Photo Finish didn't want to go to summer camp. Neither did Blueblood. Spending three weeks in Ponyville muck with a bunch'a lowlifes? No thanks. But Ponyville is full of surprises, and the two of them quickly discover that there's more to life than what lies in Canterlot.
This one's a nice piece - you establish things well, it's a plausible situation that you set up and adds some interesting angles to two infrequently used characters.
Kudos to you on a piece well written.
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Thanks for the kind words! :)
This is so good! The little dark coffee thing with Photo Finish was nice. I'm sure I missed a billion other references though, since I was so caught up in the story.
That is quotable material.
Honestly, I could see the Adventure tag being switched for tragedy. Because one of the core elements of tragedy is a hamartia in one of the main characters, is it not? Which would fit perfectly.
And responding to your author's note, I see you have something else published now.
Oh, I love this. :D Details like this always make these kinds of stories just that much better!
And yes! Someone who understands Blueblood's character! Loving this.
Oh heck, that's cute :D