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Her first day

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A small young filly has been the chance of a lifetime, and this is her first day. How does she handle it all, and take it?

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Mr Ignorable

Mr Ignorable #1 · Aug 28th, 2012 · · ·

See's title.

Well this couldn't be so bad. The description's nice. I'll just open this up and-AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH.

But in all honesty, it's a perfectly okay read. All you need to do is double space the paragraphs. One last note, this might turn into a decent fic if you continue it.

Prof Yana

Prof Yana #2 · Aug 28th, 2012 · · ·

1175562 I agree with everything you just said. It really is a pretty good fic. You should continue it, I would read it.

broniefrom93

broniefrom93 #3 · Aug 28th, 2012 · · ·

1175681>>1175562 Thanks, and i kinda wanted to be a small short story. I just recently started college so i dont have a lot of time to write. or at least not as much as i would like. I will probably take some time to go over it and space it. I just feel like someone needed to talk about her first day. I also wanted to challenge myself by not using any names. thanks for the words though! spread the word about it!