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Aryn240 4111

Joined February 2012
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    • Celestia's Hangover
      Celestia gets drunk the night before the Gala, and has to find out what happened last night.

      18,347 words · 3,477 views · 348 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Mixing Relationships
      Vinyl Scratch and Octavia Shipping; OC characters. Music contest
      39,055 words · 3,437 views · 390 likes · 9 dislikes
    • The Portal of Adlez
      Crossover between MLP and The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time featuring one human
      14,875 words · 497 views · 13 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Fire for the February Write-Off
      Smoke is coming from the Everfree. What's causing it, and why?
      3,271 words · 222 views · 5 likes · 2 dislikes
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    The Princess of the Sun wakes up one morning with an earsplitting headache, empty liquor bottles everywhere, and the Grand Galloping Gala in less than 18 hours. Checklist of things to do:

    -Are the servants prepared? NO.

    -Are the musicians ready? NO.

    -Is the sun at least in place? NO.

    And who's in her bed? And what happened to those two young colts that were last seen in the sculpture garden? And why are the royal guards not at their posts? And how much does Luna know, anyway?

    What happened last night?

    [Has NOTHING to do with the movie "The Hangover". Not a crossover. If that's what you were looking for... read this anyway.

    This story is a collaboration mainly between myself and Cade YYZ ( http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Cade%20YYZ ). Check out his page, too!

    Cover art from the marvelous Jackie! Check out her DA here: http://jackiephantom13.deviantart.com ]

    First Published
    29th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    26th Apr 2013

    Comments ( 159 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Great story mate, I am liking it so far.

    Looking forward to the next update.

    Oh and...First! :pinkiehappy:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 6d ago · 6 · ·
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    "But only one..." Famous.  Last.  Words.:rainbowlaugh:

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Let the guessing games begin!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ...i like this. i like this a lot.

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    is that Braeburn's hat in the picture? :pinkiehappy:

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Im taking a guess here the hangover wake up scene

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    i was thinking of not keeping up with this one, then you brought Vinyl in...

    *watching* :twilightsmile:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    BUT ONLY ONE.........

    Moonshine? :rainbowlaugh:

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    Why did it have to be submitted at 4 in the morning? ;w;

    Time to post this on deviantART! :rainbowkiss:

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #11 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Tons of potential here.  

    “She did banish me to the moon..."   :rainbowlaugh:

    MOAR!!! :flutterrage:

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This has potential to be amusing.

    You have my interest.

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    The description: "empty liquor bottles everyone". Uh . . . Was that supposed to be "empty liquor bottles everywhere"?

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I am loving this already!:rainbowlaugh: I can't wait to see what happens next!:raritystarry:

    Pop culture reference eh...Last Friday Night (T.G.I.F) by Katy Perry?:ajsmug:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    It's never only one.

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I am betting she slept with some pony.

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    you brought in vinyl?....:trixieshiftright: damn you to everfree you son of discord now i must read all the way through! :ajsmug: btw :flutterrage: MAOR

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 6d ago · 2 · ·
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    "Only one" is right up there with "this is the last one" in things said before nights of over-consumption.

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Im gunna guess the black bass clef symbol?

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I'm looking forward to where this goes. :heart:

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::trollestia::moustache:

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 5d ago · 3 · ·
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    Pheather </3

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Looking great so far and I'm hooked just by the prologue. Also YAY I sung Luna's song outloud and laughed when I read your comment :pinkiehappy:

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Eeyup it's official... I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR! My reaction to the ending was as follows:

    [Reading the ending of the chapter]

    Story: "AAAH! What in my name are you doing in here!"

    Me::rainbowhuh: who's in the tub?

    Story:"At your service, m'lady!" mocked Vinyl Scratch.

    Me::pinkiegasp: NO WAY! :pinkiehappy: THIS IS GONNA BE PRICELESS!

    Keep up the great work you guys:pinkiesmile:

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    “But only one...”

    I do believe I hear the tolling of the bells of dooooooooom!

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Favorited! Liked! Watching! :pinkiehappy:

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    More more more! I love this! :heart:

    #28 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    LINK DOES NOT WORK! BUCK ME!:flutterrage:

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1182355

    :facehoof: Yes, yes it was. Believe it or not, the description was typed out pretty quickly right before posting... sorry. Fixed now. xD

    >>1188682

    WHAT LINK IS THAT? WHY ARE WE YELLING? AHHHHHHHHHH!!! :derpytongue2:

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    And with that said, the Princess of the Dawn soon sealed her fate.

    Alas, this be but another's bait!

    #31 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ...

    Don't even this about taking her shades off.

    Do so, and I will assure you that the repercussions for your actions will

    be dealt with severely.

    My Scratchie has already been bummed out too many times.

    Just make it so her eyes don't exist... Her shades ARE her eyes.

    #32 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1188703

    On the ceiling was painted a large, black bass clef symbol. [link?]
    THAT LINK!

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1188854

    I have bad news for you, my friend. *SPOILER ALERT*

    She slept with them off.  :rainbowderp:

    >>1188957

    Er. Right. About that... :rainbowderp:

    There is no link there. That was left over from a question Cade posted during the writing process about whether or not we should put a picture in there, or something like that. I don't remember fully. But that was never a link, just a query. I went through the chapter before I posted it, but evidently I missed that one.  Sorry... :twilightsheepish:

    #34 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1189030 :facehoof:+:twilightangry2: = INVALID PONYCON!

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1189533

    I'll save you a rock near the fire. :raritywink:

    #37 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #38 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #39 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Looks like Luna is going to have fun watching Celestia figure this all out--as will I, considering what characters are in this story.  And nice, uh, introduction to Vinyl. Because nothing's cooler than finding someone sleeping in the bathtub after waking up with a wicked hangover...yeah. This will go well.

    #40 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Braeburn! :heart:

    #41 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    silly vinyl

    #42 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Not HIM!:facehoof:

    #43 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Luna, you troll, you         :rainbowlaugh:

    #44 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Awesome chapter

    #45 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Great chapter, it turned out really well :heart:

    #46 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    ...Well, that certainly complicates things...

    #47 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    The real question is whether Braeburn was smoking weed or peyote.

    #48 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh shit, haha, Braeburn is high as a kite, this is gonna be good

    #49 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1211089>>1210687>>1209123 Submitting to EQDaily as we speak... wish me luck.

    #50 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1210687

    Braeburn was smoking, like, whatever you want him to be smoking, man... :derpyderp2:  xD

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