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TheBrownUnicorn's Stories (4)

A very special pony
This is the story about the begginings of a pony we all know and love.
1,269 words · 282 views · 12 likes · 0 dislikes
The unseen story of Light Seer
The story of a special teenage filly and her friend that has to choose between reputation, or friendship.
4,060 words · 62 views · 5 likes · 2 dislikes
The Feast of the Unicorn and the Pink Pony
Pinkie seems to have a bad (and crazy) day. However, maybe a new pony in town will cheer her up!
13,061 words · 317 views · 7 likes · 4 dislikes
The Love Quest of Stuffed Croissant
A baker who cares for money tries to find true love... somehow.
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A very special pony by TheBrownUnicorn

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Tragedy

So, why is she like that? No one in Ponyville knows, they just know she's like that. Who does know about her faults? Was it some kind of accident?

No, she's just special. She's different from every other pony in Ponyville.

This story talks about her parents, what they felt after she was born, and, most importantly, why she's special.

You are definitely special, Ditzy Doo.

((This story is really short, but it was just something I had to write, since the idea was pretty good.

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First Published
5th Sep 2012

Last Modified
13th Oct 2012

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PootBird

#1 · 37w, 1d ago ·

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AWWWWWWWWW nice

#2 · 34w, 5d ago ·

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Just one error.

this one was a mare, a white stallion with a yellow,

mare, a white stallion,

So...she's both? :rainbowhuh:

TheBrownUnicorn

#3 · 34w, 5d ago ·

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>>13156541315654 Yes, she is (?)

Actually no, that's fixed right now, thank you for pointing it out.

#4 · 34w, 4d ago ·

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>>13172511317251 Called it. :eeyup:

buggycas

#5 · 33w, 1d ago ·

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I have a complaint, Can you replace "treating" with "treatment"? It's a little confusing. Other then that, It's kind of cute. I liked it.

TheBrownUnicorn

#6 · 31w, 4d ago ·

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>>13781681378168 Alright, done. Thanks for the comment!

#7 · 5w, 4d ago ·

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I love the idea and the short storyline. :raritystarry:

I also love the characters and the quick descriptions that a short story like this one demands.

Yet, I couldn't help but think that a lot of things could have been worded better, and I picked up on a couple of mistakes.

Would you mind if I edited for you?

I just wanna fix a few mistakes. :twilightsheepish:

Like "...If you teached her well..."

No offense, but I wanted to punch my screen.

It's fine if you don't, in which case I recommend you just run through and fix it up a bit.

PM me if you do, I got plenty of time on my hands!

Again, I think you did a great job with this idea.

You deserve these: :moustache:

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