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Who's got the sweetest disposition? Not this bunny! Though he truly wants to help Fluttershy out any way he can, he has a mighty unfriendly way of going about it. Through begging, bribery, and extortion, Angel Bunny will see to it that his caretaker comes out of her shell eventually.
Or else.
Alright, it came to my attention that Rarity's sister is Sweetie Belle, not Sweetie Bell. That's been fixed.
I also took it upon myself to fix one Capitalization error that I had missed, as well as one tense error.
If anyone sees an error, or wants to discus the story, or has any other comments, feel free to let me know.
This is the first FanFic I have put any real effort into.
Thanks for reading, and have a nice day!
Liked and Faved. It definitely is clear that you put a lot of work into this.
As for the story, I thought it was great. Very "day in the life"-esque and something that I could see happening on the show. It was all well thought out and made sense. Keep it up!
Chihuahua.
Thanks! I certainly intend to keep it up, a month between updates or not. I'm working on finishing up the next chapter as we speak.
Chihuahua.
Ah! Thank you again. I could have sworn that i'd fixed that already. It's what I get for trusting spell check, eh?
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