You, sir, have an awesome writing style. Faved

i like it have this bud

seems like a nice start

Interesting...

Can't wait for more!

I don't like this writing...... Yet I can't stop reading......

>>12392091239209

Pardon me then,

Ill admit to being a terrible writer, Its not a talent of mine, but I still want to put the story out for people to read.

I am sorry if I wasted your time because I can not write.

If you enjoy the story please stick around, and please, try to look past the writing issue

Yay new chapter!

And it was fun to read!

Too bad I already know some of the stuff that's going to happen... Because Yalin's history and fate.

I'll talk to you on Skype after the weekend

I'm enjoying this so far, have some mustaches!

He took his life to safe those others.

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>>19283671928367

Pardon? Did I screw up again?

Could you please point out the location so I may fix it?

There's a couple in the description, nothing too major from what I saw... But a bit of editing could be used to reform a bit of the sentence structure, cause there's a little bit of more errors than what I'm going to underline, but I left the sentences intact towards what you wrote.

"They said the gods held control. Demons had no control. I fought those demons because they destroyed it all." ~ Engineer Rick

Rick was a simple man, an engineer as he put it. In his world the land remained Medieval, there was no need to advance.

Everything is going down.

He took his life to save those others.

But the gods repaid him for what he did.

And foolishly told another false thing.

>>19284041928404

Thank you kindly, I had wrote that description a long time ago...

Perhaps I should change it to make it better.

But nonetheless, thanks.

Hope to dear god that he doesn't get a cinnamon roll.

>>20000482000048

I am so going to do that. This shall be Pinkies challenge, get Rick to try a number of new foods, mostly sweets.

>>20001392000139 May all godly beings in all universes have mercy on our souls.