Just as the title says. There's all sorts of adventures children can get into when they're in the tub! I thought of this while I was taking a bath...
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Cryssy-miu
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Very Cute
Awk out of context.
BUBBLES!!!
That was cute. I like that you at least acknowledged that somepony like Princess Celestia would "raise" children with the help of servants. She has a country to run, after all.
Ok i loved it dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
LOL so cuite
Awwww, that was adorable!
I like little one-shots like that. That helped make my evening, thank you and great work!
I expect it might hit the Feature Box.
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNG
The Cuteness, It wounds me
D'awwwww
Cryssy, this is the kind of stuff you write that always warms a dead man's heart. These little one-shot, slice-of-life stories about Twilight as a filly. Thank you once again! You're still one of my favorite authors on here.
Dawww this was great
1217631 I hope it hits EQD once I sent id. But that would be awesome. Let me know if it does--off to work! :B
1217631 Furthermore, does anyone have any idea how the feature box works? Do writers suggest a fic to the admins? Because there's a few fics I want to see hit the feature box
1218300
Depends on how fast it gets likes and faves.
For example. 100 faves and 100 likes within a minute get you to feature box.
Look at Wanderer D.
Fully automated.
1218313 OHHH....I see. So it's automated! Darn, I wanted to suggest a few fics I've read. Hm, I'm still submitting it to EQD once my editor runs through c:
I think my favorite thing about this was the perfect way it encapsulated a child's ability to turn anything into a game and make it epic.
I can't offer any suggestions or a critique for this. Good flow, grammar, style, characterizations, idea, and execution. There was enough humor and DAAWWWborable to keep it "flavorful."
I think you may have hit upon something here if you were looking to continue the story. "The Misadventures of Twilight & Spike" perhaps?
Anyway, favorited and thumb'd up. Good work!
1218379 I was thinking of continuing this little series...and I was considering naming it that. How on earth did you--get out of my heaaaad!!!!!
But thank you, that is what I was going for. A Child's imagination is just endless, even little Twilight. before she prefers to keep things "practical". *giggle*
1218387
Better idea. Write next story as new chapter and see if you see if it fits. If it does, mark this story as Incomplete and add chapters.
Win-win!
1218402 Ha, it does! c: And I can just change the name of the fic! That's a good idea
1218409
Why over-complicate things? Make it simple!
Simple solutions!
1218387
I'm psychic, what can I say.
Honestly, whether this matters or not, but this story does prove you have enough "grasp and creative license" to pull it off and make it brilliant. Keeping such a broader story in mind, it felt like I was reading a chapter from such a story. Again, good work!
D'awwwwwwww
Loved it!
must...resist...urge.....to..........D"AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO CUTE
Awwww. This is so cute!
People should write about filly Twily and spike playing more often.
awwwwwww
sUPEr cute
D'aaww levels: fatal.
Very cute and quite entertaining.
Write on!
Great job!
I liked the etory but with kids myself the only thing i could think was how irresponsible celestia was leaving a toddler in a full bathtub with out an adult. Kids can drown in that
okay...that was adorable.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png
Read this awhile ago and decided to seek out all the adorable Filly Twi/Baby Spike stories that were utterly adorable. They really should be in my favorites.
2088937 Everything in life is wonderful when you have filly Twi and baby Spike
2089089
troppo carino too cute
awwww, that was just TOO cute.
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That was pretty cute.
Is there a club for Baby Spike?
A bit like Eloise Takes A Bawth, (my least favorite Eloise book), but better
That was adorable!
And from that day forth, much to Future Twilight's dismay
, Princess Celestia had the adventures of Captain Sparkle Pants and her trusty First Mate Patchy the Dragon immortalized in the halls of Canterlot