Okay, so taking a teensie, tiny break from Halo. I decided, 'Eh, while I'm figuring s**t out for the Halo story, why not give Left 4 Dead a whirl?'

This is just for fun, so if things seem weird at points, just remember, I'm not even trying. Good reading everypony!

you got yourself a fave...

I'll see where this goes

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Hmm left 4 dead you say automatically amused, continue.

You can continue on with this story of yours

Okay lets see where this road takes us.

Hm...You get one Big Mac..and one DAH DAAH!. DAT ASS! DAH DAAH!

If they get ponified, .

Seriously though, I enjoyed this story's beginning, keep at it.

I want to see where this is going...

I r interested. This could be unbelievably good, or godawful. One suggestion, please make chapters longer. Readers will ignore a story if a chapter doesn't go past the two thousand mark. Otherwise, cool story bro. Favorited and liked.

There is much potential in this story. Dont buck it up.

HAHAHAAHAHAH anything francis doesnt hate?

>>12116171211617

lets hopw they are not ponys when they come to ponyvill and they have there guns

like the idea. one tip though with the start of each new person/pony talking create a new paragraph to improve the flow.

Seems good. You may continue.

EHRMAGERD!!! I will wait patiently for this

>>12169021216902 Vests.

havent even read it yet... but l4d + mlp = INSTA FAV!!!!!

Yay first!!!!!!!

Any way here's my thought......

A Bit of this

A little bit of this

But mostly this

Great job but that's what I think

I'm squealing in class Please update soon!!!

Really glad you all like this. I wasn't even trying! You all da best and now I'll put my undivided attention into this story to make it the best it can be.

>>12232841223284

lol maybe bikes too?

plz change the pic it is miss leading a good story needs a good pic

She screamed and jumped back as something hit her hand from the other side. "H-hello?" She gasped.

Rainbow Dash has a hand?

"Oh my gosh, are you okay? What happ,,,,ened..."

Too many commas, not enough ellipses.

It was tall, had dark, brown skin, and now fur of mane.

... wat

Anyways, here's the valid, not-grammar-correction part of my comment.

How could the ones in the ocean be any worse than some of the ones on land?

Suddenly, movieshark attack. You know, the movieshark species? Never heard of it? I'm not surprised. It looks and functions just like a normal shark, with one key difference. It's always out for the blood of a fleshbag.

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!

MOAR DAMN YOU!

Moar.

Ahhh. Your story is so awesome! And it made my early morning rage gone. Moar please.

This is boring hurry and create the story lazyass faster becuz i want to read more never rest til it end

Yeah, here's chapter 3. Been wicked busy with school, and I honestly am not having a good time. Sorry if these aren't the best, but being overtired and overworked makes Pegasi a dull boy...

Enjoy it, everypony! Next chapter we get to see Celestia solve their problem!

You should try to update more often and I want them to get a defib and get Bill back

This story is awesome, I anticipate the next chapter. Excuse my Draconic language but, Bensvelk Apzen!

You know I was about to groan that ‘the survivors’ seemed a little to accepting about the whole talking ponies thing. But then I thought about it. The fact they survived something that was considered fantasy even in there world (a zombie apocalypse) mightn’t help lessen the blow. Not to mention the fact they finally get a rest (that didn’t constitute spending maybe days locked in a small safe room) would be welcome, but the ability to actually talk with something after that time and stress whether that is human or fantasy creature.

I will say that it seems to be in danger of going by a little two quick. That mightn’t just be because the chapters are shorter then I’m used to, or because you just want to get the introductions ‘out of the way’ so ‘the action’ can begin. If the latter is the case then I would personally advise against it.

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hehehuehuehue. My anticipation is mounting

It's ok, but y'all need to slow the buck down.

i love this

-wargod

Someone- if they get permission- should make a small not-story-canon chapter where this crosses over with that other one with Ellis.

YAY! SO MANY FEELS! I read the comic, but I wanted my own dialogue for the Sacrifice ending. Deal with it!

can i blow you?

The feels bro

>>13165931316593

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But to answer your question, maybe. bahahaha

You know seeing as now the survivors are aware they are carriers you would think they would be a bit reluctant to go wandering around. Especially since they know the infections spreads through mammals. Or they should warn them at least.

make moar, keep this going...

>>13169131316913 Then again the ponies aren't human though, and based on some of the animals in the namely the crows/birds seen in game, it wouldn't be a stretch to assume that ponies and the like are immune to the virus.

according to the desc. Zombies may be seen in this fic. i just hope that the first one won't be a tank-ified pony, or else the're all scrwed

unless..... the ponies have a secret stockpile of grenade launchers

DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNN!

Princess Celestia's bet, new survivors, and one badass mother bucker named Loner. I can tell this is going to be fun for our innocent goddess of the sun. Teehee! Enjoy this shit! Imma keep writing!

Well, this was unexpected, but I'm intrigued.

Also: "Aw sheit nigga!"

>>13284701328470 I approve!!!!

HA shows what you know Celestia!

So where did bills dead body go to?

I sure do hope that Celestia is lucky enough to be immune to the zombie virus, otherwise her little trip isn't going to last very long.

I like where this story is going.

>"Let's trade worlds for a bit."

>"Deal."

Celestia can never make the write right choices when it comes to fanfiction...

I HATE WITCHES SOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!! Especially l4d2 walkin witches! Have you ever been in a room with one of them and it's walking towards you IT'S TERRIFYING!!!!!!!!!! also please make a witch appear in the next chapter and have it's terrifying abbilities work their magic on a random survivor pls?

I think bill is loner

>>13289261328926 Maybe not next chapter, but one will be coming up though.

>>13287531328753 Think I forgot about that? hehe

Sorry Celestia you pretty much buck

>>13286841328684 "What ya gonna do! Whhhhaat ya goooona dooo!" Boondocks for the win....

>>13291061329106 "The absence of evidence isn't necessarily the evidence of absence"

Been watching boondocks with some bros, bros love boondocks

>>13290041329004 Bill is either dead, or he came back to life, or he is stuck as a pony, or he is alive back on earth, or he is going to pop up as a infected, preferably as a tank....

Omigod need Moar Plz mang need MOAR!

cant wait until Celestia first fires a shotgun, HOOOWEE that will be funny, and you'd think Francis would despise being a pony, and dont even get me started on loner. he put all of the pieces together in a matter of minutes, he took down a tank single-handed WITH A SWORD!, and he is just plain badass. i shall await more with much eagerness...

Nice little comedy chapter to lighten the mood. Gave me something to do before bed. Hope you enjoy Francis X Pinkie. Oh, the hilarity in it all

I have the craziest feeling that Bill is somewhere in Equestria, or I could be spouting nonsense.    

>>13298121329812 Progression takes time. Don't worry your little head off.

>>13298201329820 We shall see.

I now have the worst mental image of Francis prancing about in a pink apron.

>The second half of the part with Francis

oh god normally i like this kind of stuff but why would you do that

If Bill is alive..... I will laugh at what their reactions to him not being dead will be..... What if he was something other than a pony.... say a old griffon....... dragon...... zebra.... granted with his attitude I would say more of a griffon.

I laughed when Big Mac said Gotta go plow tha fields.

>>13297661329766 NEXT CHAPTER MAKE CELESTIA SEE THE DESTRUCTIVE POWERS THAT ARE SPECIAL INFECTED!!!!!!!!!!

Oh. My. God! PLOT DEVICE!!!! Yeah, Celestia's bucking bucked in the butt. And Loner, taking a shine to our beloved princess of the Sun? Dayum! HOT SEX! BOW CHICKA BOW WOW! More! Must wright more! I'm having too much fun with this story now that I'm getting into it! enjoy this chapter, everypony!

The end of the last chapter + The end of this chapter =

"There's no magic in our world."

"Bullshit."

5 minutes of reading later:

"Oh shit, there's no magic in their world."

Fun Fact: All of the survivors are actually carriers, immune to the virus but spread it everywhere they go.

Celestial is fucked.

The end.

>>13340701334070 Animals can't catch the disease.

And then all went to hell, so the moral of this story is.

Celestia,

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You... did this to pair some Survivor OC with Celestia, didn't you?  That's all it was for...  

I'm sorry, but I have a bit of an avoidance for fics that pair OCs with canon characters...  Not trolling, but... really, I HATE scenarios that force an otherwise strong character to be some submissive love interest for an OC.

>>13348981334898 Actually, he came up as a necessity. He and the others weren't going to be in the story at all, but progression has a way of making things happen. Revelations have to be made, bonds have to be formed, lives are forever altered, and, well, you know what, Imma just skip the rest. Sorry if you don't like it, but, oh well.

I still think loner is Bill am I right or wrong

>>13352841335284 Wrong. sorry. Don't worry though, I didn't forget about that old bastard.

Wooo! New chapter! Now, we're getting down to the nitty gritty of Loner. That last line? Maybe a flash back or something? Huh? Celestia and his falling out won't be forgotten, and Francis' cutie mark?! Masculinity issues! Let's see how this progresses.

Oh, and did I mention Bill yet? No? Well, I'll have to rectify that.

Another chapter? Dude, you must be on some mixture of inspiration and cocaine!

>>13381851338185 Plus, I'm working on two other stories. I'm not on drugs, I just have no sanity...

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH i loled at the end keep it up.

-wargod

>>13382561338256 I WILL!!!

Don't know why I'm sayin this bit I had an idea in school for a fanfic where a guy could turn into any one of the special infected at will hmm....        Anyway WHEN IS THE WITCH!!!!!!!!!!

Is anything gonna happen between Francis and pinkie?

I read through the entire chapter, but I'm still thinking about how dumb Celestia was for expecting her magic to work in a world that, as was clearly stated, does not have magic. At all.

Now put " Romance" Tag on this ..... it needs it.

Ah, yet another brilliant chapter. This should be featured.

I want my bill

Hm. Theories are being developed in my mind now. Okay, so either Loner was infected, but his genes allowed him to keep his intelligence, or he is a carrier, and he recently found out. (Carriers are the survivors that you play as in l4d and l4d2, they believe they are immune, but actually just carry the virus, infecting carrier/immune humans.)

RIDE MY FRIEND! RIDE THE WAVE OF INSPIRATION!!!

MMMMMMMMMMMMM TOASTY! I DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT I AM SAYING!

>>13382441338244 theres a drug for that you know

it's called le petite four or something, basically its one of Pinkie's

cupcakes but with a "secret recipe" on it

Celestia created quite a ruckus! Francis got drunk, tried to skip on the bill, made out with Pinkie, and nearly kicked Louis' tail in.  So much fun. More to be had!