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moar please 
>>1190330 I know this comment wasn't directed at me, but I feel the need to defend myself 
Normally I don't usually look at Faust or her alicorn as the official equestria goddess, but I thought I'd just stick that in there cause I couldn't think of another deity to substitute, and I really wanted to use that sentence 
>>1190349 I've just seen it used way too much. It's almost as cliche' as TwiLuna or Twilestia. Don't get me wrong I love both ships, but it's just very common and it tends to draw me out of a story. Like when people use "somebody" instead of "somepony". Same thing goes for hands, only Spike has hands
>>1190364 Unless I make a parody, or something I don't really plan on ever using Faust as the goddess in any of my fanfics.
Yeah, it does kind of throw me off when people say 'somebody' instead of 'somepony' in a fic, I can let 'someone' go, since we we have both 'somebody' and 'someone', I figure it can't hurt to let that slide once in a while.
I don't think I've ever read a fic where the author accidentally said 'hands' instead of hooves.
Speaking of which, it bothers me when people describe a pony's foreleg as an 'arm', like when a pony wraps one around another for comfort and stuff, it really bothers me when people use 'arm' instead of 'foreleg' :P
Thank you, finally somepony gets it.
I was reading a story from way back where a big chunk of the words were in "txt-talk"...*shudders*
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MOAR!!!
>>1190624 hehehehehe... Dash Eats Meat... 
It's because those are all the stupid little ideas that get stuck in the back of a writer's head, until they finally put them on paper. Those stupid little ideas are exactly that - ideas. True inspiration. And their randomness makes them enjoyable to read.
I enjoyed this!
Wait.....
What?
Wha-wha-huh?
Ummmm........
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OH! I GET IT!
The answer is socks! 
.......
Cool story brah. You earn yourself some daily dose of pony in socks!
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author. even mlp doesn't use everypony and somepony all the time. and I've seen many instances in the show where they used somepony when they aren't referring to ponies either! they aren't so anal about it, so it's kinda screaming out to every pedantic fanfic writer on about "correct terminology", to chill the fuck out.
It's a show about fucking talking ponies. you're just being ridiculous if you go over a certain level of seriousness.
other examples
they seldom use hoofs as much as arms or hands (yes hands).
and despite your exp. I've read more on ppl using more of the normal english than ponyfied english to keep their story's integrity intact.
I mean you can't read an epic (pony fanfic or no) when it's riddle with slang terms and bardardised english where it is not appropriate for the tone.
And Then Celestia was like....
Image: http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/317/796/888.pngBut seriously, good read.
Seems to be slightly problematic with the effect of the water temperature considering it is supposed to be burning hot I am highly surprised at how Luna was able to cope with it all the time.
Then there is also the question of how the water did not leak out threw the door considering they are not airtight.
Still an enjoyable read :)
wow is all I can say to that 0___0
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I read a story once were Luna, tired after her first day back on the job, decides to get some sleep. However, the bed in her room was not made for alicorns, so after several hours of failing to get some sleep she gets pissed and blasts the bed to pieces... just before Celestia informs her that it was purely for display and she was supposed to sleep on a big cushion in the center of the room
oh well, my 8k HiE intro should balance that out! 
Huh. Lil' more plausible than Woona Eats an Oreo, lil' more developed than Applejack Drinks Orange Juice- positively cartoony in the imagery and wacky stuff with the hose and filling up the bathroom, and that's cool. I would only ask this:
"But not even the Royal Canterlot Voice couldn’t stop the showers attack."
"Once she’d finally caught her breathe, "
When you know you're workin' a loophole you hope will get you a feature and thousands and millions of readers (well... two thousand, anyway), where other folks labor away on whole books that'll never see the front page again after one appearace with their first chapter, can you please look over your story once before posting it? If you can't or won't spot that you mean 'could stop the shower's attack' and 'caught her breath', maybe you really shouldn't have a feature. 
I think when folks get cranky, it's over stuff like that. But how you proceed is up to you. 
>>1190316 If I have a less 'kosher' comment I tend to just toss this out.
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Second Edit~ Fixed it!
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Most amusing.
There is actually a fic series entirely like this named Progress. Opening portal now.
Image: http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/200H/f/2012/237/8/2/gamer_luna_up_late_by_replaymasteroftime-d5ccexy.pngYay! Good for you. Fixing stuff is a way of showing love for your readers and as such it is very poni 
As for avoiding popularity yeeeeeaaaahhhh nope, nobody who writes X Ys a Z fics is trying to avoid the feature box
You're in good company though, almost any writerpony wants to be read. Have fun, and make the most of your storyboard-like visual imagination! All the business you thought up with the ballooning hose and shower filling up with water is really cute and worth exploring. Not everypony can think of such cartoony visual events, and you should know that you're good at that stuff
Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png>mfw this gets the feature box and This does not.
(I made a vow to paste this on every short (but not necessarily terrible or poorly written, this was quite good) and silly featured fanfic until this one guys epic 80,000+ masterpiece gets featured. No offense to the author.)
Obligatory psychedelic vinyl scratch.
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