sweet new story

2 people read it, 3 thumbs up

Lolbronies

Update: 5 for 18 now. Lolwut

This seems really interesting, plus you can never go wrong with a good romance!

Yay!

Looking forward to where this goes.

octopus, i say octopus from the start. havent read, but i'll see if my prediction is true. dont spoil it plz.

>>12085051208505

da mean he likd to

To the read later.   and I couldn't finde the quote so song a go go despite wrong tone.

Kody has a new story?

Like and fav dat shit now.

EDIT: Do seaponies have cutie marks? And can they breathe out of water?

5 views, ten thumbs. Lol wut? XD Still, SEAPONY me? EPIC! Insta-fave and reading tiem!

...i like it! update more often than most please.

Sea ponies!

This is a first for me! Cheers!

>At first glance, I suspect humans in equestria with Twilight Sparkle.

>Super excited.

>Reads description.

>Seaponies

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I suspect seeing Twilight for the first time would have a similar effect on me.

Wait... DAMMIT! Only one chapter! I shouldn't have read this yet! ; ;

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I didn't read it yet, but I'm predicting a feature box. Place your bids now everypony!

>>12085461208546

Wat

Love it so far, but I hope you explain why seaponies cannot be seen by surface-dwellers. I know the rule is supposed to be vague but... it's freakin' vague.

>>12086331208633

Sorry Im rtoo astoopehd fer life.

He mustve liked it, so it had jaun ewr juan b4 pobnies viewd ed

Well.... Your story is awesome and I like the idea of seaponies, but the only problem is you only have one chapter out but I want to keep reading but I already finished this chapter so you need to wright the next one because... I WANT IT NOW!

SHOO BE DOO MOTHERFUCKERS

SHOO BE FUCKING DOO

I think seaponies do have cutie marks, but i'm not certain.

Head-canon is having difficulty with this.

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New Kody story?

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Keeping in line with everyone else's reactions...

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A new kody story. YES

How have I not heard of you before.

Favourited and watched.

I'm a seapony? Color me intrigued. I'll be watching this fic, that's for sure. You've really nailed the relationship with my brother; I hate him in this fic almost as much as I hate my older brother in real life. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Also, when I saw this: "The little guy was rather cute once you get past the lack of a face."

I thought of this:

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Linnaeus is best jellyfish

You have just unlocked one star and thumb

. . . Am I a Jellyfish?

I found this song to be somewhat fitting.

Shoo be doo

Shoo shoo be doo.

Please sir, may I have another?

im intrigued as this is my first fic on seaponies im excited for this thumb and tracking do no dissapoint (^w^)v

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Dude. Excited level- indescribable.

Need more.

Nao.

this in an incredible intro!

Regardless of comment responses, color me intrigued by your premise, and I can't wait for Twi to stumble upon him while he's gathering pearls.

>>12086711208671

Wat.

>>12086331208633

Let me give my best guess as to his troll response.

Sorry Im rtoo astoopehd fer life.

He mustve liked it, so it had jaun ewr juan b4 pobnies viewd ed

Sorry I'm too stupid for life.

He[the author] must've liked it, so it had one more thumb[s up] before ponies viewed it.

Well, my life has been made. If you need me, I will be drowning my sorrows in food.

New Kody fic? With me and Twilee being shipped?

Awkward moment when myself and Twilight Sparkle have almost identical personalities.

"Just wait you'll see, Someday i'll bee... part of your woorrrlllddd!" Yeah, just remember that forks are not combs now.

But in all seriousness. this is very intresting!haven't seen many stroies with Seaponies, I"ll be looking foward to see where you go with this!

Apreantly the seaponies call on YOU when they're in distress.

SHOOO- BE DOO!

No words can express how happy I am now

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boom

I think I'll watch this... Just because I like it.

Be proud. I haven't been much of a reader on this site since my tech endeavors, but your story has captured my attention.

moar please? this is bucking AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

I'm sure it's unintended, and you may not have even read it, but this feels very similar to a sea pony x Rarity fic that's out there. Not that that's a bad thing, I'm looking forward to seeing more.

>>12100481210048

I actually have read that one. Truth be told, I was planning the romantic party in this story to be Rarity at first. I swapped it in favor of Twilight, not only to avoid the idea that I was copying, but I just thought out a better storyline for Twily.

>>12091371209137 My story included seaponies, too. They just weren't featured characters. I feel sad that nobody was excited about seaponies when they read me. Perhaps I'll feature them in another story down the road.

Here, we have the Kody. Silently making 2nd person fics to appease everyone.

Oi! You!

Make more!

Hm. I havent been tracking new stories for the fact.i have plenty still updating but I will track this.

pardon my ignorance, but what exactly are seaponies? somepony fill me in.

SHOO BE DOO. SHOO SHOO BE DOO.

>>12093571209357

I don't think it's a troll response. I just think he's completely hammered.

>>12100641210064

What's this fic called? Can't seem to find it.

Sounds interesting.

...Not entirely sure how this romance is going to work. Maybe Twilight has a "Give-Legs" spell?

Hmm... This looks interesting...

Well then! Time to go and read all the other ship-fics!

knowing Twilight, she's going to study about what she saw to the bone.

>>12103151210315

does this answer your question?

SHOO BE DOO, SHOO SHOO BE DOO MOTHER FUCKER!

(not you, i just had to say that)

This story, I like it.

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Very excellent writing and such, and I certainly can't wait for more. To be honest, it's the first seapony story I've read, and I'm really liking it.

(Linnaeus for president!)

>>12093571209357

*CLEARS THROAT*

Ahem

Like I isaid im too stoopehd fer life.

I said he may ov liked it b4 submitting it therefore giving an extras like

Whoa, a story about seaponies that I want to read, FANTASTIC!

i'm watching this one. good story.

If Kody wrote it, It gets favourited. Then the shit gets read outta' it. Simple as

>mfw every time a description says it stars me

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+1 Thumbs!

+1 Favorite!

+0 Watcher!

Already watching you.

>>12100991210099 (shrugs) i guess it happens some people get all the luck huh? :P i might give yours a read if you dont mind :3 >>12134531213453 o.0 thats kinda creepy overlord laharl xD

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And Twilight fortunately knows a bit of magic. It's a talent that she always has posessed. And here lately (please don't laugh) she'll use it on behalf of the miserable, gloomy, and depressed. Pathetic.

>>12135581213558 No, I would not mind at all. Wish I didn't have to put my story on Hiatus. Wait, I think I can take it off for a while! YES!!!

interesting. i wonder if there will be ant seaponies in season 3

GIVE ME MOAR

FOR SCIENCE

FOR PONY

LEROY JENKINS

>>12149121214912

FOR DA EMPRAH!

ithinkthatthisisagreatstoryandiwannaseemorewhen'sthenextchapteralsomyspacebarisbroken,aswellasafewotherbuttonssothat'swhyimtypingthisinallonesentence

Looks intresting

What is it with Twilight and water dudes? Does the mare have a wet fetish or something?

Decent start (Little Mermaid with Ponies?...why yes, I will allow this)

Couple really nit-picky things (that I don't usually bother with, but for some reason are really jarring) from the first couple of paragraphs though.  1. Oysters and Scallops are two different things...only one of which has pearls (they both taste good though).  2. Forcing an oyster open to get the pearl, kills the oyster (double check this, I'm not 100% sure), so the description of your main character doing this over and over and he's not even gonna eat them is a little disconcerting.  And 3, I don't think pearls count as "gems"...there's probably a better description you can use somewhere.  Wikipedia is your friend

Other than that, great start and I can't wait to see Ursula

Im loven this so far *Squee* i hope that more comes soon!

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There now you can see ponies as sea ponies

Wow, this is really good. Before the rule about the surface was mentioned I was getting a distinct Wall-E vibe. You know, since there was the pet jellyfish. I look forward to the next chapter.

You toss the oyster to the side and watch it float away to join the pile. A good number of them were laying about next to you, and they all shared at least one quality: they held no pearl.

You had grown to expect that. There was an immeasurably small chance of finding one anyway. Most of these scallops were far too young to bear a gem anyway.

Jesus, they're THAT young!? Oh, well, we're off to a bad start already, aren't we? In a few sentences, I'm already an oyster pedophile. Pry 'em open, look for the 'pearl,' and it's not there. Given a few years, it would develop, but for some disturbing reason, I've decided to go full on Herbert with these babies. No time for oyster 'puberty'! Yuck!

Still, you always held hope. The more you collected, the better.

So, I'm a serial oyster pedo, now. Okay. Gotcha--moving on.

You sigh lightly and decide to call it quits for the day. You had been pearl-hunting for the better part of an hour, and after some time, it gets rather boring.

Until Chris Hansen shows up. Then it gets REAL exciting, folks!

But hey, if your progress was anything to go by, you were doing something right. Back home you had a rather impressive collection. You have seventeen saved up, if you recall correctly.

JESUS TOE-HOPPIN' CHRISTO! Seventeen? I'm not just an oyster pedo, I'm greedy!

Speaking of home, you turn around and begin swimming that direction.

Well, at least I'm athletic.

Waving your tail, you begin to move your body through the ocean water, heading for familiar territory.

Warning: Partaking in oysterphilia may result in genetic mutation leading to the growth of extra limbs. The Surgeon General does not recommend use for any person under the age of 12.

This part of the seafloor was rather barren. Most of it was just rocks and sand. You saw a few coral structures here and there, but none of it was that impressive. The majority of them were dead or dying, so this area was rather depressing. You weren't out here to observe the serenity and beauty of the area though, so it didn't really make a difference to you.

I was there to observe the serenity and beauty of glistening oyster gals' pearls, but that area was also rather depressing. It's a hard life for an oysterphile, friends.

You continue swimming, the satchel around your shoulder waving to and fro with your movement. It was currently empty, as your searching today failed to yield any fruit. It was the general outcome of these little excursions, but every now and then, you would hit just one pearl.

Wait, wait, hold on a minute--am I after fruit, pearls, or underage clams? I'm just a tad confused, here.

After having had to relocate after an infestation of lobsters in your previous home, you had scouted out a new location to live in.

Hey, man, I get it--when a minority family moves in, the property value goes waaaay down. Effin' redbacks! GO BACK TO YOUR OWN COVE, YA BASTARDS!

This one was much closer to the shore than he would have liked, but you didn't mind. It was roomy, had a good flow of currents, and you are rather fond of the shore, much to his dismay.

Who is this 'he'? Does he also like underage oysters? Do we tag-team sometimes? It's good to have friends.

It was your pet jellyfish and good buddy, Linnaeus... You took him under your care and he grew to love you unconditionally. He often accompanied you on pearl-hunts, but you requested to go alone this time.

Someone had to stay home to clean the stains out of the white van, and I'd already had my turn. He knows what's up.

You could slide it into place over your entrance, and it not only blocked anyone from entering, but also was soundproof.

Those young oysters tend to be squealers.

You also had installed a secret compartment to store your pearls in the wall next to your bed.

Like a used panties drawer, or a barrel for all the appendages you cut off your victims, but with pearls. Classier, you know?

Friends...the one thing you would never have.

HEY! Those oysters SWORE they were my best friends forever! Are you... are you saying they lied?

It's how it goes, being a seapony. You can't let anyone know about you. You can't let anyone see you. You can't converse with anyone. It's some stupid rule that has been enforced upon you for years. For as long as you can remember, this is how it had been. Some strange, innate sense of anonymity was required of you.

Only the oysters know my pain.

Why must you be forced to hide? Those called the 'surface dwellers' probably have so much to offer than life down here. Why can't you just speak with them? It's not like they could hunt you down if they didn't take a liking to you. The sea is far more expansive than the land. What was there to fear?

There's no way they could prosecute you on land, anyway. Doesn't matter how many oysters testified. A buddy told me for sure, "Those charges NEVER stick!"

You groan slightly and float off your bed, heading for the main room. Though you often don't want to see him, you knew you had to. Exiting your room, you find the familiar body of the only other seapony you knew.

Only his body, though. I've always wondered what happened to the rest of him... He doesn't like to talk about it. No--no, don't ask. Hold it in.

It was none other than your older brother, Swift. As the only other seapony you know, you had spent your entire life with him. You had lived together, eaten together, and done pretty much everything together.

EVERY. SINGLE. THING.

While you never knew your father (or your mother for that matter), he had apparently left Swift in charge.

And that, children, is how religion begins.

As you grew older, you began to follow his command less and less. You still loathe the day that he had been put in charge, but you were slowly beginning to rebel against him.

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Truth be told, he doesn't even know about your pearl collecting hobby. It was just one of the things you kept hidden from him.

Bribing all those oysters was no easy feat. Coincidentally, that's also how you maintain a religion. (In case you were wondering.)

Annoying wretch, you think coldly.

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You flail your fins in an attempt to get a rather pesky school of fish away from you. They had taken a liking to you, for whatever reason, and had followed you for a good distance as you made your way to the shoreline.

They can always smell the oysters. That sweet, sweet oyster stank...

"Hey! Look!" You point a fin towards the shelled creature. "Sea turtle!"

At the uttering of the creatures presence, every fish in the group suddenly turns towards the turtle. After a moment of observance, they all simultaneously swim for it, bombarding it.

You couldn't help but feel a little bad. But hey, better the turtle than you, right?

Once again, minorities are there to use as distractions and scapegoats. Never forget, children.

This city, which is called New Orreins

(said the Asian man.)

Looking back to the shore, you get a better inspection. The sand on the beach looked as though it hadn't been disturbed too much. Perhaps today was just a slower day for the beach. The pier was also barren. All of the stalls and shops set up on it were closed up. It was a bit depressing to you.

A lot of stuff is depressing today, it seems.

Her coat was also a shade of purple. Not as dark as her mane, but not exactly bright either. Her tail was practically the same as her mane. Her eyes were, big surprise, purple as well. For some reason, the entire color scheme of her body was just...alluring to you.

Like the purplish, pink-tinged inner organs of an underage oyster..

She was simply laying on the dock, reading peacefully. A calm breeze flows through the area, causing her mane to jostle slightly. You can't find it in yourself to turn away for some reason. She was just so...

Puuuuurpleee

Before you could wonder what she was doing, her horn lights up. Before your very eyes, the bags that were laying next to her begin to glow. You watch in awe as one of the bags opens itself and a small bottle levitates out. Following it was a small white straw, which planted itself in the top. Once it assembled, the bottle set itself next to the mare, and she begins to drink from it.

The way her lips wrapped around that thin, small straw and moved back and forth made my fins tingle, and my own thin, small straw began to rise.

This mare was...she was...

You couldn't find a word for it. Pretty?

Am I... what... What are the oysters going to think?

You shake your head. What are you getting worked up over? You had been observing those land ponies for a long time.

A long, long time.

Still though, you could only imagine what was going through her mind there. Did she notice you're a seapony? What would she think? Did she realize you were staring at her? How long did she notice you? There were so many questions about that one tiny instance that you couldn't stop thinking of.

"Does she work like a clam? Is there a pearl inside?"

Swimming at high speed, you already see your home coming into view. Looking back, you see that no pony was following you...not that you were worried about that, of course.

The erection had already faded, and even while active, it was not a sight to behold.

You swim around front and enter the cave. Floating through, you enter the main room and find Swift just exiting the 'kitchen.'

"Oh, hey!" he says. "Just in time, dinner's ready...."

"I still don't know how we managed to get an electric stove to work underwater, but hey, these are some crispy frickin' seaweed strips!"

"Hey Linnaeus," you say. He squeaks, happy with your return.

You give a small smile. Even though he couldn't properly respond to anything you say, he always seemed to understand what you were feeling. He was kind of a living record for you. You told him pretty much everything about you, and he would give what comfort he could when you needed it.

His lack of a face guaranteed that he would never speak of the evils I perpetuated on the population of oysters. This, you see, is caution to its greatest degree. You must never trust a thing with a face.

"Linnaeus, you'll never guess what happened today." you start. He perks up, eager to hear your words. "I went to the surface again, and I saw somepony. This mare, and....wow."

"My straw! It's rising again! What does it MEAN?"

He raises two of his tentacles and makes a noise. It sounded like he was confused.

"Yeah, I don't know, either. Swift said that Dad said it's an act of evil and I should be ashamed and beat myself for every time it happens, or the Sea Demon will take my soul and use it as a toothbrush, but I think he's just being an ass. Anyway, I forget what I was talking about. Time to go count my pearls!"

And they all lived happily ever after. Except for the two brothers, who committed mutual suicide after realizing they truly were the only seaponies in the entire ocean. The end.

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>>12171451217145 ...

That made me laugh. Seriously.

>>12172301217230

If you were amused by the commentary, please consider donating to the Society for the Prevention of Oyster Ogling and Gross Engagements (SPOOGE). Your donation ensures that young oysters ocean-wide remain unmolested by lonely, horny sea ponies.

I see Twilight Sparkle and Underwater. Somehow, I approve...

Wow I was just thinking about the concept of sea ponies when I saw this in the featured box!  WTF!

A new story by Kody910, and a rather creative Twi-ship? Oh yeah, this is relevant to my interests.

>>12174971217497

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iCo4PL-N6t4

This is what I got in my head

This is a nice story, you get four internets

Honest question here, Where in the heck did this sea pony thing come from? One of the earlier generations?

>>12191381219138

Yeah, in G1, the older version of Applejack falls into some water and gets trapped. The sea ponies rescue her complete with a song and dance routine. It's pretty bad.

But then, people are always thinking about how they'd be if they appeared in G4, with all the improvement FiM had.

There seems to be an insurgence of 2nd-person stories on this site as of late; what's more, and this is the annoying part, it appears that they all involve "you" having to be in love with a pony as a human.  And by "in love," I mean mackin' one.  As a human

Hmph.  Bestiality ain't coo', man.  

But I think I can risk giving this a shot.  It's rated teen, so I assume (ignorantly) that the macking will be at a minimum ...hopefullynonexistantandnotpresentandnothereandstuffpinkieiswatchingyouclopanditmakesfluttershycryandyougottaquititbroniescauseitsbadwhenfluttershycriesandillgetshrillextokilleveryoneifyoudontquititbronies!

mayine- Gah!  I mean...

Never again.  I must never do that ever ever e-quit it- again.

But yeah, apparently, according to the comments, I'm a sea pony.  I'll look past the Romance tag and give it a shot.

Some ponies went to sea sea sea,

To see what they could see see see,

But all that they could see see see

Was the bottom of the deep blue sea sea sea!

>>12134531213453why does every famous book to go, somepony appears in the comments?

>>12210121221012

You make no sense at all.

>>12211351221135you make no sense at all either.

Hnmmm... you know, I've never really read a story that includes sea ponies. I've decided to break that habit and read this one. Considering how easy I am to impress (loljk) I'll prolly like it (notjk)

sea pony eh

Oh, come on, nothing bad could come out of this.

I read this and all I though. *sigh* sir are you familiar with something called Murphy's Law. Because you just invoked its wrath.

>>12174971217497>>12187451218745 I was thinking this...

So much potential...

I haven't started reading it yet but after reading Scorched and Turbulence, I know this one's gonna be great.