Underdog, a Hellhound rejected by his pack and left to die, was rescued by a pony, but was forced to become a wasteland wanderer due to the prejudice of ponies. He sets off into the unknown, searching for a place to call his home.
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ill read this later
Hey Mighty Thanatos, glad to see you posted Underdogs here ^_^. Looking forward to chapter 2.
Hmmm... decent start, but what happened to the Hellhounds digging ability?
I expect that to show up in later chapters somewhere.
I'll keep an eye on this fic, it has potential.
Also, why is the font bolded? It isn't necessary to change it, it's just odd.
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Digging will be brought up later.
The bold is due to a problem I encountered while transferring it to FimFic originally. Everything was italicized, and the various things I tried did nothing to fix it except for putting the story in bold. I figured bold would be easier to read than italics.
I see a lot of potential in this. Will definitely follow it.
Not much to say other than you have a good foundation to a story. There is not enough love to the griffins, dogs and changelings out there in Fo:E world. So it is nice to see a Hellhound history for once.
And you could really need a second pair of eyes on this. For there is a lot of tense jumping, capital letters there is missing and words setups that could be better. It isn´t that I dislike what you have made, but it could be better. Do you have a pre-reader or are you looking for one? For could easily help with your story, if you want the help, that is
PS:
What the hell! No downward tumbs on a Fo:E story? Who have you bribed
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I guess I'll just have to go through it again.
I only did a quick preread, but if it's so obvious that you think it wasn't preread at all...
I guess I can get to that during lunch. Re-edit by Monday?
Muffins?
WHERE!?
Why does your internal dialogue include so many voices?
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Wow wow wow! Slow down there mane 6 (Derpy is new Raity and 100% extra pinkie pie is new RD)!
I didn´t say that it wasn´t fine to get out on the interweb yet, just that it could use some more love and care. A story can always be better, and one of the ways for one is to get some new eyes looking over it, no bad thoughts from me on this.
So
whipe those tears away and smile smile smile.
More power to you if you already have done that by monday
and 
here is one to you *takes 2 muffins out of my saddleback by magic*
nope not you, remember to take the others with you, there is no fun in a party for one.
what did Celestia say to you about making friends? And this is also valid in other peoples thoughts
and
and lasty
Well dang im looking forward to what you do with this ^^
Sorry for the long wait, but the new chapter is finally up.
You return, so it's time to dance, in a totally cool manner.
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SHUNK. .... 0_0 Daum....
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There can only be one pony dance!
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And something relevant to the chapter, maybe are there a little long between your chapters, and so what? There is a lot of time between chapters in Fo:E stories, and that is something that we as readers know. So easy now there
Toaster cozy, nice.
Heh im looking forward to more, its been a wile.
I would like to assuage any fears that the story is over. Life has just gotten in the way for a while, and my internet connection has not been kind. When I have had time to write, I have not been in the frame of mind to create anything of quality.
Summer will give me time to work on this story once again. Don't worry, Dog's days in the wasteland are not over yet.
MOAR
Well maybe Scales learned a lesson
Yay, new chapter!
I'm lovin' this story.
And the god of death iz back! Nice to see this updated and with so many delisious boss fights. "Catalyst suggested picking the lock, I opted for a simplr solution and ripped the door from its frame, the ancient wood easily giving way" fuck locks I'm a deathclaw.
Also i just noticed Dog is the only hand to fighter I've seen. Nice work man
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The wonderful Melon Hunter created some very nice art of Dog. Expect to see some more pictures from him as the story progresses.
Not bad, since you try to pull out something unique and different. A hellhound is not your usual protagonist. Keep it up!
Sigh another story lost to the ages...
Awesome your alive! Hurray!
We've got a pulse!
Glad to see this story isn't dead.
Ok, so the hellhound protagonist is to be considered smaller than the average hellhound. Because of his smaller stature compared to others of his kind, can he craft then use hellhound gauntlets? Kind of morbit and funny at the same time. Also, this realloy sucks that Thantos has been offline for roughly 3 months. I was really enjoyed reading a Fo:E fiction from the point of a hellhound.
Update damn it!!!
A gift to Thantos from RinaSunshine who liked this character
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I am surprised it took me this long to find this fic considering I have been running a sand dog in a Fallout:Eq rpg for over a year. I will definitely give this a read before I upload my own story.
nice it's always good to see slavers getting their due
Update??
Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)