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  • 50w, 6d
    Heading to Hal-Con

    So, I'll be heading to Hal-Con this weekend and I am pretty excited as I finally managed to get this weekend off. I want to see the FiM panel especially. I would like to know what other events for FiM might be happening around the Con though. Hopefully I'll be grabbing some nice swag there.

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  • 62w, 20h
    Widening the Lens

    Now, people have been asking me about when I am going to post a new chapter of Widening the Lens. Now I am happy to report that I am putting together the new chapter and it should be up in the next two weeks if everything works out as I am hoping. On that bit, we'll be seeing things get a bit closer to the events at Hippocampus being resolved.

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  • 78w, 5d
    Shinji's Nightmare: Preview of the future

    Yes, I am still working on it. And for those of you interested, here's a preview, great thanks to Madfish for the modified song:


    Alicorn fly, discover hope's reality

    Soar now Moon Child find a brand new family

    Moonbeams, starlight and space

    Give chances of joy if you'll just make a start

    But can you be free of the pasts that you flee?

    Share your choice and you may just see

    Just once you knew innocence

    Stolen by the loss that birthed this darkest mass

    Would guarding those who still have that lie

    Make your joined hearts heal up or die?

    Now you find there that there's choice must be taken

    Those doubters will understand thee

    Take flight on this new path, the Elements guide you

    What you were is not what you must be!

    Born, betrayed, cast out, find a change that calls for ye

    Remade by the will to stop another yesterday

    Emotion flow now, reconsecrated harmonies

    Learn now, be strong, beyond dissonent history

    Stand firm! Wings flare! Horn against all difficulty!

    Soar now Moon Child together you are family!


    Ritsuko whipped her head around and looked at the Bridge Bunnies as alarms blared around them. "Well? Any comfirmation on what it is yet?"

    Makoto rapidly typed at his keyboard until he got his answer before he looked up. "Grey Waveform Pattern confirmed!"

    Misato gritted her teeth as she slammed her fist down, it's impact having dented the metal on of her desk. "WHAT THE HELL?! Another Deva?!" She growled deep in her throat. "That's the fifth now..."


    The four Evangelions stood on the seaside while the T-RIDEN-T took position among the JSSDF armor units in the hills. All of them keeping an eye on the naval group floating a few kilometers off shore. Inside Unit-02's cockpit, Asuka gripped her control sticks tightly as she looked around. "COME ON YOU BASTARD! SHOW YOURSELF!"

    Inside her own plug, Rei just blinked as she opened a com window to Asuka, two more showing Shinji in Unit-01 and a female pilot in Unit-06. "Pilot Soryu, in do believe that what you are doing is called 'Taunting Murphy'." She then noticed something on a monitor and raised an eyebrow. "And I do believe that you are about to-" She was cut off as many miles out the naval group opened fire on something in the water, N2 depth charges being deployed as well as shells and N2 torpedoes causing massive water domes to rise and fall as they hit something. "Get you wish..." Rei narrowed her eyes as she prepared herself. "It seemed to have survived."

    This was puncturated as a moment later the entire naval group slowly rose on top of a dome of water like some child surfacing below his toy boats in a bathtub. Back on shore, as a massive shadow fell over the Evangelions, Asuka looked at her pallet rifle and then back up. "Scheist... I think that we're going to need bigger guns..."


    The reporter held his hat on his head against the hot wind as he brought the mic to his throat. "Justin O'Neill, BBC, reporting from the Italian island of Scilly on the lower slopes of Mt. Etna. As you can see behind me, the volcano is going through the sixth consecurative day of erupting in what may be it's most active eruption since the geological upheavels follwing Second Impact." Him and the camera shook as a rumble filled the air and the ground trembled. "Volcanologists are stumped as to the cause of the recent activity-"

    They're all knocked off their feet as an explosion blew out a portion of the mountainside within view. Someone then screamed. "OH MY GOD! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!?"

    The cameraman and reporter stumbled to their feet and looked toward the site of the explosion in time to see several massive draconic heads emerge from the boiling ash cloud, each one having a facemask like that of Sacheil. The reporter paled as he made the sign of the cross. "Mary, Mother of God..."


    The Russian General leaned back in his chair and chuckled as he watched the battle in the viewscreens that dotted the walls of his office. "I wonder Third Child... Will you live up to expectations and possible potential before you find Salvation..." He sipped at his drink and laughed. "Or will you find only Damnation?"


    The US Marine felt sweat bead on his forehead as him and his Squad slowly moved through the alleyway silently, fully alert as they searched for their query. "Sarge? You hear anything?"


    The Sergeant shook his head. "Not a peep, Son. The other Squads haven't found the bastard yet either, so don't let it up. That thing is somewhere nearby so-" He was cut off as the wall next to him exploded outward, sending him flying into a wall as a roar was drowned out by a hail of gunfire and screams...


    From where he stood behind Gendo, Fuyutsuki frowned as as he watched the screen. "The Deva's crossed the boarder into Turkey, Ikari. Won't be long now until they call us in."

    Gendo barely nodded. "Yes, as is expected."

    The Sub-Commander shivered some. "We were lucky with Leviathan, Ikari." he glanced at him. "I'm not liking our chances with this one." As all he got was silence, he sighed. "So, what are they naming this one?"

    Hidden behind his hands, the Commander's lips turned upward as he answered. "He whose footsteps cause the very Earth to quake... Behemoth..."


    Misato slowly stepped up behind the bandaged Shinji as he stared out across the cityscape of Tokyo-3 as night fell. "Shin-chan?"

    He just sighed. "First Angels and now Devas..." Shinji turned to look at her as his mane fluttered in the evening breeze. "This war has just gotten much more complicated..."

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  • 88w, 3d
    Thoughts on "Magical Mystery Cure"

    This has been a very polarizing episode. To be frank, to me it was heavily rushed and had a lot of what might have been happening cut out. This is likely due to the Execs wanting to finish up the season quickly and turning what should have been a two parter into a single episode and thus it suffered from it.

    If I use this in my fics, it is very likely going to be expanded upon in the background. For example, Twilight is very likely going to do research into what exactly the spell might do before she even thinks of casting it like we've seen her before. In other instances, she studied first before performing a powerful spell after all. Twilight is also likely to layer protection over protection in the room where she performs it for the simple reason to be sure, and then she males sure that no one else is there that could be effected by the spell (like what happened in the episode when she cast it with no one around). Is she going to not worry about the EoH? Not really, but she'll dismiss her thoughts since not even Discord was able to do anything to them.

    On Celestia, she might well have an idea as to what the spell is supposed to do, but can't figure out how to fix it. She's been around for so long that she's set in her ways and recognizes this. But she still worked at it for a simple reason...

    She's lonely.

    She has lived for centuries and seen many, many friends pass away due to old age while she hasn't aged at all. The only Alicorns in existence is her and Luna with later Cadence. And Cadence she worries about because one day, Shining will die from old age if nothing else and she fears for what that might do.

    So, she turns to the one unicorn whose knowledgeable and powerful enough to fix the spell and whom she can trust fully.

    Twilight Sparkle.

    After all, Twilight approaches every new bit of magic with fresh eyes and excitement. She's still brimming with imagination, a strong will to succeed, and most importantly, able to see things and consider ones that Celestia herself might have missed or dismissed out of hoof. If anypony could do it, it would have to be Twilight Sparkle. And if it does turn ponies into Alicorns, then Celestia, Luna, and Cadence would never have to be lonely again and, in time, perhaps their subjects as a whole might join them if they wish.

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  • 105w, 1d
    Real Life Can Be Stranger Then Fiction

    No, really it can be. I was looking through the Megathread over on SpaceBattles when I came across something that shocked me. Now, there are very few NGE/MLP crossovers out there.

    And then I find that GAINAX might have a few fans for MLP...

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  • ...

When the Elements of Harmony defeated Discord, they did their job too well, and completely undid all of the things Discord directly did...

... Like send a subcontinent from earth into a pocket dimension so he could focus properly on his toys. And now Equestria has appeared on Earth.

Yet, neither side was completely ignorant of the other. On Earth, there was the show "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic" and in Equestria there was the ever popular movie serial "The Dark World: Technology is Courage" which was a favorite of colts everywhere as well as the "Pumans".

And now both sides learn through an event that the other is real. Come join us as we watch as both sides learn to work and live together. And as they find out that events on their respective fiction was not as nice as it seemed as we widen the lenses of the view points...

A Round Robin created on SpaceBattles of which I am a participant and am posting with all their permission.

First Published
4th Sep 2012
Last Modified
13th Nov 2013

Intesesting concept, now let me reed it.


...It got a little sloppy after the prologue.


And Glorious SpaceBattles invasion of FImFiction continues!

I think[from reading description] this is a little too overdone.

I dunno. I'm going to read it after school.


Sorry about that. Trying to fit five separate writing styles into a single chapter.:twilightblush:

That, Twilight Sparkle, is called 'The International Space Station'.  Wave; as odd as it sounds there are six seriously weirded-out sentients up there waving right back at you!

>>1217916Get off this site. If you want to advertise wares, purchase ad space from the site. Don't just post a comment.:twilightangry2:

I like this story! Good concept! Keep it coming! but where are the girls!!


They'll be coming, don't you worry.:twilightsmile: Just have to get the set up out of the way.

A new chapter already!? Yay! And I'm still liking this story! I just hope it doesn't turn violent... that would ruin this story...

Oh, I love the idea of a Pegasister C-2 jockey painting her bird with Ditzy Doo and then it being seen by the Fillydelphian pegasi watching the Enterprise.  Something tells me that a lot of very hard questions are going to be asked by mid-level bureaucrats on both sides whilst Celestia and Luna laugh their butts off at the power of Magic to make fools of the wisest of us.

I wonder if Lauren and Jay have the slightest idea what awaits them when they are marched in before the UN Security Council and asked, with cold formality, if they mind explaining what the hell they have done? What the hell made them think that they could have an informal first contact with a whole goddamn different sentient species and then think it was not just okay not to report it but to make a children's cartoon out of it? Meanwhile, as always happens, as the politicians fret, the ordinary people and ponies are finding out that they quite like being friends...

Ponies not knowing their celebrities but the humans are to them! Yet on the human side the ponies are celebrities to them man! shocking faces abound!


Well... this is a world that's pretty much our own with some differences. There will be some violence, though not for the reasons that you're likely thinking, as this is a more "Realistic" look at MLP.

Hmm... So, Dainty is another supersonic Pegasus? It's another interesting example of cross-polination between the Earth and the pocket dimension that her cutie mark should be an SR-71.  BTW - that hallucination sequence was almost certainly the inter-dimensional boundary filled with unfortunates who passed through dimensional breaches such as The Bermuda Triangle.

Ah! And she's warned the Canadians about Discord! I'm betting that one of the first official communications between the UN and the Princesses will include a demand for a certain statue to be sealed in the bottom of a multi-mile deep salt mine surrounded by automatically-fused nukes programmed to go off should he show the slightest indication of 'waking up'.

Lauren's reaction to seeing Ditzy was lovely! Welcome to the Twilight Zone, my dear Ms Faust! :derpyderp2:

My worry? It's only a matter of time before one of the more hostile races like the Griffins start trying to cause trouble.  I shudder to think what a Phalanx CIWS turret could do to a Griffin raiding party.  It would be a shame if the 'welcome to Earth' was the collapse of the shaky truce between Equestria and the other nations of their continent.


Don't bother - I've seen this before.  It's a SPAMBot, an automatic program that creates member accounts and uses them to send advertisements via the PM and review systems.  You'd never believe how much trouble they caused on sites like fanfiction.net before they tightened up their registration system to make it harder to create accounts.

>>1217981 All the more reason I like this! A realistic take on what it would be like if the actual well... worlds existed as one complete world only torn apart by an unavoidable fate this being Discord and well fairly believable too I might add.


Dainty Dish is from Higher Flier OR My Little Blackbird by AdmiralTigerclaw. I have not read it yet, but it is on my read later list.

Edit: I love how this story has played out so far and I am looking forward to more.

Love your work as always! First caught Lonely Princess on ff.net, and you got me hooked to your works. :twilightsmile: Hope to see even more!


It's not just mine here, but others as well. But thanks for the compliment.:pinkiesmile:

Damn it!  Stop posting awesome stories and making me all indecisive in regards to what I want updated next!


Don't worry, it's not just him writing!  Many, many bronies are working together to bring Equestria kicking and screaming to Earth!

The Equestrians have learnt two very important thing about their new neigbours today: 1) They are very, very, very good at killing things; 2) You screw with their friends at your own risk.

I figure that, assuming that the Diamond Dogs have anything close to a functional government, they'll be informed (in no uncertain terms) that slaver raids on a UN candidate nation will make NATO extremely cross and Russia and China reluctant to do business with you.  If there isn't a functional government and it is an Afghan- or Somali-style failed state then I imagine that thing will get extremely... unpleasant for those who aren't willing to play 'nice neighbours'.

BTW - That's the first kill by the Royal Canadian Navy Air Service since how long? And by a helo at that!


They're not even a failed state. They're roaming bands with some allied with Equestria and others like what was mentioned in the chapter. No central government, nothing.


Then this will be the chance for the Equestrian military to teach the humans something.  After all, we haven't had to deal with nomadic hunter/gather-style raiding parties really since the turn of the 20th Century.  I doubt that there is any up-to-date military doctrine for dealing with it.  The Royal Guard, on the other hand, probably teaches counter-Dog strategies and tactics as part of its basic officer training courses.

Oh wow mind blown! and here I was thinking this was gonna be a simple story! I am impressed DUDE! keep it coming!

>>1218611 Not with out giving out some of its own hurtin and damaging some of the ships and killing some people/ponies before it died


Well... it would be wank otherwise on one side and we have to keep them somewhat balanced...


Nearly forgot... who says that it was all a hallucination on Dainty`s part...:raritywink:

>>1218648 No it was good it lets the humans realize that even with warships and what not there is STILL very large threats in Equestria that it takes a combined force to take down. Oh imagine it took so much to take a single dragon down now imagine if the whole lot would get together! Good thing though it makes Equestria a dangerous place if taken too lightly.

>>1217968  Well, the first thing I would do in their place in front of the UN (chokes back a sarcastic laugh) 'Security' Council is to drop my pants and moon every last one of those self-serving bastards.  Then I'd tell them to go to Russia and play their idiotic political games in Putin's backyard where they belong.

PS:  I am not intimidated by any human.  They can all die just as easily as the rest.  :pinkiecrazy:

Thank GOD! This is SUCH a change from the Conversion Bueru stories, I love it!

who cares if humans and ponies getting along isn't really realistic, it can still be a good story! Ponies on earth! It's a fantasy, and fantasy doesn't have to be grim dark! Humans can be heroic too! YAY!

Other than the worlds converging and being peaceful with eachother.... what else can I expect from this story?

>>1218780 And then there is But, she's a Pony! which is like this.... with the peace between worlds, except with "You" and Fluttershy together.

Alarm klaxons blaring with no warning blaring with no warning was something no one present had ever heard nor ever wanted to hear.



Things won't be totally peaceful though. We're going to be realistic which means issues on all sides of the equation.


Thanks, I'll go fix that now.:twilightblush:

Grinning hard enough to begin ripping my stitches :pinkiehappy:

Brilliant and loving it!!

I like the concept, but heavenly Celestia, get a freaking editor.  It hurts to read it.


And that's great. Two different worlds or in this case, a whole new continent and many new species, meeting for the first time, let alone introducing a new political power into the world, SHOULDN'T be simple, or very peaceful. Its a big, BIG deal! tensions are on the rise, ponies and humans in power are scrambling to get the situation under control, others are on the borders, making first impressions... it's exciting!

As is the idea that both humans and ponies are going to have to re-write ALL the rules now: big sudden change is always scary and interesting!

I'm just happy that there isn't a world-ending problem like the "fatal-magic spread' and ponification going on: this makes the whole equestria/earth contact scenario play out in a much different fashion than the CB stories... one that's going to require a lot of knowledge about politics and social/cultural change to make realisitc.

I'm just happy this is trying to portray a story rather than a social commentary: realisitc is good, beliveable is better... entertain is best. use all three and you've got a killer story.

Okay... If this were to happen for real, I'd hijack a boat, take whatever weaponry I could find and help 'em out... Dude... You rock my mind.

>>1218584  With all their tunnels and guerrilla warfare tactics, it'll be Vietnam all over again.  Though technology is a lot better now and (hopefully) the higher ups learned from their mistakes last time around and have come up with some better tactics.  Not to mention, as you said, the ponies are sure to have some of their own tactics, experience, and magic to bring to the table.

It's nice to see a story where ponies and humans meet that isn't all focused on how humans suck, Earth sucks, and everyone's evil (except the main character of course).  Yeah everything's not all sunshine and rainbows, but there's just as much good in humanity as there is evil, and I always love finding the stories that show that half of human nature as well as the darker side.

I pick nits when I find something I like...

I really like this story, but...it *really* needs an editor.

that being said, fav'd and follow'd

I sooo hope I won't get into the next chapters seeing that the ponies speak English. It just wouldn't make sense.

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