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Joined March 2012
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    RaijingtheClockworkPony's Stories (7)

    • Love is Blind
      Back from their honeymoon Shinning Armor and Princess Cadence find a strange guest in their quarters

      20,015 words · 4,536 views · 572 likes · 6 dislikes
    • My Little Pony and the Thievius Raccoonus
      One theif is brought to Equestria, but he is not alone.
      10,809 words · 3,207 views · 372 likes · 8 dislikes
    • The Legend of the Arachnapony
      Sometimes the craziest legends are the true ones. When Apple Bloom stumbles upon an anceint source of magic she discovers a very ancient creature.
      50,557 words · 3,768 views · 569 likes · 15 dislikes
    • An Unconventional Challenge
      Three friends make a bet. How badly could this go for them?
      23,557 words · 1,454 views · 138 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Duality
      59,061 words · 1,439 views · 91 likes · 5 dislikes
    • From Sky to Earth
      45,991 words · 1,197 views · 126 likes · 11 dislikes
    • Three of a Kind
      3,771 words · 1,080 views · 67 likes · 5 dislikes
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    Most legends are born from a single small grain of truth, others are born from the pure imagination of a few ponies, but as Ponyville very well knows not all legends are that. When something saves Apple Bloom from a pack of Timberwolves will she be able to convince the others of what she saw or will she just have to find the truth herself?

    I would like to give a big big thanks to Danupert for pre-reading chapters 4 through 12. Thank you so much.

    Also want to thank Annoyed Changeling and Ratfinkdos for being willing to help with this story. Thank you.

    First Published
    27th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    15th May 2013

    Comments ( 432 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    possibilities, I will watch and see where and how you take this story

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    thumbs up :moustache: continue please

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    tracking this.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Interesting:moustache:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    So awesome! :rainbowkiss: spiders are boss! Keep it up brotha!

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This is a very intriguing idea.

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I see in the future... many 60's Spidermemes.

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    this idea, i like it, CONTINUE...crap i got nothing to smash.:ajbemused: anyways i look forward to reading more, faved :yay:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    OOOOH! a Spony fic, I'd better watch this one :D

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    She placed a hoof on her neck to discover what it was and what she found was a strange necklace made from the same martial as the ropes that she had seen. I think you mean "material". Other than that, though, Pretty sweet.

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    this gon be gud:pinkiehappy:

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Please do go on

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :ajsmug: I LIKE it!

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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    need more befor a fave but i gave you a like

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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    nvm i read it and i gave you a fave

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Tee-hee, in the next chapter,

    She told rest of the Cmc's the story the next day as they walked into the school which was still being repaired.  Looking over the remaining damage and scorch marks she still wondered where Feather Weight had run off to after his show and tell science experiment exploded last week.  Nopony was mad at him, just worried, she didn't know him well but wished he would come back from where ever he was hiding.

    Oh well, she had bigger mysteries to think about, and with that she began telling her friends about her adventure!

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1523439 What? No really, what?

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The other pack members put themselves between her and all possible escape roots.

    I think you mean routes

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1523916

    My head cannon on a fanon fic!

    Feather Weight got turned into a spider creature when his spider related chemistry experiment exploded on him! :pinkiecrazy: its beautiful!

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1525581 Thank you for pointing that out.

    >>1525954 That worries me a little. :twilightoops:

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1525974

    I believe Diamond Tiara also got caught in the blast and was turned into some other sort of house pest, lucky for her know pony could tell the difference. :trollestia:  

    Also, escape "roots" are most helpful when dealing with wood based canines.

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    It's good but, I think you need to find yourself an editor. You made several grammatical and spelling mistakes.

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1526443 I've been trying to but so far I've had no luck. Usually I do the editing roughly a day or two after release so I can get some distance and find my mistakes better.  

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I couldn't find one of those "Go on" Meme faces, so have a not bad pin!

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Badass creature fighting off everything in the forest?

    looks good! keep it up

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Mind if i use the Arachnapony in a story im working on only as a reference they wont actually be in it

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Spiderman meets pony!

    #28 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Fucking awesome. An Equi-spider taking over the forest..

    I'm gonna go watch that 90s Spiderman cartoon... specifically, this episode -->

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    And Applebloom was saved by Ponyville's friendly Neighbour... SPIDER-PONY!

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    hehehe.... arachniphobia :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

    #31 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    U Twi i think we got a but problem just a tiny one.:pinkiecrazy:

    #32 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH SNAP! Is that white drop some kind of egg? :rainbowhuh::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh:

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1554075

    lol, that's what has been playing in my mind since finding this story,

    or what of that episode I ever got to see/remember anyways.

    Also this spider seems to have quite the apatite!

    #34 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1556151

    Assuming if our Arachnipony is anything like the Man-Spider, chances are he could eat something the size of a fully grown, well built human male if he got the chance... that day...

    #35 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1553875 Sure. I would say as long as you put a link to this story but I feel like that would be a dick move. So I'll say if you want to do that then that would be great but you don't need to.

    >>1554075 I loved that episode. It was one of the few I kinda liked.

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1557166 why would giving you credit be a dick move

    #37 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1557222 No I meant me telling you that you couldn't make the reference unless you gave me credit. I guess I didn't word my response clearly. Either way the answer is yes and if you want to give me credit you can. Thank you for thinking my story is worth referencing btw.

    #38 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1557298 Well the Arachnapony would be like on display at a museum but ya i will give you credit

    #39 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ooooh this is getting GOOD!!  more please:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #40 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    You have my attention.

    I await more.

    #41 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I say old Bean! Please do continue.

    Link: http://skulldog.deviantart.com/art/Indubitably-306617936

    #42 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1557320 Thank you kindly.

    >>1557415 I like your profile pic. Very creepy.

    >>1557607 Indubitably old chap.

    #44 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1557877

    Thank you. You're now the second person to say that.

    I actually just went searching Google for something that would go with my name, and that was the best I could find. :rainbowwild:

    #45 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · 1 · ·
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    Arachnophobia:applecry:

    Arachnoponyia:eeyup:

    #46 · Chapter 2 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1557166 There were a few in that particular show i liked...

    ... I admit, the show really wasn't that good, but nostalgia wins for me. It was better to watch than the 60s Spiderman was for sure... but, that's just personal opinion...

    #47 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Sweetie Bell, you've learned from the best :raritywink:

    #48 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    In a perfect impression of her sister she answered. "A lady has her secrets."

    Oh Sweetie, you are turning out to be like Rarity :rainbowlaugh:

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Feel like an idiot. Punched my hand as i usually do in action sequences. I either hit it harder thanusual or in a bad spot because my left hand is now in much pain. Fuck yeah this story!

    #50 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I have arachnophobia but this seems to be interesting...

    #51 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Guardian was more formal than i though

    #52 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    You have my interest.

    #53 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1581910 Spiders are not the only arachnids. Is your fear just spiders, or other arachnids? (Like scorpions and mites.)

    #54 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :heart:this story idea

    #55 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    The Guardians gonna wind up dead by the end of this ain't he.

    #56 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    this is going to seem like a stupid question, but is the picture for the story what Guardian looks like? Or are there any differences?

    #57 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1581983

    Why did you have to say that?! :raritycry:

    Not knowing many things lessens the fear of things. Lots of things... :pinkiecrazy:

    #58 · Chapter 1 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    The story is interesting, but the writing is very simplistic.

    ...I would suggest ways to improve it but I'm crummy at writing XD I shall continue to read (love the front picture though, its amazing!)

    #59 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1581954 Well, he probably hasn't had any social development since he was the only one protected the tree, and not many ponies/zebras would approach him, so he's kinda like Twilight sparkle in a way, when she first came to ponyville, she didn't have any pony skills, meaning she acted too formal.

    #60 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    "The Unholy Spawn of the Moon."

    Lost it right there.:rainbowlaugh:

    #61 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Interesting. Very interesting.

    #62 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1582260

    Ah, don't be such a worry-wart. He'll be okay as long as nopony tells Princess Celestia. :trollestia:

    #63 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1583645

    Or Applejack... she's gonna get a mob together I just know it.:ajbemused:

    #64 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1582283 The picture is what he is supposed to look like. In my mind I imagine he's got darker fur but many spiders have a shade of brown like the picture does so either is fine. Might say he has darker fur but for now I don't feel like that matters

    >>1582424 the picture is by the amazingly talented Atryl. If you haven't seen his work then click on that source. Small note of caution he does do some NSFW stuff.

    #65 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>1582354 It could have been fear of just spiders. (Araneae)

    #66 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 23h ago · · ·
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    still liking this story, still following

    #67 · Chapter 3 · 28w, 4h ago · · ·
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    I hate spiders.

    I really do.

    You probably would to if you saw something like this

    But I'm putting that fear aside for moment and taking a dive into your story.

    I'll let you know how it goes. *nervous laughter*:applejackconfused:

    #68 · Chapter 3 · 27w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1588096 Hopefully you will be fine. I will say that we will be seeing his more spider like nature in the near future.

    #69 · Chapter 3 · 27w, 5d ago · · ·
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    The Matriarch goes missing, and the Tree dies. He recently found the Tree again.

    The Tree is made from a normal tree and pure Lunar Magic.

    The only pony we think we know of that has the ability to use Lunar Magic is Princess Luna.

    Luna is the Matriarch.

    Awesome story so far mate. However, I do feel like it's rushed at places and that it just feels like a list of events from time to time.

    Looking forward to more.:ajsmug:

    #70 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Why does everyone pick on poor Zecora? :fluttercry:

    #71 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh my, what a skilled and, obviously, handsome pre-reader you have there

    may we be privy to the name of this dashing gentlecolt :trollestia:

    #72 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1612033 Indeed You shall know of this dashing rouge. For he is you! *Points ominously at Danupert*

    :pinkiehappy:

    #73 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    so what dose Guardian eat?

    #74 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1612074 Imma just remind you of the wolves and the missing boars. Hint hint.

    #75 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1612077 arnt the wolves made of wood?

    #76 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1612082 Think a clam. Hard on the outside with a nice chewy center.

    #77 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #78 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    aint that a fact cunning_linguist!!:fluttercry::applecry::fluttercry::applecry:

    thanks for the new chap, now Im just waiting for  the next one

    #79 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    My arachnophobia almost prevented me from reading this fic. Put I pushed through it. Wish the same can be said about actual spiders...

    #80 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    GOOD GOD I LOVE THIS MAKE MOOOOOOOOOOAR:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::pinkiecrazy::rainbowkiss::pinkiecrazy:

    #81 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    New kind of pony? Tracked.

    #82 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Every time I read this I just want more :derpytongue2:

    #83 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ah, so close and yet so far!

    Had he only denied that nagging the conscience for second longer he'd have killed her and then I would be justified in my hunt!

    *pats his high-powered elephant gun*  I need one o' them spider ponies fer a trophy!  But Celestial law says I can only shoot what eats ponies and their allies.  Denied again!

    #84 · Chapter 1 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Daaaw I love sweet monsters:twilightsmile:

    #85 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1612263

    bow chika bow wow -tucker

    no but seriously great story

    #86 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1612263

    bow chika bow wow -tucker

    no but seriously great story

    >>1612348

    thats a damn shame i would come on that hunt myself...........i would probley just hide behind you the whole time:pinkiehappy:

    #87 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ah...another story about some monster that resides in the Everfree. This never gets old.

    #88 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    sounds interesting, I think I'll watch where this is going, there sure is some potential in this Story, so I'll put this to my favorites, to see upcoming updates... for now. :twilightsmile:

    #89 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Sounds rather interesting. Not overly fond of spiders, but what the hay, I'll give this story a read, sounds good so far.

    Tracked and waiting for more.

    #90 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    We require moar pony

    #91 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I love your carnivorous arachnipony. Carnivores always have the hardest time with ponies.

    #92 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Agggh this story, I love it so much, I love intelligent and nice monsters and I love spiders and oh my goodness I need MOAR

    #93 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    In The Box again? Jeez, Mister Rai you sure are good at keepin a spot in The Box. Also, come near Zecora again Little Spider and I shall make sure to squash you with several different kinds of powers and Pokémon and w/e else I come up with later on at 3am.

    #94 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    hey, this thing just showed up in the featured line up!

    Congrats man! I knew this was a good story, very eager to see where it all goes.

    #95 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I like this story. Very original.

    #96 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I felt terrible listening to another one bites the dust as i read this.

    #97 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Spiiiiders. A giant legion of SPIIIIDERS.

    #98 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #99 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1612021 Because they're racist :twilightangry2:

    #100 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Is the Matriarch Princess Luna?

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