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bobdat's Stories (14)

Nightmare to Earth
Nightmare Moon rules the Earth, and the key to defeating her lies in a fateful moon mission.
18,229 words · 764 views · 29 likes · 1 dislikes
Goodnight Sweetie
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Miracle on Ice
Pinkie Pie competes in the Equestrian Ice Skating Championships, but Trixie wants to win.
4,743 words · 202 views · 11 likes · 0 dislikes
Dashie and Brushie
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Apple Bloom's Day Off
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War of the Roses
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100 Not Out
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Falling For Our Stars
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Brushes and Bouquets
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Hitmare by bobdat

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A hitmare is paid millions of bits to kill the mane six. She travels to Ponyville and carefully plans it out, before carefully carrying it out. But one pony in particular proves to be a serious problem, and refuses to go quietly.

(There are some gory parts but nothing too bad, so it's not quite as bad as an M-rating.)

A one-shot I did just because.

First Published
28th Aug 2012

Last Modified
28th Aug 2012

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Rattlehead

#1 · 38w, 22h ago ·

I'm not gonna read it because the very concept of it promised it to be a comedy.

Disappointment becomes me. :ajbemused:

MIKEANTHONY321

#2 · 38w, 21h ago ·

Yay, first comment! Very good story, it reminds me of Assassin's Creed! :pinkiehappy:

Good thing Glory Hider got what she deserved. :eeyup:

bobdat

#3 · 38w, 20h ago ·

>>11755401175540

I can only apologise.

bobdat

#4 · 38w, 20h ago ·

>>11757301175730

I've never played Assassin's Creed (I stopped buying computer games somewhere around Spyro Year of the Dragon), but thank you :twilightsmile:

tnuyum

#5 · 38w, 20h ago ·

For the record, there is a "Mane 6" tag.

Nightmare Moons

#6 · 38w, 19h ago ·

It was a great story and I enjoyed it, only there were a couple errors and I did not understand the ending. There were two correct, but did Glory die in both?

bobdat

#7 · 38w, 19h ago ·

>>11760531176053

As usual, I discovered this moments after clicking to submit it. :P

>>11761901176190

I wrote it in one evening and didn't edit it particularly thoroughly. If you can remember the errors and want to pinpoint them, I'll fix them. And yes, she does die in both. The intended ending is the first - the second is a James Bond reference that came to me whilst I was writing.

MIKEANTHONY321