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Namara 1220148

Joined July 2012
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    Namara's Stories (12)

    • Earthbound
      A mysterious genetical disease obliterates Rainbow Dash's dreams

      1,483 words · 882 views · 45 likes · 0 dislikes
    • The Nightmare and me
      When Luna was restored as the Night Princess, where did Nightmare Moon go?
      13,151 words · 3,258 views · 225 likes · 14 dislikes
    • Darkness Falls
      In a moment of weakness, Twilight becomes Nightmare Moon
      5,162 words · 1,155 views · 87 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Our days
      Short stories from the fillyhood of three best friends- Celestia, Luna and Chrysalis. Other main characters include Discord, Sombra, Queen Metamorpha, Lauren Faust, and filly Luna's lisp.
      2,612 words · 432 views · 24 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Warriors: Beyond the stars
      10,601 words · 621 views · 45 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Reactions may vary
      4,148 words · 1,296 views · 118 likes · 18 dislikes
    • Cursed
      9,927 words · 713 views · 31 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Now you're just somepony that I used to know
      1,676 words · 349 views · 16 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Great Redneck War of Equestria
      5,449 words · 427 views · 30 likes · 7 dislikes
    • My Third
      1,081 words · 170 views · 17 likes · 5 dislikes
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    Patient Name: Rainbow Chroma Dash

    Species: Earth Pony

    Affliction: Neige-Aero disease

    Treatment: Unknown

    First Published
    2nd Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Sep 2012

    Comments ( 14 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Well, the concept has been done before, but not overdone.

    However, the spacing is all wacked out, it honestly was hard to read like that. Also, she's still a pegasus even if she doesn't have any wings. Earth ponies have like earth magic or something lame like that. So RD would still be able to move clouds and manipulate the weather, just not fly.

    So overall, neither a thumbs up or a thumbs down.

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1203155 Exactly!

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Personnel has a different meaning than personal, FYI.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    that was really good for a one shot. I thought with the description, this would have to be longer. I don't read very often, so consider yourself lucky I read and liked your short story. Have a mustache :moustache:

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1203155

    I third this opinion.

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Yay!:yay:

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1203493 i blame autocorrect

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Kudos on an impressive premise. First person of one of the mane six? And the grammar and syntax was fairly well done? This kind of concept has potential. Have a moustache and a thumb.:moustache:

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #10 · Chapter 1 · 24w, 4d ago · · ·
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    of of the room. Fix it fix it fix it!

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 22w, 1d ago · · ·
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    great story made me kind of sad.... poor dash :rainbowhuh:

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 17w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I was expecting

    But I got something better. Thumbs up 4 u.

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 2w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This is a good story but............................. I hate it that dash lost her wings:rainbowderp:

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 2w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>2528245 Thanks!:twilightsmile: Why did I do th- oh right. I was bored, so I amputated Rainbow Dash's wings. Better than stuffing my face with a Big Mac, amiright?

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