Gilda x OC, havent saw any of this, trackin and thumbs up

Wow. Nice one shot. I really enjoyed it.

First, I think the word griffin use for kids is cubs not foals. But thats maybe just me.

For the fic it self, It was good and I would like a sequel of it.

P.S Did you use google for the Swedish word?

Keep it coming.

Only problem I have with this is the pony terms they're using. They should have their own terms.

>>12232061223206

Oh ok.

I'll try to edit some of it when I'm done with a chapter of my other story!

And I guess I did use google translate......Please don't hurt me

Thanks man....But i have no idea what the sequel would be about anyway.

>>12235231223523

Duly noted sir. I shal make edites POST -HASTE

Good dayeth to you!

>>12232001223200

Oh you did? Thanks man!

>>12237231223723 Much appreciated! ^.=.^ It's a great little one-shot otherwise.

this deserves a sequel

>>12237201223720 Don't worry. I just find it interesting every time I see some Swedish thing in fic/movie.

And the sequel, It's was just a suggestion if you get some inspiration.    

>>12237261223726

This is deserves a full story

Very nice one shot. There's surprisingly little Gilda is a regular, if angry, person fics, so this is also a nice change of pace.

>>12271261227126

Thanks man!

>>12249711224971

Oh sorry. Swedish?

It was actually Norwegian.

If my history is correct, Norway was inhabited by the Nord/Viking culture, and since Nords/Viking/Greco-roman references/terms popularly make up Griffin culture, I decided to slide in  a few words in Norwegian.

>>12246711224671

We shall see

>>12231421223142

oh and thanks for not bursting in and shouting "FIRST!!!!"

>>12275451227545

well im not a douchebag right?

>>12279831227983

For your non-douchbaggery I shalt give you a cookie, kind sir!

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>>12275221227522 Sweden had Nord/Viking culture too you know. But our language is almost the same.

>>12288181228818

Oh sorry if i sounded ignorant for second there. God I need to stop being a hippocrite; People already have trouble distinguishing me from the nearest Asian guy....

Well I learned something new today. Thanks for telling me!

This. It is YESSSSSSSSS. Write more.

>>12935491293549

Oh sorry. This was a one-shot story. I'm afraid that I won't be able to get anymore "writing" material out of this one....But keep an eye out. I MIGHT come back to this one

this is good but one thing in your story you said foals wouldn't they be cubs or fledglings or something like that since they aren't ponies

also i have 11 changelings they would like to give you something

>>13927721392772

Sorry, I tried to divy up things to not sound monotonous. Cubs, foals, chicks = Same thing in the story =Offspring of griffins.

And love? For me? THANK YOU!!!!

It was my changelings that did that it takes alot more to get love from me main reason is because my changelings are using it for food and i have not found a changeling (except for on some occasions queen chrysalis) where I can say no to them

Just to be a bastard...

"Hey Gilda! Long time now see. How did your little trip go?" Asgrim inquired with a smile.

Not sure if 'now' is a typo or not.

Gilda grumbled as Asgrim calmly hopped onto the stoll next to her's,

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Aaaand a few other typos, but you get it... Other than that, this is a solid story that I had a great time reading.