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SymphonyWubs 1211

Joined September 2012
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    SymphonyWubs's Stories (1)

    • Different genres of life
      Two musically talented ponies end up in special person's life.

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    A teen living his some-what normal life, aside the fact that his parents are millionaires...wants to be just like everyone else without being treated like some sort of royal king. Working at instrument shop, one night he comes home to two fur balls in the yard. Over the years and progression going through his life he finds them to be ponies and they change his life making him feel more normal like he has always wanted to be. Though, there will be hard moments he will still find that these two ponies will help him achieve his dreams, as well as theirs.

    First Published
    4th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    11th Dec 2012

    Comments ( 40 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Apologies for the "blocks". I have been told a lot about how it isn't the best way to do story's. (Thus I am a beginner). If all goes well this will continue and the blocks will be no more. Thanks to stories I have seen, I have an idea on how to make it look better..and not make your eyes all derp.

    So again, Apologies.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I think, there's missing a "Human" tag.

    It's not a bad story in my opinion.

    I don't read any "Human" storys normaly, but this one turned out, to be quite good.

    I found only one mistake:

    Turns out the dunstep genre was really taking over and it was being played a lot at work.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hmm, interesting concept.

    If you need a proof-reader or editor, let me know.

    Oh, and there's an error in the title. It should be "Different genres of life" (no apostrophe).

    Also, what's "hang bang"? I think you mean "head bang".

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    **fixed the missing human tag. And yes I could really use an editor. Will be able to fix the sentence once home. Mobile won't let me do it easily.** thanks!

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    **fixed title also**

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    First, the basics. HOLY WALL OF TEXT BATMAN!

    Start a new line whenever someone talks. Like I said, basics.

    Secondly, blue hair stands out to the main character but not the fact that she has a horn. Seems a bit odd.

    Other then that its a good idea, not something scibbled down on a napkin at a bar.

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1218314

    Thanks, I really did forget about the horn :facehoof: But I will for sure make up for that

    And yeah I'm still trying to get the basics down, apparently that seems to be my biggest flaw.

    Thanks!

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1218102

    Fixed "head bang" and "dubstep"

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    OKAY, I think I'm willing to edit and proof reader for this story. I could help out with some stuff about dubstep and other genres. Send me a PM about it!

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #11 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #12 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    yarr

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    i bass cannon everything that good. but this time  i go thinking with portals.

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 6d ago · · ·
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    **Since apparently it didn't save. I want to thank my editors! They have given me ideas and even better ways to present!**

    (Vapour101 & Madgod Pim) :twilightsmile:

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 6d ago · · ·
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    "Look, the man said hi so I had to be nice and say it back. Don't worry, I got a plan, if anyone asks I'm a puppet.

    Why do I get the feeling that he it soo screwed?

    Nice update, to be sure!

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Very, very good my friend! Keep it up Senior Wubs!

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 6d ago · · ·
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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

    vinyl shut the hell up! your not even making loud music!

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1239773

    Loud music? ummm

    Pretty sure when cranked as high as it can go, that its loud. :facehoof:

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1240697ok... how bout when you killed discord? i modified your bass cannon now.

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1244200

    Dis nigga!:rainbowlaugh:

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>1267711Ecxuse me but I'm not black and not racist.

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>1273054

    I am black and not racist so allow me to rectify; This GUY!

    I tend to forget the internet is well the internet.

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #25 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1356344

    :flutterrage: working on it.

    #26 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    *vinyl*:rainbowkiss:*octavia:raritystarry:*whoeverthefuckingmainis*:derpytongue2:

    #27 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Finally got around to reading this. I absolutely loved the puppet bit! Freaking. Priceless. :rainbowlaugh:

    Little miffed about the time taken/amount of content, but i would rather have quality of quantity.

    keep up the good work

    LIve long, Write fast

    Titan:eeyup:.

    #28 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1374603

    Thanks that does mean a lot to hear :twilightblush:. I honestly will be making the next chapter a lot  more detailed. I just really wanted to get a chapter out.

    >>1374328

    :twilightblush:

    #29 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    That poor guy in that car. :rainbowlaugh:

    Amazing update, and can't wait for the next!

    #30 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I can say that I....(puts on sunglasses)..

    wub, this story lol!! great job man, can't wait for the next update!

    #31 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1452647

    Haha thanks! :rainbowlaugh:

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 25w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "I GOT A SKRILLEX TICKET! I CAN'T BELIEVE I AM GOING TO SEE HIM!"

    Now that was what was being said, but what the guy saw was a crazy animal head banging like I had given it a drug of some sort. Trying to avoid seeing any more of this, he ran the stop light. I am pretty sure he thought he was seeing things, but having Vinyl hug me and seeing her happy was enough for me at the moment.

    That part made me laugh quite hard, just the thought of how Vinyl would look like. Head banging against the window of a car and some guy just looking at it like she was crazy

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 25w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1686647

    That comment made me lol. You have just inspired me to update.(finally)

    #34 · Chapter 3 · 25w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #35 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Finally! I had given up hope that this story was still alive.

    Loved the ending:pinkiehappy:

    Live long, write fast,

    Titan:eeyup:

    #36 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Holy shit............. dat ending XD

    #37 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #38 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Someday... Just someday he's going to learn better...

    #39 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 2d ago · · ·
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    After months of waiting my friend........... You have failed to displease me yet again. Congrats :obomanotbadface:

    #40 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1784526

    Thanks! everyone will be in for a surprise in part 2!!!:twilightsmile:

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