Well...

There are minor errors scattered throughout. Proofreading is suggested.

Most of it doesn't make much sense with established canon. They don't have planes, they don't have firearms, the Wonderbolts aren't pilots and none of the Mane 6 seem to want to be there, much less with each other. They seem rough and crude, quite OOC.

It looks like you just put ponies in the place of humans with human technology.

While we're on that, if you wanted to airdrop a tank without a runway to use, you'd use a 15 tonne Sheridan. Not the 70 tonne Abrams.

What bothered me most was the mention of "The fourth of July". Equestria doesn't have a Fourth of July, at least, not one that induces special mention.

>>11995401199540

Can't you just let the tech thing go and have some fun?

So pissed I made a long comment and then my iPhone hit the delete button and it's all gone

FUCK YOU IPHONE TOUCHPAD

I'm using it while I'm going fishing for 2 days

Um... okay

A few errors grammar wise, but that isn't your issue.

The actual story is.

Now, I do not mine OOC ponies as long as there is a reason for it. Sometimes it works. In this fic, however, it does not. But, if you're seriously happy with it, stick with it.

Best of luck!

ARMA series = Great (especially DayZ)

MLP:FiM = Great

MLP:FiM + ARMA = Potential...but eh, I really didn't enjoy it. Didn't dislike though.

>>11995401199540 High-tech ant crusher. I'd like to see that motherfucker get up after an Abrams to the face

>>12002761200276

i've been lucky enough to actuall see an abrams in action... my ears were rining for over 2 mins

also getting ready to play some ARMA 2 on steam after bronysate stream if you wish to join steam name is Quick Thinker

also pro Real life tip: NEVER EVER YELL INSIDE AN ABRAMS EVER the sound bounces everwhere kind of like the walking dead tank scene

>>12002981200298 Challenger 2 up on Salisbury Plains proving ground. That was pretty damn epic. And whatever arty they were firing up there was 2 klicks away. Still sounded like it was right next to me

>>12003171200317

yeah i was inside the abrams when they fired the round at a wooden target 1 klick away everyone who wasnt trained with this kind of thing was holding thier ears and some were even bleeding.

oh yeah and fishing trip canceled on account of the bad waether arounf where i live

>>12003171200317

oh yeah and i also saw a practice run for a new jet damn that was loud... then i got to play a sim of that flight... i WAS THE ONLY ONE WHO LANDED IT SUCCESSFULLY... yet in arma i cant land for shit... guess i got lucky

>>12003781200378 Just as you don't crash the choppers Seriously, that pisses me off

Also, I piloted HMS Tireless! Top that!

>>12003851200385

i never "crash" them i just hit the ground REALLY hard with them

also steam appears to not wnaitng to open DAMN YOU NEW STEAM UPDATE

>>12003851200385

i think i might be able to fly a heuy at the ALT of 5000 before for around 5 mins... before they said give it back before i "smack us in the ground REALLY hard" as i put it

>>12004781200478 I can do all sorts in a CH-47. All except backflips

>>12004891200489

what kind of training or things allow you to do this stuff... i am eagle scout so i am able to do lots of things with out being in the army

>>12005141200514 Oh, I was talking about ArmA. I guess eagle scouts are the American equivalent of our Air Training Corps. I've been in both the ATC and Army Cadet Force, so I've done a fair bit of military stuff. Up to and including being chased through a field by MoD attack dogs.

Dads also high up in the Sub service, so I get to go out on Trafalgar-class subs when I like. I also get to pilot them on fam visits.

>>12005281200528

not exactly eagle scout are just highly disaplined kids who are able to do many things. the way to become an eagle scout is to SURVIVE 3 days in a dessert by yourself its a bitch man nearly killed me

>>12005521200552 In a dessert? Damn, what kind of heartless beast would stick you in a fucking trifle for three days? Bloody war crime, that is.

>>12005571200557

not really you can choose to do it or drop out most kids drop out

and no no one has ever died in the dessert worst anyone got was a broken arm. had to sign millions of wavier forms

>>12003781200378

Arma is not simulator for flying... ARMA 2 simulation of flying is so god damn bad that I don´t even... I am flying FC2/DCS right now, that´s the way of a great flight sim!

>>12014011201401

i know ARMA is a sim for an infanrty unit shesh, and how else are they going to get to the badlands? walk there

and also the only other flight game is have is IL-2 Stormivik: 1946 and thats hard as hell to fly so hush now. Also remember this THEY WILL EVENTUALLY BE ON LAND

I like it, has great potential

Rainbow Dash complained as she got in the Abrams and strapped herself in. After a short while of nothing happening she got out and asked why they weren’t in the Abrams already.

You're talinking the M1A1 Abrams ? How the f*ck can you air drop an Abrams in an undercover mission ?

>>12014471201447

just go with it for now.. also they have magic at thier disposial... thats all i can say without ruining the way they get out of that jam

also am currently trying to get my ARMA 2 single player campign to run so i can use it as some learning experience, but as some know the campign is bugged and oyu usually cant get past the intro.

and it crashed... :l why do i have a feeling ARMA 3 will be as buggy as hell

You're in charge here, if it fits, it sits

I never played ARMA