Oh god. Dash, you just gave birth to a new Super Villain. Good going. We're going to need to reborn the relationship with a sequel or something.

Um my nephew read this now hes scared for life thanks a lot

Waiting for the influx of dislikes and hateful comments.

>>12212071221207

Dude I'm so getting yelled at my nephew was reading this when i got back in my room and he asked me what a cock was

>>12212531221253

Ha, Sucks for you bro.

I know he's 5 I'm a bad uncle >>12212761221276

What did I just read this story is atrocious

>>12212531221253

Well, just tell him what it is.  Break out the Wikipedia, if that helps any.  The worst thing to do at this point would be to respond with that usual mix of sexual repression and shame.  Just be an adult and give him the tools to deal with the Internet in a mature, adult manner, because apparently he's out there unsupervised and you can count yourself lucky that this is the worst he's run into so far.  Someday soon he's probably going to stumble into /mlp/ and his whole world is going to change forever, so you both better damn well make some preparations.

And then lay down some repercussions, because "Cock" and erotic marshmallow horse stories are clearly not appropriate at his current age, and he needs to understand that.  

this is kinda funny

Poorly written.  Some sentences lack proper punctuation, making it hard to know when to pause, and making the thing an unbearable read.  It feels strangely rushed as well, which it shouldn't for all the words you put in the bloody thing.

The story picture is Twilight with horn pubes.

There is not enough fluid in my body to sufficiently express my emotions through vomit.

>>12219071221907 Lols.

>>12215581221558 Good feedback, need an editor. Thankyou.

HORN PUBES?

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>>12213261221326

ha ha yeah i have been croupting his mind with it like my brother did to me

I don't think its that bad. I appreciate dark humor.

I would half-label this as shameless clop.

However nothing truly bad actually happens, given the fact that she didn't rape the real

Pinkie or anything within the writing.

While it could be better written, I don't mind shameless, in fact... I think Twilight's Midnight Violations is awesome, and

I've never seen something more shameless than that fanfic.

Dash was/is a little...bit- you know what anywoo Twilight is going to Sexxy Evil Twiight Sparkle...shes gonna give Molestia a run for her money once these events are all over HA brillient.

sup with people hating this?its an great fic!

Wow. There's way too much hate in here. The fic wasn't bad in my opinion.

With the sudden flood of Twilight clop fics raiding my notification box, I'm having trouble keeping up. Non the less, going to read later.