Thank you.

Have some music:

[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=rImo9AlKT_c]>>12047661204766

Mm'kay

>>12048001204800OH HAI! thanks for the favourite! Chapter 2 name: What do you think?

Is that a suggestion or is that the title of the second chapter

>>12048041204804Im asking what do you think I should call it.

Hhhmmm... here are some

sanity returned... sort of

Wide awake

Is this heaven? Or hell?

Talking. Ponies...

I must have hit my head too hard

>>12048311204831It kinda connects to the title, hence chapter one being Because we're told. How does For Those In Need sound?

Ah. And yes that sounds good

this looks promesing ... continue

>>12048991204899I will, dae nae worry.

Does the song fit?

>>12049941204994 Yeah

I'm probably done for today. Maybe chapter 3 tomorrow. Please try to come up with chapter names that connect to the title thanks for reading, and have a wonderful day!>>12050381205038>>12048991204899>>12048441204844

For a simple day for once.

Next chappter title?

anyways, good chapter!

>>12058691205869That could work!

Aww, I got a dislike.

I have to say this is creative. I could tell you actually worked a fair amount on this, but you kind of switch between from 3rd to 1st person. Most good stories stick with one. I will read the next chapter, but ya got to stick with one, or you'll confuse the reader. Just being honest.

>>12532111253211I switch to try to show how the other characters see the one who retells the story in first person. Its just the way it is in my head.

MOAR MOAR MOAR

>>12702041270204Unfortunately, I have writers block at the moment. My other story will be updating, but only because I have the next few chapters all written out. I will try to work on this one, though. Don't you worry.