A heartfelt homecoming for a vet
Just a quick one shot, thanks to TheWrithingGuru for the idea and Cheese Bread Eddy and Vates_Despero for helping me edit
The story was well written, but felt pointless, like writing the ending to a story, but not the story itself. Reading a story about someone coming home from a war is boring without the emotional impact the war itself would of given
Someone was expecting Adventure from a Sad, Slice of Life.... Someone needs to think through their story selections better.
actually been wondering if i could turn this into e start of a longer story, I like the characters and already have a strong backstory for them, and would be something to definitely look into if i already wasn't writing two other stories
Told ya it needed more emotion! So can I give this Idea a try yet???
Don't feel sad you can all ways get it next time