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Cerker's Stories (2)

Remnant of the Old
Three friends found a latch to an unknown place. All of them venture in, but how many will return?
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New Sun
Celestia has turned evil and Twilight is going to try to change her back.
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New Sun by Cerker

Dark Adventure

Celestia has turned into evil, corrupted ruler. Twilight tries to find a way to change her back, even with elements if she has to. But what Twilight doesn't know is that Celestia has taken this to account. But after Twilight hears about rebels she sees an opportunity to get old Celestia back. Who knows what will happen?

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First Published
1st Sep 2012

Last Modified
29th Sep 2012

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Keobro

#1 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago ·

I shall read this later and provide feedback.

DitsyHooves

#2 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago ·

That was...

Freaking Amazing. More. :yay:

MarineMarksman

#3 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago ·

This is implying Celestia isn't already evil.

Relevant Heavy Metal

#4 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago ·

Deathstar - Before The Dawn

Youtube Video

lol umad

#5 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago ·

This needs editing badly. Its difficult to read because of all the errors. I'm not saying its bad, just that it needs fixing.

MLP-Lover

#6 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago ·

>>11969751196975

Fucking epic song, sir!

That alone wins ten moustaches! :moustache:

Cerker

#7 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago ·

>>11972161197216

Okay, I hopefully changed most of the grammatical errors. Thank you, for pointing that out. It's actually pretty weird that I had three pre-readers and they didn't see those errors.

>>11969751196975

That is an awesome song there! And it's from Finland!

Iron Nebula