest. An hour's product.
>>12183731218373 So it's very similar to this here one-shot I made. The fueling of a spark in your mind that you felt you had to put down for others to read. Sometimes those can be the best stories... And also some of the worst if somebody doesn't know the difference between simple words like to and too.
>>12183771218377 I suppose that's true. Alright, go nuts on my stories.
I have that Twi&Tia one open right meow.
Like a sir!~
>>12184331218433 Indubitably, I figured this would work fairly well as a contrast of character.
There's also a theory going around that Featherweight IS Snowflake's son...
>>12184611218461 Are you cereal? If so that's awesome and therefore makes me feel like a badass.
Take a look for yourself:
>>12184801218480 Aaaaah! I like it! That's awesome.
Was quite the pleasure to read my good author.
>>12188231218823 Was quite the pleasure to receive the compliment my good reader. Glad ya liked it brother.
I would really enjoy seeing more of this. Snowflake was an unexpected surprise of pure awesome when he first popped up. I'd love to see him get more background and story time in people's fics.
>>12188791218879 I decided this was best as a one shot, but if somebody wants to do a spin-off or sequel to this, whatever I'm more than happy to let them use anything from my version.
This is beautiful.
Big Mac was a wee bit OC
>>12193491219349 Thank you kindly mate, on a side note, I didn't know wicked clowns liked ponies o.O
>>12193501219350 Wut? lol
Verynice, verynice. I must say I was expecting to see something along these lines soon enough, Snowflake being who he is and all, but I didn't expect to see it so well done.
Bravo! have mustaches
>>12194061219406 I shall take these mustaches and use them in the nearly vain attempt to grow a stache in a very short period of time. Side note, I honestly didn't find my writing to be all that good for it, I just tried to make it sound, look and convey decently.
I felt as if Snowflake himself was telling me his tale.
You shouldn't worry if your writing isn't spectacular or looong, the fact that it was thorough, didn't have errors (that I saw at least), and just plain read well makes this a fav.
>>12194521219452 See that's the thing, I get comments much like yours about how my writing made them envision something, like you and him telling his tale. I had one guy who said he was mentally brought to some Backwater town in Ohio or somethin' like that. I don't know how I have this effect on readers but apparently I do. I confuzzlebates me ever so greatly.
MFW I'm a high school dropout that failed every English class he had since 6th Grade
>>12194871219487 Well make like Snowflake and don't give up. You might find a peculiar image (somehow related to imagery) on your flank any day now. lol.
>>12193691219369 We're rare, but we exist. You want true internet cancer, combine juggalos and bronies together.
>>12195101219510 I ain't givin' up, I just find it funny that somebody who can fail every english class he ever had for 5 years can top High School graduates at spelling and other such prerequisites of the proper usage of the English language. Far as a mark goes, it's either that or an Eagle and Trident on my chest... HOOYAH SEALs!
>>12195361219536 That moment when I used to 'rep the hatchet' and now wear a cowboy hat... bahaha
Very nice story. Featherweight as Snowflake's son seems to fit so well.
>>12201501220150 Arigato friend, I'm glad you guys are liking this. :D
>>12193691219369 I sincerely doubt Big Mac would challenge anypony to any kind of anything.
EDIT: Except perhaps keep away with Smartypants...
>>12223341222334 Maybe now, but he may have had a competitive side back when he was younger :P
The choice of wording was perfect. Straight forward, but with hint of cerebral? I dug it.
This pleases Snowflake!
Nice little story about a background character. I've always enjoyed these sorts of stories, from the very first Derpy fics.
I like the idea of him teaching PE to the fillies and colts. Also, did you come up with the name Snowflake? I love the contrast his name has with his physical appearance
Hm, Big Macintosh losing however? I dunno about that, lol. But I guess after writing my own story about Big Mac I would say that
>>12224371222437 Are you implying I have a brain in my head? lol thanks mate. Glad you approve of my vocabulary
>>12225481222548 Thank you kindly brother :P I figured he might make a good Phys. Ed coach so I took the idea an ran with it. No I did not come up with the name, it's actually the Canon name for him surprisingly. The Big Mac thing however can be a bit controversial as everybody knows Mac as the strongest pony in Ponyville, but it never hurts to have any competition right?
Haha tru dat. I actually envisioned Big Mac as being a little competitive. If you're interested, I'd love it if you'd take a look at my story about him sometime
But you don't have to if you don't want to, I mean, um...
>>12225981222598 Sure I can do that :) so long as you take a look at 'Business is Good' and 'Business Partners' haha
>>12226301222630 Cool, btw Business Partners is a fic by my friend 'Ascended Wings'. We're doing a bit of a collaboration.
Ah, I was wondering why I couldn't find it on your stories page
>>12226361222636 Yeah, he's only one chapter in right now, but I think he's doing good for a first timer.