Is this supposed to just be a copy paste of the beginning of the first chapter? If it is, I'm really confused as to why you would do that.

it is an edit of the first chapter. i am slowly redoing the entire story and splitting it into chapters when each section is revised. i will delete the first chapter soon.

i sort of liked it all in one chapter, it gave a certain feel to it

i read this when you first put it up. I agree I like it all in one chapter, but for editing urposes, I can understand why this would be easier. IT was still the BEST story I have ever read from this fandom. You continue to amaze me

just wanted to say first the cover pic is the fucking cutest pic of luna and nightmare of all time

I want more now :C.

And now some randomness:

Feeling somewhat scared and uncomfortable in the lonely night, Luna decided to fly back to Canterlot Castle before Celestia and her guards realized she was missing. She sat back on her haunches and took off, right into a branch.

Ooh, she's going to be docked 3 points from the judges! Isn't that right, Self #2?

That's right, Self #1. Such an amateur move from someone of such age is a massive error, and the judges are going to tear her score apart on this one.

>>27039122703912 god if she did that during a dressage test she'd be screwed

>>27042202704220

That she would, Jim (don't ask-- it was Jim, Bob, or Chuck.) Let's just hope the next challenge goes much better as there's plenty of opportunity for her to rectify this issue. In other words, write the next chapter whenever you get the time. I'm itching to see what happens next

Please,

MOAR.

i demand MOAR NOWS

When the ponies defeated the Zebras 3,000 years ago

Why numbers when grammar demands words?

I would go back and quote all the grammatical mistakes in this, But There were to many to count, I would recommend getting a pre-reader

>>27067872706787 I have a pre-reader. We're working on it right now

>>27071172707117 Ok, excellent my dear boy

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I have to say, I still miss the days of the 40'000 word chapter.

Do you still have that draft?

Would you be so kind as to re-post it, perhaps once you finish this re-write?

>>27122082712208 absolutely! I warn you though, I'm not going to fix the grammar, which is horrendous. I can send you the draft now if you would like, because really after the re-write it will be the same save for different grammar

>>27072272707227 i'm a girl

>>27123702712370

Many thanks.

>>27123722712372

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MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!

>>27137852713785

Good choice in music

Please,

MOAR.

its over 9000!

>>27141172714117 Thanks.

>>27175752717575

YW. The Lullaby for a Princess and the one you posted always hits me right in the heart and/or give me goosebumps. Why does this fandom possess such talent and skill? xD

>>27176272717627 I have absolutely no clue. Other franchises are as worthy as this one of such a great fanbase, but this one seems to be one of the best.

>>27180812718081

I wonder if 10 years down the road, I'll look back and go, "Equestria... heck yeah..." and then proceed to rake in billions of dollars and create one of the greatest corporate empires of all time I guess we'll see ^_^.

>>27181382718138 I'm gonna beat you to that corporate thing... You will be silenced by my CORPORATE ASSASSIN NINJAS IN ALL CAPS. >_>

>>27182872718287 i'm really sorry to be rude, but can you keep these sort of conversations in rivate messages with each other? They really don't have much to do with the story, and I get excited every time I see a notification

>>27183622718362 All right. Sorry.

>>27184002718400

Do you really think you can beat Umbrella Corp Pony Corp? Hehehehehe...

You go sister!

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Yay for frequent updates!

>>27231322723132 working hard just for you guys!

Please,

MOAR.

THIS STORY IS AWESOME! SPREAD WORD NOW FOR MORE LIKES>

Wincing at the thought of reading, she forced her eyes to clamp down and analyze the words.

And she was hooked.

We all know that feel.