I am interested in this. I would like more.

Made for each other?  It certainly seems so.  (Then again, how often is everything as it seems?)  Sign me up for this ride.

>>11738711173871 Well I am nothing if not a crowd pleaser, so you can expect some more soon. Glad that you liked it.

silver quill no one gets bored when pinkie pie is in town

ITS PONYVILLE I CALLED IT

For some reason, a good portion of this chapter was cut out when I uploaded it. If you found the entrance of the exam to be confusing, rest assured that it makes much more sense now. I also corrected a few other various errors.

You need to work on your grammar. One of your biggest problems so far is that you keep on forgetting to put quotation marks around dialogue.

>>11834181183418 Thanks a bunch for the input. This is the first time in a long while that I've done creative writing just for the hell of it, as you can probably tell by the quality, so I'm not completely used to needing to use quotations. I looked through and fixed what errors I could find.

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Happy to help.

Really enjoying your depiction of Luna, can totally see her as being a musician. Keep up the good work.

More please.

I CLAIM THE ALMIGHTY FIRS- 'gets hauled off in black van'

Luna your matchmaker i knew why she wanted him to go to ponyville  

Luna is kind of trollestia but Luna

Okay, I gotta use this.

also, first.

Yaaaay! He finally meets her!

But now I have to wait for ANOTHER chapter...

>>12293671229367 TrolLuna?

Okay,so you have anuff detail in the story and the plots good. The only problem i have with it is his casual relationship with princess Luna. I get that it's casual, but shes the Princess. Have him studder when trying to just say Luna. Or when hes talking to Applejack have him refer to her as Princess Luna. Just a suggestion. All in all a good story, keep it up.

Silly, obviously "Baking is like science for hungry ponies came from Pinkie herself!

There were a few grammar errors in there. Only small ones though. Good job.

I have to agree with >>13762291376229 but nothing much to complain about

Awesome new chapter.

Huzzah! Another well-written and well-developed fic to read!

Love it so far!

Awwww, it's getting really cute between Silver and Twilight!

I really like the way you write, and I'm really enjoying this fic so far.

another great chapter

the romance is coming into view!

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>>15689871568987

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Am I doing the romance part of this right? I can't help but shake the feeling that something is missing, or that I'm not going about this the way that I should. I'm just wondering if there's anything that doesn't sit well with the readers.

>>15698711569871 well if there is i can't find anything, try a chapter from Twilight's point of view.

>>15698711569871 I think that you're doing the romance part very well at the moment. I particularly liked the bit with Twilight's eyes, and the way Twilight might feel the same way for Silver. Don't think that you're doing anything wrong, cos I don't think you are!

yay~ great job

(and might i just say my OC is an author )

Oh wow. Im early. Great chapter though .

Awkward...

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*cough*

very.

>>17085961708596

Meh. I don't mind if you don't. Good story so far.

Why does this story only have 34 likes, it deserves sooo much more...

Cant wait for the next chapter!

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great work

My powers of clarvoyance tell me that a future chapter will involve a conversation with Rarity on the subject of love brought on by Silver's emotional confusion.

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OI!

I'm the one writing this fic, not you! Don't be spoilin n' shit!

(You're half right)

>>17291051729105 Which half?

>>17291181729118

Oh, wouldn't you like to know? Just gonna have to speculate like everyone else I'm afraid.

" it almost sounded to Silver that she considered it to be the worst possible thing to happen to somepony."

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Great chapter!

I love this story

“Que?”

It wasn’t every day someone said something that stopped Silver right in his tracks. Heck, it wasn’t even every year. But as Luna as his witness, Spike had done just that.

i think you changed to another idiom there

UGH! I can't believe the guy still dosen't get it even after it's spelled out for him and served to him on a silver platter. I realize guys have skulls harder than diamond (myself included), but even I would've figured it out by now. And I'm pretty sure I'm nowhere near as smart as Silver. Don't take this the wrong way. I love the story and I like Silver as a character. I just really hate it when people act stupid. IT DRIVES ME CRAZY!

Watch your back Silver Quill, everypony is conspiring to 'throw you in for a loop'.

Excellent story

Although I think that Silver seems to be a bit too well balanced, I really like the story. I hope for new chapters soon, and since I don't quite yet understand how to watch or follow a story, here's a favorite.

Huzzah! A new chapter!

And things progressing quite well. You've paced the character and plot very reasonably, not like other 'first-love-at-sight and BAM date...' sort of things.

Only thing I noticed:

"out note, deep and throaty, mad itself known to him."

*made ?

Great chapter! I especially enjoy the emotional introspective moments, showing that the character doesn't really understand what's going on.

YAY

That ending is pretty good. Normally, Twilight wouldn't be caught dead saying something like that. And what's this, did Silver smile, like,  a big smile? Oh, Luna, look what you've started!

I predict more cuteness at the cost of more awkwardness as each character decides what exactly this 'date' means.

Great work.

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Had to try 3 times to get the right image working.

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I'm gonna be honest, I pulled that part straight outta my ass as I was writing. I typed it without realizing it and just decided that it would give a nice feel to the ending.

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Thanks for pointing that out to me. I was very careful to introduce the romance very slowly and subtly, so I'm glad it shows.

>>19051671905167

No problem! The pacing is very apparent.

I just had to un-fav a fic because in one chapter it went from

'hmm. I kinda like him...haven't really chatted that much with him. Maybe I'll get to know him more.'

to face-eating make out/I love you.

So your fic is quite refreshing ^_^

(Joke) Alt. Title: Librarian Filly: Hata Hivyo Mwingine Romance Kwa OCs

Show, don't tell!

a moustache of approval for taking things slow!

aka. realistically.

Luna be pervin' on Silver's dreams.

Princess Luna!

Good stuff.

It feels like your trying to hard to make up reasons that they love each other though. Love is love it really doesn't matter how similar or different a couple is or even what their interests and values are.

Anyway hopefully we finally get to know what that dream is all about.  

Just discovered this fic and read through everything so far in one sitting, absolutely loving it. Certainly the best I've read as of recently, I only wish I had discovered it earlier. Keep up the great work

So Silver's mom knew Cave Johnson?

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Yeeesss...?

With the Lemons!

Always figured Luna for a rather "nasty" humor streak. She'd fit in well with my family lol.

The poor sucker has it bad ^_^

Wondered how long it'd take for Luna to dream walk on him.

Those two (twilight and silver) have a d'aww factor going, but someone needs to make a move soon! (Nightmare night maybe? I suspect it has something to do with twi's costume)

Damn cliffhanger, nice touch with the light being a pale lavender now though.

And I'm not finding the grammar and spelling mistakes like I was in the first couple chapters. I'm kinda surprised by how much I'm liking this fic

so far, the only thing I've found in error is just a little bit of grammar errors every so often. if you don't have a pre-reader, just go back through the story again and see if you can catch yourself on those. Other than that, the story is excellent and very well-paced.

>>15698711569871 don't worry friend, I have this idea for a romance story between an OC of mine and one of the elements of harmony... but I still don't feel confidant about if I have her personality mentally pictured enough. you're doing a great job though, and I'm incredibly interested as to how this story will turn out.

The "Baking" quote comes from the author of the webcomic "Questionable Content". Or Wil Wheaton, they've both used it.

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should have known there was a Portal ref. Is that becoming a pre-req for Bronies now, we gotta play Portal?

>>22894072289407 I don't make the rules, I only follow them.

>>22867272286727 Half the reason I started writing this was so that I could start trying to improve my writing skills while the other half was so that I could give something back to the community that provided me so much entertainment. I'm glad that you noticed improvement!

>>22874392287439 Yeah, I'm really crappy at catching grammatical mistakes. It's really bloody hard to edit your own work.

I'm really loving this fanfic so far, this chapter was just... GAH! adorable!!

I gonna give you a brohoof, another awesome Portal 2 fan.

Let's see what he will find next chapter!

Woot it's my lucky day, lots of people are updating! (After finals for everyone maybe?)

Glad to see this is still going ^_^

What do you suppose Rare will do once her sis starts dating? I can't see her being as eager for the gossip XD

Interesting that Silver's writing came back to him the night after he deals with the nightmares.

"I’ve had a weak to get my head"

Week, methinks?

Awesome chapter! ^_^

Yay update! Complete with the obligatory Murphy generated error [I’ve had a (weak) to get my head in]  (week) maybe?

Good story I like the way you are handling this.

This story only gets better and better

it remembered me of this

and this

>>25020832502083 she wont need gossip. Pinkie, Twilight and Fluttershy aren't the only ones that have spying gear

I'm trying to keep my manly self from Squee-ing at this story... I find it incredibly entertaining and very well-written.

My eye twitched just now, hate gossips like Rarity.

I feel stupid, but I just realized that Luna's song 'Starlight Sonata' from chapter 2 was a reference to 'Moonlight Sonata' by

E. S. Prometheus