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Shouldn't Be
When Sgt Castle wakes up in a stange new land, he has to wonder how he can survive in such a place
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Home at Last by Lumadous

Sad Slice of Life

A heartfelt homecoming for a vet

Just a quick one shot, thanks to TheWrithingGuru for the idea and Cheese Bread Eddy and Vates_Despero for helping me edit

First Published
2nd Sep 2012

Last Modified
2nd Sep 2012

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Rainbow_Dashtruction

#1 · 37w, 1d ago ·

The story was well written, but felt pointless, like writing the ending to a story, but not the story itself. Reading a story about someone coming home from a war is boring without the emotional impact the war itself would of given

Vates Despero

#2 · 37w, 1d ago ·

Someone was expecting Adventure from a Sad, Slice of Life.... Someone needs to think through their story selections better.

Lumadous

#3 · 37w, 1d ago ·

>>12071261207126

actually been wondering if i could turn this into e start of a longer story, I like the characters and already have a strong backstory for them, and would be something to definitely look into if i already wasn't writing two other stories

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