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Mr Wool 4065

Joined July 2012
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    Mr Wool's Stories (4)

    • Beast of Equestria
      A human is taken to equestria, where he hopes he can start a new life.

      8,399 words · 734 views · 33 likes · 6 dislikes
    • The Devils in the Desert
      Something is terrorising Appleloosa.
      1,286 words · 151 views · 4 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Predator in Ponyville
      Something big is prowling the streets of Ponyville
      2,212 words · 235 views · 5 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Blood and Gems
      Rarity, Spike and Tyranno have something much worse than Diamond Dogs to deal with
      1,788 words · 165 views · 4 likes · 13 dislikes

    Tyranno's  first visit to Appleloosa isn't exactly ideal, the half eaten bodies of ponies and buffalo begin showing up and nopony knows what is doing it. Along with Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Braeburn he sets out to find whatever creature is doing the killing and stop it at all costs. Nothing can prepare him for what he is about to find.

    First Published
    2nd Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Sep 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 5d ago · · ·
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    It's good. I like where it's headed but if you could somehow separate the train scenario from the demon scenario with, perhaps, a border (to show that it's all happening at a different place), that would be nice.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1210826 Glad to here you're liking the story so far, thanks for favouring it as well and for reminding me to put in the border, also I should mention that the idea for this came from reading the Jurassic Park : Devils in the Desert comic series though I don't consider this to be a crossover ,so if you have read those comics then you might already know what is doing the attacking, i'm not gonna reveal them just yet.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Interesting story. One question though. Do I have to read Beast of Equestria to understand this? I feel a tad lost.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1219849 No you don't the two stories are unrelated

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1219902 Thank you

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1219912 No problem, thank you for favouriting my story

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